Comments received on poems by Vamsi Sudha
Hunger\'s Den :)
spilleronsheet said:
Truly well described…the bonding of parents and child…the sweetness of siblings fight or simply exchanging love in between…kitchen itself is a magic place….where the magician creates memories for eternity….so well penned dear Vamsi…
April 29th, 2022 21:38
spilleronsheet said:
Truly well described…the bonding of parents and child…the sweetness of siblings fight or simply exchanging love in between…kitchen itself is a magic place….where the magician creates memories for eternity….so well penned dear Vamsi…
April 29th, 2022 21:38
Hunger\'s Den :)
dusk arising said:
But the kitchen at parties is where it all happens.... know what i mean? LOL
April 29th, 2022 12:30
dusk arising said:
But the kitchen at parties is where it all happens.... know what i mean? LOL
April 29th, 2022 12:30
Hunger\'s Den :)
Rocky Lagou said:
Wonderful Vamsi! The kitchen truly means a lot for families around the world. It\'s a place where love cooks. I love your impassioned tone!
April 29th, 2022 09:08
Rocky Lagou said:
Wonderful Vamsi! The kitchen truly means a lot for families around the world. It\'s a place where love cooks. I love your impassioned tone!
April 29th, 2022 09:08
Bits of LIFE !!!
Rocky Lagou said:
I love the paranthetical \"I\" after the \"Eye.\" I feel we\'re all trying to piece our own puzzles and mostly that can be an internal one we have to learn to manage. Great poem!
April 22nd, 2022 08:23
Rocky Lagou said:
I love the paranthetical \"I\" after the \"Eye.\" I feel we\'re all trying to piece our own puzzles and mostly that can be an internal one we have to learn to manage. Great poem!
April 22nd, 2022 08:23
Bits of LIFE !!!
L. B. Mek said:
\'to look at it with finesse\'..
indeed..
much like that finesse
in your poetry\'s, eloquence..
a beautifully
hope inducing, message
to champion..
thank you! dear poet
April 22nd, 2022 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
\'to look at it with finesse\'..
indeed..
much like that finesse
in your poetry\'s, eloquence..
a beautifully
hope inducing, message
to champion..
thank you! dear poet
April 22nd, 2022 04:35
Swing of LIFE !!
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful metaphor. Children like swings and keeping a childlike innocence and positivity is important. Well written.
April 21st, 2022 13:46
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful metaphor. Children like swings and keeping a childlike innocence and positivity is important. Well written.
April 21st, 2022 13:46
Swing of LIFE !!
Kittykoala said:
Absolutely wonderful, love the expression of the duality of life and the need to allow the more positive side to open up
April 19th, 2022 01:08
Kittykoala said:
Absolutely wonderful, love the expression of the duality of life and the need to allow the more positive side to open up
April 19th, 2022 01:08
Swing of LIFE !!
Goldfinch60 said:
In my world life is always positive VS.
Andy
April 19th, 2022 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
In my world life is always positive VS.
Andy
April 19th, 2022 00:21
Swing of LIFE !!
Rocky Lagou said:
Truly well expressed via amazing metaphor. Life is a sort of back and forth between happiness and stress or worry. But all in all, we must focus on staying in the light.
April 18th, 2022 12:34
Rocky Lagou said:
Truly well expressed via amazing metaphor. Life is a sort of back and forth between happiness and stress or worry. But all in all, we must focus on staying in the light.
April 18th, 2022 12:34
Swing of LIFE !!
spilleronsheet said:
A good analogy
A great metaphor
Life itself seems a tragedy, a comedy and what not
And when I was loosing that positive vibe
Universe gave the answer, with dear Vamsi penning the essentials
Just like the swing edging between the two
Fear that keeps me awake
And the flickering positivity that lets me keep going
Thanks a lot dear Vamsi
April 18th, 2022 08:05
spilleronsheet said:
A good analogy
A great metaphor
Life itself seems a tragedy, a comedy and what not
And when I was loosing that positive vibe
Universe gave the answer, with dear Vamsi penning the essentials
Just like the swing edging between the two
Fear that keeps me awake
And the flickering positivity that lets me keep going
Thanks a lot dear Vamsi
April 18th, 2022 08:05
Swing of LIFE !!
