Comments received on poems by Blue Poet
Subway thoughts
2781 said:
It\'s like giving colourful beads to natives, except we pay for their rubbish.
April 22nd, 2023 07:00
2781 said:
It\'s like giving colourful beads to natives, except we pay for their rubbish.
April 22nd, 2023 07:00
Breaking ice
L. B. Mek said:
a Great read!
love the way you flaunt your talent so confidently,
end rhymes, internal rhyming
off-beat melodic flow
purposed, free verse poetry!
a wonderful poetic treat,
thanks for sharing, dear poet
October 12th, 2021 04:08
L. B. Mek said:
a Great read!
love the way you flaunt your talent so confidently,
end rhymes, internal rhyming
off-beat melodic flow
purposed, free verse poetry!
a wonderful poetic treat,
thanks for sharing, dear poet
October 12th, 2021 04:08
And yet...
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A great writing but so much sadness ....
October 11th, 2021 16:30
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A great writing but so much sadness ....
October 11th, 2021 16:30
Not the best ad
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'I live my life on a paper
It didn\'t matter if i didn\'t write about it later
And being with you is something i write about in advance
That\'s how badly i want it - if that makes any sense\'
(keep striving and growing, dear poet
it\'s a privilege to share in your poetic journey)
August 26th, 2021 03:26
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'I live my life on a paper
It didn\'t matter if i didn\'t write about it later
And being with you is something i write about in advance
That\'s how badly i want it - if that makes any sense\'
(keep striving and growing, dear poet
it\'s a privilege to share in your poetic journey)
August 26th, 2021 03:26
You\'ll be her and i\'ll be him
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great read ! I love this ... very engaging to read too ))
August 16th, 2021 12:42
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great read ! I love this ... very engaging to read too ))
August 16th, 2021 12:42
You\'ll be her and i\'ll be him
dusk arising said:
Got to admit that I don\'t know half of the characters you named in your poem today. But what the heck, didn\'t matter one jot cos I found it an enjoyable fun read. And hats off to you for that because I usually get bored in lengthy love poems.
Good fun read and I hope your budding offer of devotion is returned in full.
August 16th, 2021 10:58
dusk arising said:
Got to admit that I don\'t know half of the characters you named in your poem today. But what the heck, didn\'t matter one jot cos I found it an enjoyable fun read. And hats off to you for that because I usually get bored in lengthy love poems.
Good fun read and I hope your budding offer of devotion is returned in full.
August 16th, 2021 10:58
Nameless girl
L. B. Mek said:
\'Blood red lips
Raging against pale white skin
Dressed for elegant apocalypse
Embodiment of the sweetness of a sin
Greatest weapons of hers were her eyes\'..
now this is what I call poetically worded
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 15th, 2021 06:38
L. B. Mek said:
\'Blood red lips
Raging against pale white skin
Dressed for elegant apocalypse
Embodiment of the sweetness of a sin
Greatest weapons of hers were her eyes\'..
now this is what I call poetically worded
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 15th, 2021 06:38
Whatever
germanamericanchurch said:
Very nice the, dream to now we drink is a fitting to a lost future,
Now where does the psychedelic sacrament fit in ? Mom would be proud ? Or Granpa shaman too?
June 30th, 2021 16:30
germanamericanchurch said:
Very nice the, dream to now we drink is a fitting to a lost future,
Now where does the psychedelic sacrament fit in ? Mom would be proud ? Or Granpa shaman too?
June 30th, 2021 16:30
The sweetness of the pain
L. B. Mek said:
\'That kind of girl
who takes your life
and makes it art\'
\'The wisdom comes
from living
while a part of you dies\'..
you\'re such a gifted poet, in my humble opinion
thank you for sharing your talent
June 29th, 2021 05:18
L. B. Mek said:
\'That kind of girl
who takes your life
and makes it art\'
\'The wisdom comes
from living
while a part of you dies\'..
you\'re such a gifted poet, in my humble opinion
thank you for sharing your talent
June 29th, 2021 05:18
Safe harbor
L. B. Mek said:
\'And even though i would love to be her prince in shining armor
I am happy for my role of safe harbor\'..
yeah, I relate so well with your take
on true friendship\'s precarious: footing
sometimes, being friend-zoned
can truly be a blessing!
... yet, equally - sadly
it can also be, an unbearable proximity
of unattainable love\'s: heart-breaking cruelty...
June 28th, 2021 07:02
L. B. Mek said:
\'And even though i would love to be her prince in shining armor
I am happy for my role of safe harbor\'..
yeah, I relate so well with your take
on true friendship\'s precarious: footing
sometimes, being friend-zoned
can truly be a blessing!
... yet, equally - sadly
it can also be, an unbearable proximity
of unattainable love\'s: heart-breaking cruelty...
June 28th, 2021 07:02
Safe harbor
Goldfinch60 said:
Being that \'safe harbour\' is a great place to be. I am also that harbour for my friends.
Andy
June 28th, 2021 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Being that \'safe harbour\' is a great place to be. I am also that harbour for my friends.
Andy
June 28th, 2021 00:35
Safe harbor
Blue Poet said:
i mean who am i kidding here...i just try to make the most out of being in friendzone in the only way i know how...writing
June 27th, 2021 17:03
Blue Poet said:
i mean who am i kidding here...i just try to make the most out of being in friendzone in the only way i know how...writing
June 27th, 2021 17:03
Safe harbor
dusk arising said:
Yep, I know ladies in this way too. But it does require discipline.
June 27th, 2021 14:59
dusk arising said:
Yep, I know ladies in this way too. But it does require discipline.
