Comments received on poems by tema



A Figure Of Fun
L. B. Mek said:

can\'t pretend to grasp its context, but still
I can appreciate how well written and lovingly edited this is,
thank you for sharing

September 17th, 2021 03:43

14 Lines
Teddy.15 said:

This was no where near a sonnet, but a good thought on the title change, and now it seems to fit very well nicely expressed emotion in here, I adore the subject of love and here it makes a good impact. Heart break always a great subject.

September 15th, 2021 08:54

14 Lines
orchidee said:

Oops, one minute ago this was called \'A Sonnet\'!

September 15th, 2021 08:21

14 Lines
orchidee said:

Yep, sure is a sonnet - got 14 lines :) Not that I\'m a poetry expert. lol.

September 15th, 2021 08:19

14 Lines
Doggerel Dave said:

Sonnet - you sure?

September 15th, 2021 07:48

Bad Endings Are The Best
Fozzy said:

Dark and powerful

September 13th, 2021 10:20

That Day, And Onwards
Doggerel Dave said:

Here at MPS (and I don’t exclude myself from this) when we think of (and thus poeticize) war more often than not it is the WW1 1914-18 trenches that we turn to. There are reasons, I think, for that – not hard to work out; here I want to thank you for reminding us that the term ’war’ is far more generalisable than that and in particular the extraordinary (no, not extraordinary at all) loss of life suffered by the uninvolved civilian population.

September 10th, 2021 21:13

Certain Lusts
orchidee said:

Not today, thanks. Not any day, in fact. be gentle with me. (lol).

August 30th, 2021 09:28

Certain Lusts
orchidee said:

Oohh, I dunno, it might hurt them!
Sounds like a bad hair day to me (an \'off-day\'!). heehee.
Oops, has that killed the atmosphere of the poem?

August 30th, 2021 09:27

Will You?
myself and me said:

Will or will not, do you have plan B?

August 27th, 2021 14:58

The Bottom Of The Well
L. B. Mek said:

if you\'re writing and sharing
its a sign that you\'re still fighting!
so I\'ll hope your morose wording
was for poetically, dramatic effect..
keep striving for that better
\'fight! fight! against the dying of the light!\'
thanks for sharing..
*really liked the levels of awareness
and honesty in this stanza:
\'I carry this bag full of all my mistakes
I tossed it into a well and then I looked away
The heart I hold in my hand, I wish I never found
Although, I fear that it would burst if I ever put it down\'

August 26th, 2021 04:48