Comments received on poems by James Michael
Gates
arqios said:
Been careless most of my days, but for His mercy and blood bought grace.
January 13th, 2025 07:12
arqios said:
Been careless most of my days, but for His mercy and blood bought grace.
January 13th, 2025 07:12
Seeking
arqios said:
A very apt spiritual allegory, and a mirror reflection at times.
January 3rd, 2025 18:43
arqios said:
A very apt spiritual allegory, and a mirror reflection at times.
January 3rd, 2025 18:43
Prayer for Guidance
Poetic Licence said:
We need a decent leader from somewhere, enjoyed the read
December 23rd, 2024 02:45
Poetic Licence said:
We need a decent leader from somewhere, enjoyed the read
December 23rd, 2024 02:45
Meaning of Life
sorenbarrett said:
Close to a record for the shortest poem but with meaning as well. You are right.
July 26th, 2024 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
Close to a record for the shortest poem but with meaning as well. You are right.
July 26th, 2024 05:44
Maxim
James Michael said:
Woops, that’s been said before. Oh well, worth saying a million times!
June 19th, 2024 19:13
James Michael said:
Woops, that’s been said before. Oh well, worth saying a million times!
June 19th, 2024 19:13
Life’s Journey
orchidee said:
A fiery write JM.
I hope my life doesn\'t leave behind a pile of manure! lol.
I\'m as daring as a GPD. heehee.
June 5th, 2024 02:16
orchidee said:
A fiery write JM.
I hope my life doesn\'t leave behind a pile of manure! lol.
I\'m as daring as a GPD. heehee.
June 5th, 2024 02:16
Light of Life
orchidee said:
Good write JM.
\'Uncreated light\' as a hymn or two says.
We would go mad, thinking of how something or someone could have no beginning. We can imagine something without an end though - like me singing! lol.
June 3rd, 2024 01:29
orchidee said:
Good write JM.
\'Uncreated light\' as a hymn or two says.
We would go mad, thinking of how something or someone could have no beginning. We can imagine something without an end though - like me singing! lol.
June 3rd, 2024 01:29
Cascade
Bobby O said:
“Into ashes of time”, really clever to tap into such an absolute to bring minds and meaning together , and THEN you took
A norm and added more, flutter seizing cascading motion, tactile action , and I swear, this was the closest I’ve come to
Picture ashes blinking like neon lamps colored like a rainbow
January 2nd, 2024 23:53
Bobby O said:
“Into ashes of time”, really clever to tap into such an absolute to bring minds and meaning together , and THEN you took
A norm and added more, flutter seizing cascading motion, tactile action , and I swear, this was the closest I’ve come to
Picture ashes blinking like neon lamps colored like a rainbow
January 2nd, 2024 23:53
Maxim
orchidee said:
Oohh, fount of all wisdom - another wise maxim from you. Those GPD\'s know a few too!
July 12th, 2023 02:15
orchidee said:
Oohh, fount of all wisdom - another wise maxim from you. Those GPD\'s know a few too!
July 12th, 2023 02:15
Maxim
orchidee said:
All is OK, except if our 3 brain cells go on holiday. Doh!
June 21st, 2023 02:18
orchidee said:
All is OK, except if our 3 brain cells go on holiday. Doh!
June 21st, 2023 02:18
Shit does Sink
AuburnScribbler said:
Such an emphatically written simile here James, with human endeavour, on an industrial scale, the world is like a toilet, and I agree, a long awaited flush is in order, to hopefully make the way clearer, and the air smell a bit more bearable.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
June 20th, 2023 09:58
AuburnScribbler said:
Such an emphatically written simile here James, with human endeavour, on an industrial scale, the world is like a toilet, and I agree, a long awaited flush is in order, to hopefully make the way clearer, and the air smell a bit more bearable.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
June 20th, 2023 09:58
Shit does Sink
L. B. Mek said:
I understand and relate, dear poet
but sadly, I fear most people
will interpret your words
as a championing of that fatalistic
nihilism
that looming plague of modernity
sucking what little
we have of life, to cherish n enjoy
..
(but yes, bullshit sinks the best
its just, that it takes time for us
to realise
the sheer abundance of bullshit
all around us)
June 16th, 2023 04:11
L. B. Mek said:
I understand and relate, dear poet
but sadly, I fear most people
will interpret your words
as a championing of that fatalistic
nihilism
that looming plague of modernity
sucking what little
we have of life, to cherish n enjoy
..
(but yes, bullshit sinks the best
its just, that it takes time for us
to realise
the sheer abundance of bullshit
all around us)
June 16th, 2023 04:11
Haiku
L. B. Mek said:
...after, rain
sunrays, dance
on those droplets
of hope...
(thank you, dear poet
love the positive vibes)
June 12th, 2023 03:55
L. B. Mek said:
...after, rain
sunrays, dance
on those droplets
of hope...
(thank you, dear poet
love the positive vibes)
June 12th, 2023 03:55
Divinity in Trinity
orchidee said:
A fine write JM, and for Trinity Sunday! Our GDP\'s say so too!
June 5th, 2023 01:53
orchidee said:
A fine write JM, and for Trinity Sunday! Our GDP\'s say so too!
June 5th, 2023 01:53
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