Comments received on poems by James Michael
Maxim
sorenbarrett said:
Is that orange man in Ireland or a Florida fruit producer? You have me guessing on this one James
May 19th, 2026 12:10
sorenbarrett said:
Is that orange man in Ireland or a Florida fruit producer? You have me guessing on this one James
May 19th, 2026 12:10
Adultery
sorenbarrett said:
Constructed around seven f words this poem is symbolic as well as powerful in its message. I have seen it cause a lot of destruction
May 18th, 2026 02:28
sorenbarrett said:
Constructed around seven f words this poem is symbolic as well as powerful in its message. I have seen it cause a lot of destruction
May 18th, 2026 02:28
Adultery
orchidee said:
Did they all rush out to buy that Bible with a \'typo\' in it, saying, \'Thou shalt commit adultery\'?! Doh! You know my 18+ poem. Here\'s two lines of it:
Ohhh, F, F, F, and F
And furthermore F, F, F, and double F.....
Tone it down, says Fido to me. lol.
May 18th, 2026 02:21
orchidee said:
Did they all rush out to buy that Bible with a \'typo\' in it, saying, \'Thou shalt commit adultery\'?! Doh! You know my 18+ poem. Here\'s two lines of it:
Ohhh, F, F, F, and F
And furthermore F, F, F, and double F.....
Tone it down, says Fido to me. lol.
May 18th, 2026 02:21
Maxim
sorenbarrett said:
I heartily agree with this short passage. Nicely written with rhyme
April 14th, 2026 19:38
sorenbarrett said:
I heartily agree with this short passage. Nicely written with rhyme
April 14th, 2026 19:38
Senryu
orchidee said:
Good write JM. Why must I use 50 words when 5 will do - sometimes?! lol.
The wide gate is easy, looks nice and cosy, many go through it. But it\'s only the narrow gate and path that leads to life, we know.
I though a Haiku was some sort of sneeze - Hai-choo! lol.
April 13th, 2026 03:07
orchidee said:
Good write JM. Why must I use 50 words when 5 will do - sometimes?! lol.
The wide gate is easy, looks nice and cosy, many go through it. But it\'s only the narrow gate and path that leads to life, we know.
I though a Haiku was some sort of sneeze - Hai-choo! lol.
April 13th, 2026 03:07
Senryu
arqios said:
An excellent read both ways, ascending and descending ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
March 30th, 2026 07:31
arqios said:
An excellent read both ways, ascending and descending ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
March 30th, 2026 07:31
Senryu
sorenbarrett said:
Many will know that this one fits many relationships. Well done
March 29th, 2026 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Many will know that this one fits many relationships. Well done
March 29th, 2026 04:13
Texting Anxiety
Tristan Robert Lange said:
James, I know this feeling tooโฆsending something out and just sitting there with it, hoping it lands somewhere. That pause can say more than any reply. You captured that space clean. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
March 25th, 2026 10:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
James, I know this feeling tooโฆsending something out and just sitting there with it, hoping it lands somewhere. That pause can say more than any reply. You captured that space clean. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
March 25th, 2026 10:26
Texting Anxiety
sorenbarrett said:
Anticipation the best part it is the finding out that can be the problem. Good write
March 24th, 2026 19:06
sorenbarrett said:
Anticipation the best part it is the finding out that can be the problem. Good write
March 24th, 2026 19:06
Hunker Down
sorenbarrett said:
This gives the feel of being adrift on the sea and wandering on land a nomad. Well done
March 15th, 2026 03:23
sorenbarrett said:
This gives the feel of being adrift on the sea and wandering on land a nomad. Well done
March 15th, 2026 03:23
Bliss
sorenbarrett said:
The law of probability says so I agree. Nicely done
February 17th, 2026 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
The law of probability says so I agree. Nicely done
February 17th, 2026 04:28
Going to Sandusky
sorenbarrett said:
Fond memories in this poem about a place and relationship with mother. Nicely pictured in images it calls out with nostalgia. Well done James
January 27th, 2026 02:39
sorenbarrett said:
Fond memories in this poem about a place and relationship with mother. Nicely pictured in images it calls out with nostalgia. Well done James
January 27th, 2026 02:39
Faith and Hope
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of belief and of faith from which grows a sense of religiosity. Well said
November 17th, 2025 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of belief and of faith from which grows a sense of religiosity. Well said
November 17th, 2025 03:36
Shitabyss
orchidee said:
You still standing out of the way of that fan? The one where certain stuff \'hits the fan\'?!
October 28th, 2025 02:28
orchidee said:
You still standing out of the way of that fan? The one where certain stuff \'hits the fan\'?!
October 28th, 2025 02:28
Shitabyss
sorenbarrett said:
A poem where the last line cements the feel. Well done
October 27th, 2025 20:06
sorenbarrett said:
A poem where the last line cements the feel. Well done
October 27th, 2025 20:06
Shitbrella
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and a poem that offers a solution to a problem. Loved it.
October 18th, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and a poem that offers a solution to a problem. Loved it.
October 18th, 2025 03:57
Shitbrella
orchidee said:
Erm, are you sure to face the opposite direction when the s**t hits the fan?! lol.
October 18th, 2025 01:19
orchidee said:
Erm, are you sure to face the opposite direction when the s**t hits the fan?! lol.
October 18th, 2025 01:19
Maxim
orchidee said:
Good write JM. Doh! My maxim, or experience, was somewhat different - When the light is (or \'was\') switched off, I fell down the stairs! Did I, or am I telling porkies? lol.
September 15th, 2025 02:24
orchidee said:
Good write JM. Doh! My maxim, or experience, was somewhat different - When the light is (or \'was\') switched off, I fell down the stairs! Did I, or am I telling porkies? lol.
September 15th, 2025 02:24
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