Comments received on poems by cofhypieces
That\'s OK
2781 said:
If the Son therefore shall make you free, ye shall be free indeed.
June 25th, 2024 05:20
2781 said:
If the Son therefore shall make you free, ye shall be free indeed.
June 25th, 2024 05:20
To a friend
Bloomingcereus said:
I love your poem and enjoyed reading the third stanza. I look forward to reading more of your work.
June 20th, 2024 20:00
Bloomingcereus said:
I love your poem and enjoyed reading the third stanza. I look forward to reading more of your work.
June 20th, 2024 20:00
Help!
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Help !” by cofhypieces
It is strange how pride rules the life of man. Quite often pride gets in the way, and this can result in the destruction of the man with time. We fear taboos, we fear what people will say, we refrain from seeking help. In contrast, women talk easily to others about their problems. By bottling up their feelings, men do themselves a lot of harm. Society itself erects barriers for men and creates taboos. There are even expressions like “Come on ! Be a man !...” Yet, it is not a shame to ask for help. It is a wonder that men should have been able to survive, in these circumstances… Soman Ragavan. 21 January, 2024.
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January 20th, 2024 21:20
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Help !” by cofhypieces
It is strange how pride rules the life of man. Quite often pride gets in the way, and this can result in the destruction of the man with time. We fear taboos, we fear what people will say, we refrain from seeking help. In contrast, women talk easily to others about their problems. By bottling up their feelings, men do themselves a lot of harm. Society itself erects barriers for men and creates taboos. There are even expressions like “Come on ! Be a man !...” Yet, it is not a shame to ask for help. It is a wonder that men should have been able to survive, in these circumstances… Soman Ragavan. 21 January, 2024.
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January 20th, 2024 21:20
Human
Osei Zion said:
We are human and human we will forever be. Great piece.
December 20th, 2023 19:45
Osei Zion said:
We are human and human we will forever be. Great piece.
December 20th, 2023 19:45
Lost diamond
Thomas W Case said:
You paint a vivid picture, and the reader gets a sense of the land. Great one.
December 15th, 2023 09:34
Thomas W Case said:
You paint a vivid picture, and the reader gets a sense of the land. Great one.
December 15th, 2023 09:34
O my amateur self
L. B. Mek said:
\'self\' is an evolving concept
from minute to minute
some progress, quick
then stagnate
other\'s, take their time
but never fail to grow
inch by inch, scar by scar
slowly n surely
they curate, that self
true to who, they be...
stay strong for the journey is long
thanks for sharing
April 28th, 2023 04:18
L. B. Mek said:
\'self\' is an evolving concept
from minute to minute
some progress, quick
then stagnate
other\'s, take their time
but never fail to grow
inch by inch, scar by scar
slowly n surely
they curate, that self
true to who, they be...
stay strong for the journey is long
thanks for sharing
April 28th, 2023 04:18
Rough;Tough
David Wakeling said:
This is too rough to read.I gave up.Its repetitive and tedious
April 22nd, 2023 17:22
David Wakeling said:
This is too rough to read.I gave up.Its repetitive and tedious
April 22nd, 2023 17:22
This Christmas
screaming goat. (New and Improved) said:
This is my favorite Christmas poem I have seen so far.
December 23rd, 2021 20:56
screaming goat. (New and Improved) said:
This is my favorite Christmas poem I have seen so far.
December 23rd, 2021 20:56
COVID 19
iAli said:
A great writing dear friend,
all the facts you described so wisely and suitawords. 🙂
Like this poem so much. 🙃
July 1st, 2021 21:06
iAli said:
A great writing dear friend,
all the facts you described so wisely and suitawords. 🙂
Like this poem so much. 🙃
July 1st, 2021 21:06
