Comments received on poems by Lauretta13



Unwanted feelings!
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive words Lauretta but I ma sure that those feelings will go and your live will become full of joy and love.

Andy

October 17th, 2021 00:19

Unwanted feelings!
The BlackShakespeare said:

Very touching and deep message.

October 16th, 2021 09:22

Unwanted feelings!
spilleronsheet said:

Your feelings is shared
I hope you find happiness again
Oh my dear friend
Don’t be sad
Bloom like the flowers
Watch the few drops
Your maybe the sun for so many sunflowers around
Don’t get disheartened
Spring up again
Even if it’s fall today
Spring awaits you ….


October 16th, 2021 03:55

Falling Asleep!
Paul Bell said:

Some days, the world just seems to kick you more than usual. Tomorrows another day, they say.

October 13th, 2021 12:48

Falling Asleep!
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Aw what a teary poem written in angst, relatable to many but its good you csn express succinctly in emotion. Kudos!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too

October 13th, 2021 01:55

I\'M DONE!
spilleronsheet said:

It’s heart wrenching to read it
But you have the universe with you
Your words shall be loyal to you
And it’s better to let go
And to forgive
Because the beauty lies within you
To love and to be loved is your right
Soon you shall find the right one
Who maybe just beside

October 13th, 2021 01:45

Falling Asleep!
spilleronsheet said:

Stop the weary tears
Drenching the sheets overtime
Make stronger the mind
To follow the heart unrestrained overtime

October 13th, 2021 00:53

Falling Asleep!
Goldfinch60 said:

May that sleep always come to you without the tears and a smile on your face.

Andy

October 13th, 2021 00:53

I\'M DONE!
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good emotive write Lauretta but I know that the real person for you will come into your life and all will be full of love.

Welcome to MPS.

October 13th, 2021 00:33

I\'M DONE!
L. B. Mek said:

good for you!
thanks for sharing

October 12th, 2021 05:19