Comments received on poems by jark
celebrity
L. B. Mek said:
love how you weaved so many Spacial references
into these free flowing words of poetic satire..
a great read, thanks for sharing
February 24th, 2022 06:29
L. B. Mek said:
love how you weaved so many Spacial references
into these free flowing words of poetic satire..
a great read, thanks for sharing
February 24th, 2022 06:29
celebrity
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
I adore the imagery you displayed. It gives this very edgy yet incredibly memorable vision of this poem. I really hope you keep this style up, its wonderful!
February 24th, 2022 05:07
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
I adore the imagery you displayed. It gives this very edgy yet incredibly memorable vision of this poem. I really hope you keep this style up, its wonderful!
February 24th, 2022 05:07
summer in February
Rocky Lagou said:
Jacob! You ate this sh!t up! 😅 I love the way you incorporate profanity into your work. Most people will spurn the action for being \"blunt\" and \"explicit\" but I personally commend it. Because it honestly just gives your poetry candor. Also the last line is just such an expression of \"not giving a sh!t anymore.\" It\'s like a surrender to even caring and just accepting that this corrupt world is promoting global warming as the days pass. Bravo! 💖👏
February 22nd, 2022 14:11
Rocky Lagou said:
Jacob! You ate this sh!t up! 😅 I love the way you incorporate profanity into your work. Most people will spurn the action for being \"blunt\" and \"explicit\" but I personally commend it. Because it honestly just gives your poetry candor. Also the last line is just such an expression of \"not giving a sh!t anymore.\" It\'s like a surrender to even caring and just accepting that this corrupt world is promoting global warming as the days pass. Bravo! 💖👏
February 22nd, 2022 14:11
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L. B. Mek said:
good read, not sure I have the required IQ to understand it all though, lol
thanks for sharing
October 28th, 2021 03:18
L. B. Mek said:
good read, not sure I have the required IQ to understand it all though, lol
thanks for sharing
October 28th, 2021 03:18
eat the rich
carti said:
damn bro this shit made me feel like such a garbage writer. Im just playing fr tho this is crazy. First of all I always struggle to rhyme without feeling corny, and you were able to keep the flow without anything about your message sounding forced to fit the rhyme which to me was dope. I mean second just whole concept where you pull back to bullys vs billionaires was really cool. I don\'t have a nicer way to articulate that but as I read it I was like oh this is sick. anyways boss this is some professional ass shit really enjoyed it.
October 26th, 2021 12:25
carti said:
damn bro this shit made me feel like such a garbage writer. Im just playing fr tho this is crazy. First of all I always struggle to rhyme without feeling corny, and you were able to keep the flow without anything about your message sounding forced to fit the rhyme which to me was dope. I mean second just whole concept where you pull back to bullys vs billionaires was really cool. I don\'t have a nicer way to articulate that but as I read it I was like oh this is sick. anyways boss this is some professional ass shit really enjoyed it.
October 26th, 2021 12:25
eat the rich
L. B. Mek said:
when we refuse ourselves
our capacity for self awareness,
all anyone need do
is aim our warped concepts,
at a distracting target
and they\'re free
to ransack our mind\'s
of any meaningful: worth...
October 26th, 2021 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
when we refuse ourselves
our capacity for self awareness,
all anyone need do
is aim our warped concepts,
at a distracting target
and they\'re free
to ransack our mind\'s
of any meaningful: worth...
October 26th, 2021 05:34
godless nation
L. B. Mek said:
admittedly, I can\'t relate any direct correlation
between your perceived \'godlessness\' and the decline of a Nation, you\'re depicting
with insightful accuracy.
because if you take a quick glimpse at our \'collective\' history,
we of humanity
have been doing the same thing
generation after cursed generation,
before we ever heard of any deity, and during the heights of theology, and even now, at the dawning of a society, barely a few centuries - free, from religious tyranny
its all the same, perpetuated cyclical BS
an endless dance of \'we\' VS \'they\'
in the fight for \'I\' to belong, to anything
to have a chance: at Surviving...
But, that doesn\'t take anything away
from my appreciation for how well written and eloquently expressed this work is!
thank you, for choosing to share
October 25th, 2021 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
admittedly, I can\'t relate any direct correlation
between your perceived \'godlessness\' and the decline of a Nation, you\'re depicting
with insightful accuracy.
because if you take a quick glimpse at our \'collective\' history,
we of humanity
have been doing the same thing
generation after cursed generation,
before we ever heard of any deity, and during the heights of theology, and even now, at the dawning of a society, barely a few centuries - free, from religious tyranny
its all the same, perpetuated cyclical BS
an endless dance of \'we\' VS \'they\'
in the fight for \'I\' to belong, to anything
to have a chance: at Surviving...
But, that doesn\'t take anything away
from my appreciation for how well written and eloquently expressed this work is!
thank you, for choosing to share
October 25th, 2021 04:16
ick
Goldfinch60 said:
We are each individuals and work our own ways through life, as your life continues that machine will mend itself through your experiences.
Welcome to MPS.
October 12th, 2021 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
We are each individuals and work our own ways through life, as your life continues that machine will mend itself through your experiences.
Welcome to MPS.
October 12th, 2021 00:34
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