Comments received on poems by James Michael
Return to Eden
orchidee said:
Good write JM. I\'m reading a bit, if maybe apocryphal (i.e. only partly true, or a complete fable) of how Satan/Lucifer fell from heaven. It says he has wings, as an angel, but used one wing to keep in all his pride and selfishness. So he only had one wing left in the fight against the good angels, and so he and his hosts fell out of heaven. Something like that, anyway.
Meanwhile - somewhat akin to anyone who tries to be \'The Birdman\'? (lol). I still can\'t fly!
October 19th, 2024 02:29
orchidee said:
Good write JM. I\'m reading a bit, if maybe apocryphal (i.e. only partly true, or a complete fable) of how Satan/Lucifer fell from heaven. It says he has wings, as an angel, but used one wing to keep in all his pride and selfishness. So he only had one wing left in the fight against the good angels, and so he and his hosts fell out of heaven. Something like that, anyway.
Meanwhile - somewhat akin to anyone who tries to be \'The Birdman\'? (lol). I still can\'t fly!
October 19th, 2024 02:29
Meaning of Life
sorenbarrett said:
Close to a record for the shortest poem but with meaning as well. You are right.
July 26th, 2024 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
Close to a record for the shortest poem but with meaning as well. You are right.
July 26th, 2024 05:44
Maxim
James Michael said:
Woops, that’s been said before. Oh well, worth saying a million times!
June 19th, 2024 19:13
James Michael said:
Woops, that’s been said before. Oh well, worth saying a million times!
June 19th, 2024 19:13
Life’s Journey
orchidee said:
A fiery write JM.
I hope my life doesn\'t leave behind a pile of manure! lol.
I\'m as daring as a GPD. heehee.
June 5th, 2024 02:16
orchidee said:
A fiery write JM.
I hope my life doesn\'t leave behind a pile of manure! lol.
I\'m as daring as a GPD. heehee.
June 5th, 2024 02:16
Light of Life
orchidee said:
Good write JM.
\'Uncreated light\' as a hymn or two says.
We would go mad, thinking of how something or someone could have no beginning. We can imagine something without an end though - like me singing! lol.
June 3rd, 2024 01:29
orchidee said:
Good write JM.
\'Uncreated light\' as a hymn or two says.
We would go mad, thinking of how something or someone could have no beginning. We can imagine something without an end though - like me singing! lol.
June 3rd, 2024 01:29
Cascade
Bobby O said:
“Into ashes of time”, really clever to tap into such an absolute to bring minds and meaning together , and THEN you took
A norm and added more, flutter seizing cascading motion, tactile action , and I swear, this was the closest I’ve come to
Picture ashes blinking like neon lamps colored like a rainbow
January 2nd, 2024 23:53
Bobby O said:
“Into ashes of time”, really clever to tap into such an absolute to bring minds and meaning together , and THEN you took
A norm and added more, flutter seizing cascading motion, tactile action , and I swear, this was the closest I’ve come to
Picture ashes blinking like neon lamps colored like a rainbow
January 2nd, 2024 23:53
Maxim
orchidee said:
Oohh, fount of all wisdom - another wise maxim from you. Those GPD\'s know a few too!
July 12th, 2023 02:15
orchidee said:
Oohh, fount of all wisdom - another wise maxim from you. Those GPD\'s know a few too!
July 12th, 2023 02:15
Maxim
orchidee said:
All is OK, except if our 3 brain cells go on holiday. Doh!
June 21st, 2023 02:18
orchidee said:
All is OK, except if our 3 brain cells go on holiday. Doh!
June 21st, 2023 02:18
Shit does Sink
AuburnScribbler said:
Such an emphatically written simile here James, with human endeavour, on an industrial scale, the world is like a toilet, and I agree, a long awaited flush is in order, to hopefully make the way clearer, and the air smell a bit more bearable.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
June 20th, 2023 09:58
AuburnScribbler said:
Such an emphatically written simile here James, with human endeavour, on an industrial scale, the world is like a toilet, and I agree, a long awaited flush is in order, to hopefully make the way clearer, and the air smell a bit more bearable.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
June 20th, 2023 09:58
Shit does Sink
L. B. Mek said:
I understand and relate, dear poet
but sadly, I fear most people
will interpret your words
as a championing of that fatalistic
nihilism
that looming plague of modernity
sucking what little
we have of life, to cherish n enjoy
..
