Comments received on poems by Blue Poet
My muse
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant!
🍻
\'la vida loca!\'
till, our responsibilities
take over...
June 11th, 2021 04:20
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant!
🍻
\'la vida loca!\'
till, our responsibilities
take over...
June 11th, 2021 04:20
My muse
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Blue Orchid and a very intriguing Muse. In our lives we must seize both day and night as all are so special.
Andy
June 11th, 2021 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Blue Orchid and a very intriguing Muse. In our lives we must seize both day and night as all are so special.
Andy
June 11th, 2021 00:18
I don\'t mind if i do
L. B. Mek said:
\'To be in your life much more than a guest\'
and that\'s where it always starts...
A sublime write
really liked the diversely distinct voices you utilised
to accentuate the many shades of attraction or romance
as we know it,
A great read
(if you ever wish to edit this great write
you may find
an intimately vulnerable
tenderly nuanced crescendo, as a last segment
may work well
as a counter to your great idiomatic observations..
just a thought, dear poet
and I\'m really sorry, if you think
my suggestion is rude)
June 10th, 2021 03:22
L. B. Mek said:
\'To be in your life much more than a guest\'
and that\'s where it always starts...
A sublime write
really liked the diversely distinct voices you utilised
to accentuate the many shades of attraction or romance
as we know it,
A great read
(if you ever wish to edit this great write
you may find
an intimately vulnerable
tenderly nuanced crescendo, as a last segment
may work well
as a counter to your great idiomatic observations..
just a thought, dear poet
and I\'m really sorry, if you think
my suggestion is rude)
June 10th, 2021 03:22
Players win and winners play
L. B. Mek said:
\'while a ghost of a hope is slowly dying
come find me again
I\'ll be waiting in a sinner\'s den
down the street
drinking my drink and smoking my weed
passing the time
till you come around
to find me here all alone
waiting for you all along\'..
if this is you at 22, well
your potential is outright terrifying, dear poet
thank you for choosing to share
(remember, when you come to those crossroads
try, to choose your freedom of Creative Artistry
above all else
and strive to find acceptance, in whatever
fate rewards you for your endeavours;
\'aim for the moon!
while enjoying the view
from those accessible rooftops
on your journey\')
June 8th, 2021 06:30
L. B. Mek said:
\'while a ghost of a hope is slowly dying
come find me again
I\'ll be waiting in a sinner\'s den
down the street
drinking my drink and smoking my weed
passing the time
till you come around
to find me here all alone
waiting for you all along\'..
if this is you at 22, well
your potential is outright terrifying, dear poet
thank you for choosing to share
(remember, when you come to those crossroads
try, to choose your freedom of Creative Artistry
above all else
and strive to find acceptance, in whatever
fate rewards you for your endeavours;
\'aim for the moon!
while enjoying the view
from those accessible rooftops
on your journey\')
June 8th, 2021 06:30
Laughing without smiling
L. B. Mek said:
I was going to highlight some choice lines
to exemplify your artistry
and tireless reediting\'s: fruits
of seamlessly perfected natural flow, but
there were far too many
better, if I instead implore people
to just read every word and every line
again and again, until it hits home
what a talented poet
we have been gifted, the privilege to read..
(although, it will be reminisce of me
to not mention, that if you so graphically
infer to such impactful subjects and topics
it might be more thoughtful and aware
to help those with more impressionable minds
with an age restriction warning
but, that\'s just my opinionated 2 cents
you do what what you think is best, dear poet)
thanks for choosing to share!
June 7th, 2021 04:56
L. B. Mek said:
I was going to highlight some choice lines
to exemplify your artistry
and tireless reediting\'s: fruits
of seamlessly perfected natural flow, but
there were far too many
better, if I instead implore people
to just read every word and every line
again and again, until it hits home
what a talented poet
we have been gifted, the privilege to read..
(although, it will be reminisce of me
to not mention, that if you so graphically
infer to such impactful subjects and topics
it might be more thoughtful and aware
to help those with more impressionable minds
with an age restriction warning
but, that\'s just my opinionated 2 cents
you do what what you think is best, dear poet)
thanks for choosing to share!
June 7th, 2021 04:56
The Bluest blue there is
rebmasters said:
Wonderful words. Have you ever read \'Bluets\' by Maggie Nelson? It\'s a beautiful, poetic book that\'s so unique. She talks of the despair of depression and the end of a relationship, but it\'s all interspersed with her fascination with, and love of, the colour blue. It\'s an incredible book and your poem reminds me of it. Negotiating love is so difficult, but your words are very true. It\'s painful but we do it anyway cause it\'s worth it. Anyway, sorry for the essay - great poem!
June 7th, 2021 03:17
rebmasters said:
Wonderful words. Have you ever read \'Bluets\' by Maggie Nelson? It\'s a beautiful, poetic book that\'s so unique. She talks of the despair of depression and the end of a relationship, but it\'s all interspersed with her fascination with, and love of, the colour blue. It\'s an incredible book and your poem reminds me of it. Negotiating love is so difficult, but your words are very true. It\'s painful but we do it anyway cause it\'s worth it. Anyway, sorry for the essay - great poem!
June 7th, 2021 03:17
Writing
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words BP, I think we poets all write in this way, with the page before us and the pen in our hand our lives are bled onto the page.
Welcome to MPS.
June 6th, 2021 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words BP, I think we poets all write in this way, with the page before us and the pen in our hand our lives are bled onto the page.
Welcome to MPS.
June 6th, 2021 01:37
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