Comments received on poems by karvelD
Protests and. .
Rocky Lagou said:
Yo! Yoooo!!!! This was some DOPE stuff though. Lawd! \"Peaceful beige color\" okay YES! I love haikus and the way you were able to write one centered on political unrest and social change, kudos to you! ✨💞
February 18th, 2022 09:23
Rocky Lagou said:
Yo! Yoooo!!!! This was some DOPE stuff though. Lawd! \"Peaceful beige color\" okay YES! I love haikus and the way you were able to write one centered on political unrest and social change, kudos to you! ✨💞
February 18th, 2022 09:23
Mary Rose (a ghost shanty)
screaming goat. (New and Improved) said:
This deserves so much more likes than it got. You ever thought of putting music behind it?
January 19th, 2022 12:19
screaming goat. (New and Improved) said:
This deserves so much more likes than it got. You ever thought of putting music behind it?
January 19th, 2022 12:19
Theatre
sophin said:
a surrealistic way of describing theatres. well done, k
January 12th, 2022 15:04
sophin said:
a surrealistic way of describing theatres. well done, k
January 12th, 2022 15:04
the poem i won’t Write
orchidee said:
Erm, is it this poem? You\'ve written it now! lol.
January 11th, 2022 11:25
orchidee said:
Erm, is it this poem? You\'ve written it now! lol.
January 11th, 2022 11:25
Carbon Neutral
karvelD said:
Thanks for the kind nod:) I quite like haiku because of its brevity.
December 14th, 2021 19:48
karvelD said:
Thanks for the kind nod:) I quite like haiku because of its brevity.
December 14th, 2021 19:48
Fish Hawk
James Alexander said:
Very nice. Visually connecting. A good read.
December 14th, 2021 09:26
James Alexander said:
Very nice. Visually connecting. A good read.
December 14th, 2021 09:26
Carbon Neutral
woundedheart said:
As an ex coal miner I\'ve left many carbon footprints, such truth in such brevity.
December 14th, 2021 08:48
woundedheart said:
As an ex coal miner I\'ve left many carbon footprints, such truth in such brevity.
December 14th, 2021 08:48
Poet Wolves
Paul Bell said:
It\'s that sigh of relief at the end of writing.
December 10th, 2021 12:13
Paul Bell said:
It\'s that sigh of relief at the end of writing.
December 10th, 2021 12:13
Poet Wolves
Lorna said:
More thoughts came from this than words in the haiku.... thanks
December 10th, 2021 11:02
Lorna said:
More thoughts came from this than words in the haiku.... thanks
December 10th, 2021 11:02
Girl With Janis
karvelD said:
Ty _/\\_ :)
I can\'t very well explain my own emotional connections to this one. I\'m still unpacking this one myself.
December 10th, 2021 00:06
karvelD said:
Ty _/\\_ :)
I can\'t very well explain my own emotional connections to this one. I\'m still unpacking this one myself.
December 10th, 2021 00:06
Girl With Janis
C E Thomas said:
Left me speechless. Very well written. Beyond your clearly great grasp of structure, the topic and sentiment appeals to me on a very personal level. I can see the Girl in my mind, and I know I\'ve felt what she did - until the final stanza, which reminds me where I could\'ve ended up. Well done
December 9th, 2021 23:18
C E Thomas said:
Left me speechless. Very well written. Beyond your clearly great grasp of structure, the topic and sentiment appeals to me on a very personal level. I can see the Girl in my mind, and I know I\'ve felt what she did - until the final stanza, which reminds me where I could\'ve ended up. Well done
December 9th, 2021 23:18
Exhilaration
Lorna said:
Thank you for taking us on this exhilarating journey so well expressed
December 2nd, 2021 09:43
Lorna said:
Thank you for taking us on this exhilarating journey so well expressed
December 2nd, 2021 09:43
Wraiths
karvelD said:
I sure agree. So many miracles and mysteries right in front of our noses:)
November 27th, 2021 08:52
karvelD said:
I sure agree. So many miracles and mysteries right in front of our noses:)
November 27th, 2021 08:52
Wraiths
Paul Bell said:
The world we live in, and how it goes on and on, and sometimes we don\'t even realise it.
November 27th, 2021 06:53
Paul Bell said:
The world we live in, and how it goes on and on, and sometimes we don\'t even realise it.
November 27th, 2021 06:53
Lion
Lorna said:
Somehow I think this lion is an old one.... don\'t know why.
November 6th, 2021 09:25
Lorna said:
Somehow I think this lion is an old one.... don\'t know why.
November 6th, 2021 09:25
City
L. B. Mek said:
really well written, with imagery empowered to bring to life the nightmare ghouls, of city life..
thank you for choosing to share
October 29th, 2021 05:12
L. B. Mek said:
really well written, with imagery empowered to bring to life the nightmare ghouls, of city life..
thank you for choosing to share
October 29th, 2021 05:12
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