(but yes, bullshit sinks the best
its just, that it takes time for us
to realise
the sheer abundance of bullshit
all around us)
June 16th, 2023 04:11
L. B. Mek said:
I understand and relate, dear poet
but sadly, I fear most people
will interpret your words
as a championing of that fatalistic
nihilism
that looming plague of modernity
sucking what little
we have of life, to cherish n enjoy
..
(but yes, bullshit sinks the best
its just, that it takes time for us
to realise
the sheer abundance of bullshit
all around us)
June 16th, 2023 04:11
Haiku
L. B. Mek said:
...after, rain
sunrays, dance
on those droplets
of hope...
(thank you, dear poet
love the positive vibes)
June 12th, 2023 03:55
L. B. Mek said:
...after, rain
sunrays, dance
on those droplets
of hope...
(thank you, dear poet
love the positive vibes)
June 12th, 2023 03:55
Divinity in Trinity
orchidee said:
A fine write JM, and for Trinity Sunday! Our GDP\'s say so too!
June 5th, 2023 01:53
orchidee said:
A fine write JM, and for Trinity Sunday! Our GDP\'s say so too!
June 5th, 2023 01:53
Maxim
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Rhymes can be fun like your own right? Thumbs up.
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
May 26th, 2023 12:33
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Rhymes can be fun like your own right? Thumbs up.
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
May 26th, 2023 12:33
Cycling Stories of Colorado
orchidee said:
Good write JM. I cycled to the Co-op and back! Cue for a poem from me?!
Do you have Co-op shops in USA?
May 23rd, 2023 02:13
orchidee said:
Good write JM. I cycled to the Co-op and back! Cue for a poem from me?!
Do you have Co-op shops in USA?
May 23rd, 2023 02:13
My Beliefs are My Own
orchidee said:
What are the beliefs of GPD dudes? - those furry critters!
May 18th, 2023 01:51
orchidee said:
What are the beliefs of GPD dudes? - those furry critters!
May 18th, 2023 01:51
Rags to Riches
orchidee said:
Somehow the meek (including the poor probably) are going to inherit the earth, though some scoff and say \'How?\' \'You\'re having me on\', \'Surely the rich will inherit it?\' etc.
May 14th, 2023 01:57
orchidee said:
Somehow the meek (including the poor probably) are going to inherit the earth, though some scoff and say \'How?\' \'You\'re having me on\', \'Surely the rich will inherit it?\' etc.
May 14th, 2023 01:57
Kind Eyes
orchidee said:
Being daft - why was it hard to write? Did your pen keep running out of ink?
Do shut up Orchi, says Fido! Show some sensitivity, man, like GPD\'s do, he says. (lol).
May 11th, 2023 01:21
orchidee said:
Being daft - why was it hard to write? Did your pen keep running out of ink?
Do shut up Orchi, says Fido! Show some sensitivity, man, like GPD\'s do, he says. (lol).
May 11th, 2023 01:21
Patriotism
orchidee said:
Good write JM.
I\'m off to the UK Coronation..... I\'m gonna sing there. It will empty the church! lol.
May 6th, 2023 02:07
orchidee said:
Good write JM.
I\'m off to the UK Coronation..... I\'m gonna sing there. It will empty the church! lol.
May 6th, 2023 02:07
A.I.
L. B. Mek said:
lol
we created tools for our demise
priced
as accessible to the herd majority
for a change...
\'job prospects, as
our generational
unicorn, legacy\'
only humanity
lol
May 5th, 2023 04:33
L. B. Mek said:
lol
we created tools for our demise
priced
as accessible to the herd majority
for a change...
\'job prospects, as
our generational
unicorn, legacy\'
only humanity
lol
May 5th, 2023 04:33
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