Comments received on poems by James Michael
Walmart Roach
Tristan Robert Lange said:
James, “land of the damned” made me laugh, but damn, everything leading up to it makes that laugh pretty fucking dark. There’s a whole world behind the blue vest that customers never think about. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 2nd, 2026 11:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
James, “land of the damned” made me laugh, but damn, everything leading up to it makes that laugh pretty fucking dark. There’s a whole world behind the blue vest that customers never think about. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 2nd, 2026 11:14
Walmart Roach
orchidee said:
It\'s the Co-op or similar for us in the UK. lol.
October 2nd, 2026 05:36
orchidee said:
It\'s the Co-op or similar for us in the UK. lol.
October 2nd, 2026 05:36
Walmart Roach
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a tribute to a worker in a dangerous profession and having been to Walmart many times I can see how it could be. I feel that the author may have some personal experience here. Well said.
October 2nd, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a tribute to a worker in a dangerous profession and having been to Walmart many times I can see how it could be. I feel that the author may have some personal experience here. Well said.
October 2nd, 2026 04:09
Walmart Roach
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t understand; is all this a campaign by one of the fashion houses against a lack of sartorial elegance thereabouts?
October 2nd, 2026 00:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t understand; is all this a campaign by one of the fashion houses against a lack of sartorial elegance thereabouts?
October 2nd, 2026 00:23
Perfection?
orchidee said:
Good write JM. Of course, only you and I are prefect. We\'re two GPD\'s. lol.
September 20th, 2026 09:36
orchidee said:
Good write JM. Of course, only you and I are prefect. We\'re two GPD\'s. lol.
September 20th, 2026 09:36
Perfection?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a cost of time and milage where any car that runs on the road is bound to show some wear and tear. Nicely done
September 20th, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a cost of time and milage where any car that runs on the road is bound to show some wear and tear. Nicely done
September 20th, 2026 03:54
Little Boxes
orchidee said:
Good write JM. With me 3 brain cells as a GPD, I can\'t think inside nor outside of the box. Strange place to be thinking - in a box. Hmmm. lol.
August 27th, 2026 02:26
orchidee said:
Good write JM. With me 3 brain cells as a GPD, I can\'t think inside nor outside of the box. Strange place to be thinking - in a box. Hmmm. lol.
August 27th, 2026 02:26
Little Boxes
sorenbarrett said:
life seems built of routines and when one wears out it is replaced with another. Well written reinforced by the repetition in the poem. Well done
August 26th, 2026 20:09
sorenbarrett said:
life seems built of routines and when one wears out it is replaced with another. Well written reinforced by the repetition in the poem. Well done
August 26th, 2026 20:09
Neck Cramp
sorenbarrett said:
A short and fun read with meaning that goes deeper that surface pain. Well done
August 10th, 2026 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
A short and fun read with meaning that goes deeper that surface pain. Well done
August 10th, 2026 03:43
Tomorrow’s Light is Forever
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last two lines that caught my attention. Yes indeed it is the light of tomorrow that guides us. Nicely said
August 9th, 2026 03:38
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last two lines that caught my attention. Yes indeed it is the light of tomorrow that guides us. Nicely said
August 9th, 2026 03:38
Tomorrow’s Light is Forever
orchidee said:
Good write JM.
Yes, meanwhile, me light went out - me battery ran out on me torch, that is. lol.
August 9th, 2026 02:16
orchidee said:
Good write JM.
Yes, meanwhile, me light went out - me battery ran out on me torch, that is. lol.
August 9th, 2026 02:16
Glitching A.I.
orchidee said:
Good write JM. Though AI helps in many online things, I find.
July 18th, 2026 01:38
orchidee said:
Good write JM. Though AI helps in many online things, I find.
July 18th, 2026 01:38
Glitching A.I.
sorenbarrett said:
I guess we would be the god of AI since we created it. Well done
July 17th, 2026 20:10
sorenbarrett said:
I guess we would be the god of AI since we created it. Well done
July 17th, 2026 20:10
Maxim
orchidee said:
Good write JM. Great minds think alike? I was reading recently:\' The spirit is willing, but the flesh is weak\'.
Or less encouraging: \'Small things amuse small minds\'? I may have made that one up myself. lol.
July 1st, 2026 02:29
orchidee said:
Good write JM. Great minds think alike? I was reading recently:\' The spirit is willing, but the flesh is weak\'.
Or less encouraging: \'Small things amuse small minds\'? I may have made that one up myself. lol.
July 1st, 2026 02:29
More
sorenbarrett said:
This could be taken either good or bad as perseverance or greed. Nicely written James
June 23rd, 2026 03:38
sorenbarrett said:
This could be taken either good or bad as perseverance or greed. Nicely written James
June 23rd, 2026 03:38
Divinity
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully stated with metaphor that leaves it wide open to interpretation. Loved it a fave
June 16th, 2026 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully stated with metaphor that leaves it wide open to interpretation. Loved it a fave
June 16th, 2026 03:36
Divinity
orchidee said:
Yes, it\'s \'religion\' that\'s the cause of a lot of problems. I prefer my hymn-poems to be labelled \'spiritual\'.
June 16th, 2026 02:18
orchidee said:
Yes, it\'s \'religion\' that\'s the cause of a lot of problems. I prefer my hymn-poems to be labelled \'spiritual\'.
June 16th, 2026 02:18
Maxim
sorenbarrett said:
Is that orange man in Ireland or a Florida fruit producer? You have me guessing on this one James
May 19th, 2026 12:10
sorenbarrett said:
Is that orange man in Ireland or a Florida fruit producer? You have me guessing on this one James
May 19th, 2026 12:10
Adultery
sorenbarrett said:
Constructed around seven f words this poem is symbolic as well as powerful in its message. I have seen it cause a lot of destruction
May 18th, 2026 02:28
sorenbarrett said:
Constructed around seven f words this poem is symbolic as well as powerful in its message. I have seen it cause a lot of destruction
May 18th, 2026 02:28
Adultery
orchidee said:
Did they all rush out to buy that Bible with a \'typo\' in it, saying, \'Thou shalt commit adultery\'?! Doh! You know my 18+ poem. Here\'s two lines of it:
Ohhh, F, F, F, and F
And furthermore F, F, F, and double F.....
Tone it down, says Fido to me. lol.
May 18th, 2026 02:21
orchidee said:
Did they all rush out to buy that Bible with a \'typo\' in it, saying, \'Thou shalt commit adultery\'?! Doh! You know my 18+ poem. Here\'s two lines of it:
Ohhh, F, F, F, and F
And furthermore F, F, F, and double F.....
Tone it down, says Fido to me. lol.
May 18th, 2026 02:21
Maxim
sorenbarrett said:
I heartily agree with this short passage. Nicely written with rhyme
April 14th, 2026 19:38
sorenbarrett said:
I heartily agree with this short passage. Nicely written with rhyme
April 14th, 2026 19:38
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