Comments received on poems by mrharrell
Party of One
Parisab said:
‘Party of one” is the what you call for both, but being alone and lonely are so apart-great concept to use your poem for-good write… please keep exploring
April 14th, 2024 09:15
Parisab said:
‘Party of one” is the what you call for both, but being alone and lonely are so apart-great concept to use your poem for-good write… please keep exploring
April 14th, 2024 09:15
Maybe She is the Girl
Bobby O said:
Maybe she is, no heck that, positively she is the girl w her fresh style and phrase opened a new part of the world , w words twirled leaving this new forever fan nodding, smiling, anew w eyes a glaze leaping to uncover , staying w constant amaze Ment.
May 21st, 2023 19:35
Bobby O said:
Maybe she is, no heck that, positively she is the girl w her fresh style and phrase opened a new part of the world , w words twirled leaving this new forever fan nodding, smiling, anew w eyes a glaze leaping to uncover , staying w constant amaze Ment.
May 21st, 2023 19:35
What is Depression?
Bobby O said:
Manic extreme , disproportionate reaction , but perhaps most significant is that you know you want to hide, you have to work to keep that secret, failure to accumulate residual benefits , you’re a kid in disguise and your piggy bank is always empty I like your piece and the insight you demonstrate.
May 6th, 2023 16:23
Bobby O said:
Manic extreme , disproportionate reaction , but perhaps most significant is that you know you want to hide, you have to work to keep that secret, failure to accumulate residual benefits , you’re a kid in disguise and your piggy bank is always empty I like your piece and the insight you demonstrate.
May 6th, 2023 16:23
Maybe He is the One
L. B. Mek said:
even devoid of any religious alignment,
I appreciate how well this is written, thanks for sharing
October 18th, 2021 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
even devoid of any religious alignment,
I appreciate how well this is written, thanks for sharing
October 18th, 2021 04:38
Maybe She is the Girl
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
This is lovely ! 🙂
October 17th, 2021 01:22
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
This is lovely ! 🙂
October 17th, 2021 01:22
Maybe She is the Girl
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words show that she is in your mind all the time and she will be with you forever.
Andy
October 17th, 2021 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words show that she is in your mind all the time and she will be with you forever.
Andy
October 17th, 2021 00:38
Ship On the Ocean
Paul Bell said:
I think we all want to sail away and forget it all. Sadly, we always drag ourselves back to face reality.
October 16th, 2021 04:10
Paul Bell said:
I think we all want to sail away and forget it all. Sadly, we always drag ourselves back to face reality.
October 16th, 2021 04:10
Ship On the Ocean
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write. I am sure your ship will find a safe harbour soon.
Welcome to MPS.
October 16th, 2021 03:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write. I am sure your ship will find a safe harbour soon.
Welcome to MPS.
October 16th, 2021 03:31
Ship On the Ocean
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I agree with little dove .. a nicely expressed poem . I like your words 🙂
October 16th, 2021 01:10
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I agree with little dove .. a nicely expressed poem . I like your words 🙂
October 16th, 2021 01:10
Ship On the Ocean
Rainbow said:
I like how you have compared your soul to a ship on the ocean . Well expressed nice poem .
October 16th, 2021 00:51
Rainbow said:
I like how you have compared your soul to a ship on the ocean . Well expressed nice poem .
October 16th, 2021 00:51
