Comments received on poems by James Michael
Senryu
L. B. Mek said:
maybe, we share that same
obstinate, brain
cos mine too, watches-on
blankly
as other\'s, all around me
morph
tempered, by the weathering
of Time
into carbonised deposits
of wisdom\'s, worth...
(a wonderfully relatable shorty
like how you kept to senryu\'s origins
by matching your topic
to your chosen form and wording, as well)
thanks for sharing
and Happy New Year! dear poet
January 7th, 2022 05:03
L. B. Mek said:
maybe, we share that same
obstinate, brain
cos mine too, watches-on
blankly
as other\'s, all around me
morph
tempered, by the weathering
of Time
into carbonised deposits
of wisdom\'s, worth...
(a wonderfully relatable shorty
like how you kept to senryu\'s origins
by matching your topic
to your chosen form and wording, as well)
thanks for sharing
and Happy New Year! dear poet
January 7th, 2022 05:03
A Prayer (Havasupai tribe)
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully subtle
yet overflowing with sincerity
thanks for sharing
(and this is not accounting
for how much
contextual depth, we lose
in translation)
December 21st, 2021 05:16
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully subtle
yet overflowing with sincerity
thanks for sharing
(and this is not accounting
for how much
contextual depth, we lose
in translation)
December 21st, 2021 05:16
Wind
Paul Bell said:
Everyone has a god out there somewhere. It just seems to be in dire straits time that they call on their god.
December 19th, 2021 06:21
Paul Bell said:
Everyone has a god out there somewhere. It just seems to be in dire straits time that they call on their god.
December 19th, 2021 06:21
T.V.
Lorna said:
It\'s a great place to hide! And it makes a noise when no one else is there and doesn\'t need to be fed.
December 9th, 2021 14:54
Lorna said:
It\'s a great place to hide! And it makes a noise when no one else is there and doesn\'t need to be fed.
December 9th, 2021 14:54
Questioning
Caring dove said:
Nice writing 🙂 sometimes things simply don’t have an answer although we might want one …
November 21st, 2021 15:18
Caring dove said:
Nice writing 🙂 sometimes things simply don’t have an answer although we might want one …
November 21st, 2021 15:18
Questioning
HAPPY FACE said:
James, your thoughts are very penetrating. One with insight can tell that you are a deep thinker, a motivator of action. This, my friend, is the perfect ingredient for the writer. Keep writing. You have much to say. Take care. Be safe. Carmine
November 21st, 2021 15:01
HAPPY FACE said:
James, your thoughts are very penetrating. One with insight can tell that you are a deep thinker, a motivator of action. This, my friend, is the perfect ingredient for the writer. Keep writing. You have much to say. Take care. Be safe. Carmine
November 21st, 2021 15:01
Escape
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful read,
you poetry seems to have captured that oneness with nature, lost: in the moment..
thanks for sharing
November 9th, 2021 05:16
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful read,
you poetry seems to have captured that oneness with nature, lost: in the moment..
thanks for sharing
November 9th, 2021 05:16
Escape
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
A beautifully penned poem which I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing your pen and the unforgettable ride with nature.
Laura🌻
November 8th, 2021 23:16
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
A beautifully penned poem which I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing your pen and the unforgettable ride with nature.
Laura🌻
November 8th, 2021 23:16
Falling
L. B. Mek said:
... \'and when the pain recedes, enough
maybe even dare another: shaky step
towards that - hopeful Next
we\'ve yet, to be let down by\'
imbued great meaning, in such succinct wording! thanks for sharing
October 18th, 2021 06:11
L. B. Mek said:
... \'and when the pain recedes, enough
maybe even dare another: shaky step
towards that - hopeful Next
we\'ve yet, to be let down by\'
imbued great meaning, in such succinct wording! thanks for sharing
October 18th, 2021 06:11
Misunderstood
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Its great of you to highlight and feel for the homeless, hopefully it inspires others fo help them. Kudos for a great compassionate poem.!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
October 13th, 2021 22:36
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Its great of you to highlight and feel for the homeless, hopefully it inspires others fo help them. Kudos for a great compassionate poem.!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
October 13th, 2021 22:36
Misunderstood
Thekkinkkattil said:
Your poem brings out the suffering and the sympathy you feel for them. A nice write
September 29th, 2021 00:47
Thekkinkkattil said:
Your poem brings out the suffering and the sympathy you feel for them. A nice write
September 29th, 2021 00:47
Sign of the Cross
orchidee said:
A fine write Johnny - and on Holy Cross Day (14 Sept), a lesser-known festival day.
September 14th, 2021 01:55
orchidee said:
A fine write Johnny - and on Holy Cross Day (14 Sept), a lesser-known festival day.
September 14th, 2021 01:55
Sign of the Cross
Laura🌻 said:
Johnny FN Lawless,
A very interesting interpretation of the
‘Sign of the Cross’.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
September 13th, 2021 22:11
Laura🌻 said:
Johnny FN Lawless,
A very interesting interpretation of the
‘Sign of the Cross’.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
September 13th, 2021 22:11
Time to Heal
Caring dove said:
Caring writing ... maybe there is hope for nature .... she may heal
September 12th, 2021 12:09
Caring dove said:
Caring writing ... maybe there is hope for nature .... she may heal
September 12th, 2021 12:09
War Song (Pawnee tribe North America)
James Michael said:
This describes my emotions on that day. There are many theories about that event. I for one couldn’t believe it. But there are immense studies to prove that it was real.
Great sadness today in America.
September 11th, 2021 11:03
James Michael said:
This describes my emotions on that day. There are many theories about that event. I for one couldn’t believe it. But there are immense studies to prove that it was real.
Great sadness today in America.
September 11th, 2021 11:03
Time to Heal
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for that J. I may have to follow your daughter if I hope to retain even a shred of optimism.... Possibly earth will survive in some form once it reduces the feral species human to manageable proportions...
September 4th, 2021 17:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for that J. I may have to follow your daughter if I hope to retain even a shred of optimism.... Possibly earth will survive in some form once it reduces the feral species human to manageable proportions...
September 4th, 2021 17:05
Time to Heal
Doggerel Dave said:
Good statement there - clear and unambiguous. Thanks.
Unfortunately we have passed the point of no return (the tipping point)...... would be easy to add \'unfortunately\' at this point - but mass human stupidity lead us here and the voices which could have saved the situation (many but not enough) have been ignored.
September 4th, 2021 00:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Good statement there - clear and unambiguous. Thanks.
Unfortunately we have passed the point of no return (the tipping point)...... would be easy to add \'unfortunately\' at this point - but mass human stupidity lead us here and the voices which could have saved the situation (many but not enough) have been ignored.
September 4th, 2021 00:31
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