Comments received on poems by OneMoreBreath



Full of pain
Ajax (he/xe) said:

beautiful!

October 22nd, 2021 16:02

A thousand...
Goldfinch60 said:

That light will always be there for you.

Andy

October 14th, 2021 01:13

A thousand...
Caring dove said:

Sad words ... I hope you can find some happiness . You expressed yourself in a good way

October 13th, 2021 11:49

Do you love me mom?
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive words, I hope that love comes to you one day.

Andy

October 13th, 2021 00:46

Do you love me mom?
Caring dove said:

Sad words 😞 sorry if you feel unloved and unnoticed . An expressive write

October 12th, 2021 12:01

Hey mom...Hows life?
iAli said:

🙂

October 11th, 2021 09:38

Hey mom...Hows life?
aDarkerMind said:

so much pain...
tho the pain wont go away, we can only hope it lessens;
and keep writing.

October 11th, 2021 09:16

Can you hear me screaming your name?
Paul Bell said:

Depression is so lonely and so very solo. I just don\'t think people can truly relate to someone\'s depression till it actually happens to them.

October 10th, 2021 04:56

Can you hear me screaming your name?
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a sad emotive write Anna.

Andy

October 10th, 2021 00:49

Full of pain
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive words Anna, we are all individuals and within that individuality we can find a way into the happiness in our lives, it is there awaiting you.

Andy

October 9th, 2021 00:38

To the boy that I love
iAli said:

Your love will be forever...you will soon be together. Love each other for the sake of love. Just love, more and more...

October 7th, 2021 13:40

The world is falling apart
L. B. Mek said:

then lets all move to Newark, to be safe
and start building, fervently..
thanks for sharing,
every generation thought it couldn\'t get any worse
and then, they had children and tried to make the world, a better place;
then guess
what their children thought? lol


October 7th, 2021 03:27

The world is falling apart
Goldfinch60 said:

One day the world will combine once more and love will rule the planet.

Andy

October 7th, 2021 00:44

I felt broken
iAli said:

Hope for better tomorrow...you can do everything. Just keep trying...

October 5th, 2021 13:19