Comments received on poems by Kim C.
Unfinished
rhmn_7 said:
I hope he gets well very very soon for a wonderful new experience giving you new inspirations for another story of yours..
March 5th, 2023 08:45
rhmn_7 said:
I hope he gets well very very soon for a wonderful new experience giving you new inspirations for another story of yours..
March 5th, 2023 08:45
I Miss You Father
mvvenkataraman said:
Sorry. I missed the point.
The poem is touchingly wonderful!
March 4th, 2023 03:53
mvvenkataraman said:
Sorry. I missed the point.
The poem is touchingly wonderful!
March 4th, 2023 03:53
I Miss You Father
mvvenkataraman said:
My dad left me when I was 41,
He did his level best to crucify me,
He saw to that we brothers struggled,
His presence was viewed as nuisance
By we brothers who deeply enjoyed
When he wasn\'t at home truly,
He destroyed our peace and growth,
He viewed us not as his sons at all,
He skipped many valuable deals
That would have protected us,
Food, clothing and shelter we had,
But, pure love from mother only,
We lived like slaves under his regime,
But, I do all the rites for him sincerely,
I can\'t bluff, you see, truth must be told,
My father also didn\'t enjoyhis life.
March 4th, 2023 03:52
mvvenkataraman said:
My dad left me when I was 41,
He did his level best to crucify me,
He saw to that we brothers struggled,
His presence was viewed as nuisance
By we brothers who deeply enjoyed
When he wasn\'t at home truly,
He destroyed our peace and growth,
He viewed us not as his sons at all,
He skipped many valuable deals
That would have protected us,
Food, clothing and shelter we had,
But, pure love from mother only,
We lived like slaves under his regime,
But, I do all the rites for him sincerely,
I can\'t bluff, you see, truth must be told,
My father also didn\'t enjoyhis life.
March 4th, 2023 03:52
I Miss You Father
Abby1234 said:
I understand it. My dad left me when I was 7. He went to go for another girl because he didn\'t want me. That\'s okay though. I still love him and miss him.
March 3rd, 2023 15:07
Abby1234 said:
I understand it. My dad left me when I was 7. He went to go for another girl because he didn\'t want me. That\'s okay though. I still love him and miss him.
March 3rd, 2023 15:07
More Than Just Words
L. B. Mek said:
great imagery..
but, I don\'t know
gifts
sometimes get warped by pressure
in-to burdens..
we all different, dear poet
not all of us keep our gardens
to showcase it
some of us, merely strive
to witness that \'perfect blossom\'
once, in our life
lol
(ain\'t I so melodramatic
forgive me..
thanks for sharing)
July 18th, 2022 03:55
L. B. Mek said:
great imagery..
but, I don\'t know
gifts
sometimes get warped by pressure
in-to burdens..
we all different, dear poet
not all of us keep our gardens
to showcase it
some of us, merely strive
to witness that \'perfect blossom\'
once, in our life
lol
(ain\'t I so melodramatic
forgive me..
thanks for sharing)
July 18th, 2022 03:55
The Addiction
Accidental Poet said:
It takes a lot of courage to look yourself in the face, see what you don\'t like and willingly make the necessary changes to be the person you really want to be. Power to you Kim. You beat your addiction. ; )
July 19th, 2021 19:22
Accidental Poet said:
It takes a lot of courage to look yourself in the face, see what you don\'t like and willingly make the necessary changes to be the person you really want to be. Power to you Kim. You beat your addiction. ; )
July 19th, 2021 19:22
That’s Not Me Anymore
Accidental Poet said:
Life comes without a instruction manual. And society forgets that growing up is not an easy undertaking in this day and age. But as you stated, you\'re not that same person, you\'re older and wiser. We live and learn, and then we learn to live. Great write Kim. ; )
July 16th, 2021 20:20
Accidental Poet said:
Life comes without a instruction manual. And society forgets that growing up is not an easy undertaking in this day and age. But as you stated, you\'re not that same person, you\'re older and wiser. We live and learn, and then we learn to live. Great write Kim. ; )
July 16th, 2021 20:20
To My Dear Neighbor
Accidental Poet said:
A very thoughtful write, to care about how another person views the same past. Very well penned Kim. ; )
July 16th, 2021 20:04
Accidental Poet said:
A very thoughtful write, to care about how another person views the same past. Very well penned Kim. ; )
July 16th, 2021 20:04
That’s Not Me Anymore
peto said:
Tremendous debut kim
Full of experience and emotion
Loved the structure and rhyme
Reminded me of eminem
Your ability to forgive also shone
Look forward to reading more
See who kim is today
Super start
July 14th, 2021 14:43
peto said:
Tremendous debut kim
Full of experience and emotion
Loved the structure and rhyme
Reminded me of eminem
Your ability to forgive also shone
Look forward to reading more
See who kim is today
Super start
July 14th, 2021 14:43
