Comments received on poems by Vamsi Sudha



Natural CURTAINS !!
Rozina said:

Very clever and lovely lines. Super read.

May 19th, 2022 21:30

Natural CURTAINS !!
spilleronsheet said:

This is so true dear Vamsi…thanks for reminding, i have been missing this ritual nowadays and that’s causing a tremendous backlash for me…a beautiful metaphor and cleverly crafted lines….

May 19th, 2022 11:50

Natural CURTAINS !!
Rocky Lagou said:

Literally glorious! Such a clever metaphor for our eyelids. I feel that one is most connected to their true selves when they\'re doing what they love. So for some that can be meditation, and for others it can be things like writing poetry. The homophone you presented as well with the \"eye\" and the \"I\" is so smart. Wonderful!

May 19th, 2022 10:18

Natural CURTAINS !!
L. B. Mek said:

intriguingly, thought provoking..
thank you! dear Poet

May 19th, 2022 05:21

Natural CURTAINS !!
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:

I\'ve always had problems with ripping curtains. Maybe that\'s why I cant meditate.

May 19th, 2022 05:02

Deadlines.
Teddy.15 said:

Deadlines, the mundane of life brought me a chuckle, I have no deadline at the moment only laughter lines, 💖

May 19th, 2022 04:21

Natural CURTAINS !!
Teddy.15 said:

LOL what a lovely metaphor dear Vamsi. And may our curtains close to ripen the a glorious dawn always 💖

May 19th, 2022 04:19

Deadlines.
Rocky Lagou said:

YESSS! Omg my deadlines are literally my worst enemy. I fear them and procrastinate, but then I regret it.

May 18th, 2022 09:58

Deadlines.
spilleronsheet said:

So true dear Vamsi
And I can’t stop myself relating to this piece more and more
As if each trickle of sand is bringing the deadline and D day closer and closer…

May 18th, 2022 01:59

Deadlines.
Rozina said:

Thank goodness I\'ve retired. Such stress to achieve deadlines then.

May 18th, 2022 01:11

Deadlines.
Goldfinch60 said:

Being retired means that deadlines are a thing of the past, life is so much easier now VS
Back in they were a nuisance.

Andy

May 18th, 2022 00:59

LifeSpan !!
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words VS, one\'s lifespan is not only within our bodies bit within our spirit as well.

Andy

May 10th, 2022 00:57

LifeSpan !!
L. B. Mek said:

how you make your poetry, spin
a yarn
to remind us all to Span, our way
through life...
lol
thank you! dear Poet

May 9th, 2022 06:33

LifeSpan !!
Teddy.15 said:

LOL does this also apply to bank account growth? Great work Vamsi, I can feel your enthusiasm. 💖

May 9th, 2022 05:36

A New Touch !!
SureshG said:

encapsulate that touch, bottle that feeling - wonderfully expressed

May 4th, 2022 12:57

A New Touch !!
Rozina said:

Beautiful!

April 30th, 2022 17:58

A New Touch !!
blue orchid said:

Love is such a beautiful, strong emotion that keeps on giving

April 30th, 2022 13:10

A New Touch !!
Teddy.15 said:

Oh yes please 🤣 cooking up some romance today lol gorgeous Vamsi 💖

April 30th, 2022 12:58

A New Touch !!
spilleronsheet said:

Very romantic dear Vamsi….love is in the air…

April 30th, 2022 06:26

A New Touch !!
Job welime said:

I like it

April 30th, 2022 05:29

A New Touch !!
Goldfinch60 said:

That first touch can be so wonderful VS.

Andy

April 30th, 2022 03:20

Hunger\'s Den :)
Goldfinch60 said:

The most important ingredient in any cooking is love.

Andy

April 30th, 2022 01:09

Hunger\'s Den :)
spilleronsheet said:

Truly well described…the bonding of parents and child…the sweetness of siblings fight or simply exchanging love in between…kitchen itself is a magic place….where the magician creates memories for eternity….so well penned dear Vamsi…

April 29th, 2022 21:38

Hunger\'s Den :)
blue orchid said:

I love this piece Vamsi

April 29th, 2022 18:37

Hunger\'s Den :)
Rozina said:

Such a creative piece. Very enjoyable poem.

April 29th, 2022 18:05

Hunger\'s Den :)
dusk arising said:

But the kitchen at parties is where it all happens.... know what i mean? LOL

April 29th, 2022 12:30

Hunger\'s Den :)
Rocky Lagou said:

Wonderful Vamsi! The kitchen truly means a lot for families around the world. It\'s a place where love cooks. I love your impassioned tone!

April 29th, 2022 09:08

Hunger\'s Den :)
Teddy.15 said:

Super, dear Vamsi, I adore cooking and I seem to come alive when I\'m cooking I find it also my soothing place so I really appreciate this imaginative poem. 💖 And yes you can always taste the love on my serving plate 😋😜

April 29th, 2022 08:13

Bits of LIFE !!!
Rocky Lagou said:

I love the paranthetical \"I\" after the \"Eye.\" I feel we\'re all trying to piece our own puzzles and mostly that can be an internal one we have to learn to manage. Great poem!


April 22nd, 2022 08:23

Bits of LIFE !!!
L. B. Mek said:

\'to look at it with finesse\'..
indeed..
much like that finesse
in your poetry\'s, eloquence..
a beautifully
hope inducing, message
to champion..
thank you! dear poet

April 22nd, 2022 04:35

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