Comments received on poems by Claudia
The second choice
shaa said:
Aaaah, you😢...you just hit my nail on the head. I love this 👏👏
September 14th, 2022 14:47
shaa said:
Aaaah, you😢...you just hit my nail on the head. I love this 👏👏
September 14th, 2022 14:47
Am I in love?
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes we just never know, and asking is never on the cards.
September 11th, 2022 05:30
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes we just never know, and asking is never on the cards.
September 11th, 2022 05:30
A sad goodbye (a happy welcome)
L. B. Mek said:
yeah
closet\'s, full of notebook\'s
even
(so relatable, thank you)
June 27th, 2022 06:13
L. B. Mek said:
yeah
closet\'s, full of notebook\'s
even
(so relatable, thank you)
June 27th, 2022 06:13
Green Fingers
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words can be felt here Claudia.
Andy
August 17th, 2021 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words can be felt here Claudia.
Andy
August 17th, 2021 00:25
Green Fingers
dusk arising said:
A caged bird or tiger is no longer that wonderful wild spirit but rather a pathetic \'fish out of water\' thanks to the cages key holder.
I like the way you lead your reader into your message. There must come a time for everyone to ask of themselves, \'am I changing the one I love into something they are not and will they lose the wildness which was the attraction?\'
A very difficult question you pose today.
August 16th, 2021 12:04
dusk arising said:
A caged bird or tiger is no longer that wonderful wild spirit but rather a pathetic \'fish out of water\' thanks to the cages key holder.
I like the way you lead your reader into your message. There must come a time for everyone to ask of themselves, \'am I changing the one I love into something they are not and will they lose the wildness which was the attraction?\'
A very difficult question you pose today.
August 16th, 2021 12:04
Green Fingers
The elder poet said:
Makes you wonder if you are talking abut flowers or someone you love. I enjoyed reading your poem. You have a good day.
August 16th, 2021 11:19
The elder poet said:
Makes you wonder if you are talking abut flowers or someone you love. I enjoyed reading your poem. You have a good day.
August 16th, 2021 11:19
Ghosts
ron parrish aka wordman said:
scary,wait till they start flying around
August 13th, 2021 19:12
ron parrish aka wordman said:
scary,wait till they start flying around
August 13th, 2021 19:12
Affection
L. B. Mek said:
\'It looked all quiet
But felt like warmth.\'
how very sweet
thank you for sharing
August 9th, 2021 06:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'It looked all quiet
But felt like warmth.\'
how very sweet
thank you for sharing
August 9th, 2021 06:39
life and death
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully succinct and vividly worded
so enticingly poetic,
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing dear poet
August 9th, 2021 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully succinct and vividly worded
so enticingly poetic,
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing dear poet
August 9th, 2021 04:13
life and death
Goldfinch60 said:
Your strength will keep you going to the wonder that awaits for you Claudia.
Andy
August 9th, 2021 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Your strength will keep you going to the wonder that awaits for you Claudia.
Andy
August 9th, 2021 00:26
life and death
ron parrish aka wordman said:
a calming moment to the next life
August 8th, 2021 12:34
ron parrish aka wordman said:
a calming moment to the next life
August 8th, 2021 12:34
life and death
Eugene S. said:
A very interesting stance. Detached and defiant, but with subtlety. Love it!
August 8th, 2021 09:17
Eugene S. said:
A very interesting stance. Detached and defiant, but with subtlety. Love it!
August 8th, 2021 09:17
small
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful things can be found in small packages Claudia.
Andy
July 25th, 2021 00:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful things can be found in small packages Claudia.
Andy
July 25th, 2021 00:14
nobody
L. B. Mek said:
\'So I use these words, to not feel alone.\'
I too, think poetry can be a powerful tool
for countering those doubts in our minds,
when we read other\'s express what we feel
then, we know
distance being allowed for: \'We\', are not alone!
(thanks for sharing, your wonderful take
on the day to day utilisation possibilities
of our beloved: Poetry)
July 23rd, 2021 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
\'So I use these words, to not feel alone.\'
I too, think poetry can be a powerful tool
for countering those doubts in our minds,
when we read other\'s express what we feel
then, we know
distance being allowed for: \'We\', are not alone!
(thanks for sharing, your wonderful take
on the day to day utilisation possibilities
of our beloved: Poetry)
July 23rd, 2021 05:04
masochist
jarcher54 said:
I THINK I understand... I enjoy the alliteration and the waiting for the resolution... lists are like incantations, like magic recipes. I think I might be a masochist after all! I am not sure I\'m glad you spelled it out!
July 21st, 2021 01:22
jarcher54 said:
I THINK I understand... I enjoy the alliteration and the waiting for the resolution... lists are like incantations, like magic recipes. I think I might be a masochist after all! I am not sure I\'m glad you spelled it out!
July 21st, 2021 01:22
beginning
L. B. Mek said:
\'so I\'m left to myself and let myself drown\'..
sadly
until you find a path, to \'excavate that self-worth\'
from \'those drawers you keep repressed and hidden\'
\'this cycle, you\'re unknowingly - indulging\': shall never
be vanquished, permanently...
and No, dear poet
you are not to blame, of that you can be certain!
But! Dear poet
you still have it in you:
to \'Choose\'
to fight
to survive
and realise, all that potential
you\'ve got hidden, inside.
Have faith and strive for that next breath
singed, with self-mined freedom\'s wilful price
of your newly discovered, sense
of actualised self-pride, in all that you
are, and all
that you can someday: become!
July 19th, 2021 05:38
L. B. Mek said:
\'so I\'m left to myself and let myself drown\'..
sadly
until you find a path, to \'excavate that self-worth\'
from \'those drawers you keep repressed and hidden\'
\'this cycle, you\'re unknowingly - indulging\': shall never
be vanquished, permanently...
and No, dear poet
you are not to blame, of that you can be certain!
But! Dear poet
you still have it in you:
to \'Choose\'
to fight
to survive
and realise, all that potential
you\'ve got hidden, inside.
Have faith and strive for that next breath
singed, with self-mined freedom\'s wilful price
of your newly discovered, sense
of actualised self-pride, in all that you
are, and all
that you can someday: become!
July 19th, 2021 05:38
beginning
Goldfinch60 said:
One day the voice from that drawer will open into the light that will be in your world Claudia.
Welcome to MPS.
July 19th, 2021 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
One day the voice from that drawer will open into the light that will be in your world Claudia.
Welcome to MPS.
July 19th, 2021 01:26