June 27th, 2021 14:59
Let the sleeping dogs lie
L. B. Mek said:
\'For so long i\'ve been trying to slove this riddle
Which most of the time feels like utter nonsense\'..
clever wordplay, stutter
and I especially like
how you made the whole experience, a journey
of discovery, while depicting
that poetic journey of self-discovery
brilliantly executed!
in my humble opinion
June 24th, 2021 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'For so long i\'ve been trying to slove this riddle
Which most of the time feels like utter nonsense\'..
clever wordplay, stutter
and I especially like
how you made the whole experience, a journey
of discovery, while depicting
that poetic journey of self-discovery
brilliantly executed!
in my humble opinion
June 24th, 2021 04:46
Medieval self discovery
Saxon Crow said:
Poetry is the only real therapy and the only escape. For me , you\'ve encapsulated that brilliantly
June 16th, 2021 02:08
Saxon Crow said:
Poetry is the only real therapy and the only escape. For me , you\'ve encapsulated that brilliantly
June 16th, 2021 02:08
Medieval self discovery
dusk arising said:
Join the club. That\'s exactly what most of us are doing. But I\'m sure you already knew that.
June 16th, 2021 00:40
dusk arising said:
Join the club. That\'s exactly what most of us are doing. But I\'m sure you already knew that.
June 16th, 2021 00:40
The dopest drug
dusk arising said:
Hmm many truths herein but hey lets blame this flippin pandemic for closing the \"normal\" throttle on our lives at the moment.
Though we may never reach the days, there is promise ahead and should we ever lose hope, then let us hope for the lives of infants. The future IS theirs after all.
June 15th, 2021 11:11
dusk arising said:
Hmm many truths herein but hey lets blame this flippin pandemic for closing the \"normal\" throttle on our lives at the moment.
Though we may never reach the days, there is promise ahead and should we ever lose hope, then let us hope for the lives of infants. The future IS theirs after all.
June 15th, 2021 11:11
The party at the end of the world
Mr. Nigma said:
I found this piece funnier than I figured the end of the world would be. I love it.
June 14th, 2021 07:32
Mr. Nigma said:
I found this piece funnier than I figured the end of the world would be. I love it.
June 14th, 2021 07:32
The party at the end of the world
dusk arising said:
Whatever will be
is beyond you and me
and if those questions which arise
place tears in your eyes
theres a finer place ones mind could be
let it be, let it be, let it be
June 14th, 2021 06:59
dusk arising said:
Whatever will be
is beyond you and me
and if those questions which arise
place tears in your eyes
theres a finer place ones mind could be
let it be, let it be, let it be
June 14th, 2021 06:59
The party at the end of the world
Saxon Crow said:
I\'d sit at peace and smile,
knowing that the world will be alright
This virus this plague will be finally cured
The true Nature of humanity finalky restored
And those that are left, the lucky few
Will find Eden reborn, alive and new
June 14th, 2021 05:49
Saxon Crow said:
I\'d sit at peace and smile,
knowing that the world will be alright
This virus this plague will be finally cured
The true Nature of humanity finalky restored
And those that are left, the lucky few
Will find Eden reborn, alive and new
June 14th, 2021 05:49
A deed lower than low
L. B. Mek said:
\'I walk in a twisted places
Where light is a stranger
Those long intricate mazes
Where each turn poses a danger\'
\'And that is what feeds the darkness
Inside those labyrinths of a mind hardly sane
To know that for the latest bit of my sadness
I have only myself to blame\'
\'But for unclear reason and despite all the caused sadness
She still acts friendly
Probably thanks to her kindness
Even though if you ask her she\'ll deny to have any\'
I pity those, who will never get to realise
your wondrous talent, dear poet
keep growing and enjoying every syllable
of your Poetic journey,
I\'ll be looking up
to witness your arrival: at Poetry\'s summit
one day: soon, hopefully
but gradually
so you may treasure your achievement: with humility
June 14th, 2021 05:16
L. B. Mek said:
\'I walk in a twisted places
Where light is a stranger
Those long intricate mazes
Where each turn poses a danger\'
\'And that is what feeds the darkness
Inside those labyrinths of a mind hardly sane
To know that for the latest bit of my sadness
I have only myself to blame\'
\'But for unclear reason and despite all the caused sadness
She still acts friendly
Probably thanks to her kindness
Even though if you ask her she\'ll deny to have any\'
I pity those, who will never get to realise
your wondrous talent, dear poet
keep growing and enjoying every syllable
of your Poetic journey,
I\'ll be looking up
to witness your arrival: at Poetry\'s summit
one day: soon, hopefully
but gradually
so you may treasure your achievement: with humility
June 14th, 2021 05:16
A deed lower than low
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words BP but you have come out of it as a stronger person and the future will be so much better.
Andy
June 14th, 2021 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words BP but you have come out of it as a stronger person and the future will be so much better.
Andy
June 14th, 2021 00:38
A deed lower than low
Accidental Poet said:
Everyone makes mistakes BP, everyone. Don\'t be so hard on yourself. This is well penned. ; )
June 13th, 2021 10:20
Accidental Poet said:
Everyone makes mistakes BP, everyone. Don\'t be so hard on yourself. This is well penned. ; )
June 13th, 2021 10:20
The death of first love
Goldfinch60 said:
\"And in the end i am grateful
Because while she never did what i wanted
She always did what i needed \"
Such powerful and resolute words BP.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
\"And in the end i am grateful
Because while she never did what i wanted
She always did what i needed \"
Such powerful and resolute words BP.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 01:05
The death of first love
Accidental Poet said:
When one can measure out the pros and cons of love and end up with a positive outlook, the one knows it was worthwhile. Excellent write Blue ; )
June 11th, 2021 20:45
Accidental Poet said:
When one can measure out the pros and cons of love and end up with a positive outlook, the one knows it was worthwhile. Excellent write Blue ; )
June 11th, 2021 20:45
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