Comments received on poems by cofhypieces



Flowers
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

April 15th, 2024 18:57

O Light
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

January 27th, 2024 22:02

Help!
Soman Ragavan said:

My comments on the poem \"Help !” by cofhypieces
It is strange how pride rules the life of man. Quite often pride gets in the way, and this can result in the destruction of the man with time. We fear taboos, we fear what people will say, we refrain from seeking help. In contrast, women talk easily to others about their problems. By bottling up their feelings, men do themselves a lot of harm. Society itself erects barriers for men and creates taboos. There are even expressions like “Come on ! Be a man !...” Yet, it is not a shame to ask for help. It is a wonder that men should have been able to survive, in these circumstances… Soman Ragavan. 21 January, 2024.
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January 20th, 2024 21:20

Life
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent

December 24th, 2023 19:35

Christmas tree
orchidee said:

Good write C.

December 21st, 2023 03:12

Human
Osei Zion said:

We are human and human we will forever be. Great piece.

December 20th, 2023 19:45

Lost diamond
cofhypieces said:

Thanks

December 16th, 2023 04:03

Lost diamond
Thomas W Case said:

You paint a vivid picture, and the reader gets a sense of the land. Great one.

December 15th, 2023 09:34

Violin n beauty
novaa said:

Beautiful write !

October 19th, 2023 14:26

O my amateur self
L. B. Mek said:

\'self\' is an evolving concept
from minute to minute
some progress, quick
then stagnate
other\'s, take their time
but never fail to grow
inch by inch, scar by scar
slowly n surely
they curate, that self
true to who, they be...
stay strong for the journey is long
thanks for sharing

April 28th, 2023 04:18

Rough;Tough
David Wakeling said:

This is too rough to read.I gave up.Its repetitive and tedious

April 22nd, 2023 17:22

Pilgrim\'s Prayer
@legendarafatm said:

sounding stormic

December 27th, 2022 20:15

This Christmas
Osei Zion said:

Great work

December 25th, 2022 21:42

Pilgrim\'s Prayer
Osei Zion said:

Your choice of words is the best.

January 26th, 2022 02:21

MY NAME
Osei Zion said:

Great piece. Keep it going

January 26th, 2022 02:19

COVID 19
Osei Zion said:

A good poem

January 26th, 2022 02:09

This Christmas
screaming goat. said:

This is my favorite Christmas poem I have seen so far.

December 23rd, 2021 20:56

MY NAME
L. B. Mek said:

thanks for sharing,
great levels of insight you exemplify
but for me
this kind of depth in poetry, loses
something
when you try to force it, into rhyming couplets
it distracts, from the seriousness in your tone
and the many wise words
in your message..
(indeed, we all have to mask
ourselves
within various guises, just
so as to survive)


November 25th, 2021 04:20

COVID 19
iAli said:

A great writing dear friend,
all the facts you described so wisely and suitawords. 🙂
Like this poem so much. 🙃

July 1st, 2021 21:06