Comments received on poems by karvelD



Protests and. .
Rocky Lagou said:

Yo! Yoooo!!!! This was some DOPE stuff though. Lawd! \"Peaceful beige color\" okay YES! I love haikus and the way you were able to write one centered on political unrest and social change, kudos to you! βœ¨πŸ’ž

February 18th, 2022 09:23

Mary Rose (a ghost shanty)
screaming goat. said:

This deserves so much more likes than it got. You ever thought of putting music behind it?

January 19th, 2022 12:19

Theatre
sophin said:

a surrealistic way of describing theatres. well done, k

January 12th, 2022 15:04

the poem i won’t Write
orchidee said:

Erm, is it this poem? You\'ve written it now! lol.

January 11th, 2022 11:25

In Winter
Draven said:

Beautiful :)

December 20th, 2021 22:05

Carbon Neutral
karvelD said:

Thanks for the kind nod:) I quite like haiku because of its brevity.

December 14th, 2021 19:48

Fish Hawk
James Alexander said:

Very nice. Visually connecting. A good read.

December 14th, 2021 09:26

Carbon Neutral
woundedheart said:

As an ex coal miner I\'ve left many carbon footprints, such truth in such brevity.

December 14th, 2021 08:48

Poet Wolves
Eugene S. said:

May you continue to exercise your rights!

December 10th, 2021 13:52

Poet Wolves
Paul Bell said:

It\'s that sigh of relief at the end of writing.

December 10th, 2021 12:13

Poet Wolves
Lorna said:

More thoughts came from this than words in the haiku.... thanks

December 10th, 2021 11:02

Girl With Janis
karvelD said:

Ty _/\\_ :)
I can\'t very well explain my own emotional connections to this one. I\'m still unpacking this one myself.

December 10th, 2021 00:06

Girl With Janis
C E Thomas said:

Left me speechless. Very well written. Beyond your clearly great grasp of structure, the topic and sentiment appeals to me on a very personal level. I can see the Girl in my mind, and I know I\'ve felt what she did - until the final stanza, which reminds me where I could\'ve ended up. Well done

December 9th, 2021 23:18

An Outhouse Door.
Draven said:

Wonderful story!

December 8th, 2021 16:41

An Outhouse Door.
Lorna said:

I had so much fun with this - thanks!

December 8th, 2021 12:16

Writing
karvelD said:



December 7th, 2021 07:51

Writing
orchidee said:

A fine write D. Day 6 completed?!

December 7th, 2021 03:00

Vague
orchidee said:

Good write K.

December 4th, 2021 09:33

Vague
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely writing … I love this πŸ™‚

December 4th, 2021 08:53

Exhilaration
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely writing . Nicely expressed words )

December 2nd, 2021 10:05

Exhilaration
Lorna said:

Thank you for taking us on this exhilarating journey so well expressed

December 2nd, 2021 09:43

Tearfully
Lorna said:

This is exactly how it is.........so well said...

November 30th, 2021 12:41

Lion
orchidee said:

Good write K.

November 27th, 2021 13:31

Transfixed
Lorna said:

Such a good \"picture\" ....

November 27th, 2021 12:26

Wraiths
karvelD said:

I sure agree. So many miracles and mysteries right in front of our noses:)

November 27th, 2021 08:52

Wraiths
Paul Bell said:

The world we live in, and how it goes on and on, and sometimes we don\'t even realise it.

November 27th, 2021 06:53

Lion
Lorna said:

Somehow I think this lion is an old one.... don\'t know why.

November 6th, 2021 09:25

City
L. B. Mek said:

really well written, with imagery empowered to bring to life the nightmare ghouls, of city life..
thank you for choosing to share

October 29th, 2021 05:12

City
Rueda Saer said:

Great imagery!

October 29th, 2021 01:07

Big Sea
Eugene S. said:

Really cool haiku.πŸ‘

September 14th, 2021 23:03

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