Comments received on poems by Jennifer Martin

dusk arising said:

Oh my Jennifer Martin. This is the second of your poems i have read and I am in awe of your poetic vision.
I just want to read and re-read this and absorb its atmosphere.

September 21st, 2021 03:55

Ever Flowing
dusk arising said:

I\'m so pleased i found this. It is quite quite beautiful poetry beyond none. I can feel how the character of your special friend is in your fine words so carefully chosen. A truly moving moving piece and so well constructed.
Into my favourite poems for sure.

September 21st, 2021 03:51

Ever Flowing
L. B. Mek said:

ever flowing in its off-beat cacophony:
(s,s,e - ssss,e - sss,e
a quirky ready, Go, steady - kinda flow
if you will...)
and ain\'t that, in-keeping
with that truly wondrous Beauty, of all-things unpredictably Wild, about the Nature: we so admiringly Love!
Clever write, but more meaningfully
its a write imbued with a wonderfully vivid depiction of those memento day\'s, that sustain us
in the dimming light of our twilight years, of life...
thanks for choosing to share

September 20th, 2021 05:26

Ever Flowing
Thekkinkkattil said:

A beautiful poem Jennifer. Keep it up. I am also not a regular but enjoy the poems when I am here

September 19th, 2021 22:44

Night Train
Thekkinkkattil said:

I enjoyed the train ride with you. Beautifully penned

September 14th, 2021 11:43

Night Train
L. B. Mek said:

there\'s nothing like that lulling train track, soundtrack
as an atmospheric backdrop, to our lives
its dreary monotones tones
\'late at night, has been a source of comfort and delight,\'
to so many..
(maybe I relate a bit more than most, because I spent a few years working on the trains)
thanks for sharing, loved the moody feel you cultivated in such a short write

September 14th, 2021 04:14

Night Train
Goldfinch60 said:

That sound from your life will always be with you Jennifer.


September 14th, 2021 01:06

Fozzy said:

I totally totally get the love for the sea. The most beautiful place to be. Left to it\'s own devices it would always be serene it\'s the weather patterns that make it angry

September 13th, 2021 09:44

L. B. Mek said:

what a wonderfully vivid depiction
I\'m envious of this \'Home\' you paint so majestic
and yes, I too am a lover of seaside\'s capacity
to heal and inspire: endlessly...
thank you, for choosing to share

September 13th, 2021 05:34

aDarkerMind said:

nicely written Jennifer

September 12th, 2021 12:38

Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely words šŸ™‚

September 12th, 2021 12:34

Fateful Morn
dusk arising said:

WEll done for posting this.

With our final armed withdrawl from the middle east perhaps we - the west - will begin to learn form the disaster of 9/11. It\'s not over is it?

September 11th, 2021 20:10

Fateful Morn
G84 said:

I love the rhythm of this Iā€™m in the uk I was sat watching the videos appearing on Facebook it gets you right in the feels Absolutely tragic incident represented beautifully in poem as a race we must all stand united and free

September 11th, 2021 16:35