L. B. Mek said:
\'Oscillating between the two ends\'
\'Swings of life are ineluctable
But, let us be a doorkeeper of the mind
Allowing the entry of positive swings\'..
thank you for sharing
such life-affirmingly, distilled wisdom
dear Poet
(I read and learn)
April 18th, 2022 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'Oscillating between the two ends\'
\'Swings of life are ineluctable
But, let us be a doorkeeper of the mind
Allowing the entry of positive swings\'..
thank you for sharing
such life-affirmingly, distilled wisdom
dear Poet
(I read and learn)
April 18th, 2022 06:08
Impassioned Moments !!
kitty the naughty poet said:
Hehe I\'m glad I can inspire and I love the poem keep writing
April 17th, 2022 03:59
kitty the naughty poet said:
Hehe I\'m glad I can inspire and I love the poem keep writing
April 17th, 2022 03:59
Impassioned Moments !!
Job Welime said:
Okaaay, I\'m not used to you with this kind of poetry, but I see you\'re really doing good, more please,,, I hope there\'s more where that came from.
April 17th, 2022 02:49
Job Welime said:
Okaaay, I\'m not used to you with this kind of poetry, but I see you\'re really doing good, more please,,, I hope there\'s more where that came from.
April 17th, 2022 02:49
Impassioned Moments !!
Dahlia said:
Tastefully weaved sensuality
great job fellow poet
🙂
April 16th, 2022 16:58
Dahlia said:
Tastefully weaved sensuality
great job fellow poet
🙂
April 16th, 2022 16:58
Impassioned Moments !!
spilleronsheet said:
Intense love filled the air
A room of new colour opened its door
A different version dear….
April 16th, 2022 03:18
spilleronsheet said:
Intense love filled the air
A room of new colour opened its door
A different version dear….
April 16th, 2022 03:18
A New Beginning !
spilleronsheet said:
Dear Vamsi
A beautiful poetry from the magical sword of yours
Like a lamp it shines
Amidst the dark tragedies engulfing many a lives
April 8th, 2022 13:17
spilleronsheet said:
Dear Vamsi
A beautiful poetry from the magical sword of yours
Like a lamp it shines
Amidst the dark tragedies engulfing many a lives
April 8th, 2022 13:17
A New Beginning !
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sails of HOPE, spread *them wide
and
let Grace of Nature lead *our way,\'..
Amen!
(what a soothing message, in these days
of bulletin headline, chaotic mindlessness)
thank you! dear Poet
April 7th, 2022 05:20
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sails of HOPE, spread *them wide
and
let Grace of Nature lead *our way,\'..
Amen!
(what a soothing message, in these days
of bulletin headline, chaotic mindlessness)
thank you! dear Poet
April 7th, 2022 05:20
A New Beginning !
Goldfinch60 said:
Hope is the way we all see our futures in life VS.
Andy
April 7th, 2022 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Hope is the way we all see our futures in life VS.
Andy
April 7th, 2022 00:45
MISS You !!!
Paul Bell said:
I\'m thinking you\'re missing him, though not conclusive, is he elusive on purpose.
March 30th, 2022 10:42
Paul Bell said:
I\'m thinking you\'re missing him, though not conclusive, is he elusive on purpose.
March 30th, 2022 10:42
MISS You !!!
spilleronsheet said:
A beautiful piece
And a sincere call
So well worded my dear
Couldn’t stop by getting attracted to its core
I found myself hooking to your lines
As if I was being missed in those times
Very beautiful dear Vamsi
Each word yearned
Wedded with emotions in each line
March 30th, 2022 07:43
spilleronsheet said:
A beautiful piece
And a sincere call
So well worded my dear
Couldn’t stop by getting attracted to its core
I found myself hooking to your lines
As if I was being missed in those times
Very beautiful dear Vamsi
Each word yearned
Wedded with emotions in each line
March 30th, 2022 07:43
MISS You !!!
Rocky Lagou said:
Yearning is definitely such a nagging thing. It could also be a nice reminder though. Like your assonance though!
March 29th, 2022 13:24
Rocky Lagou said:
Yearning is definitely such a nagging thing. It could also be a nice reminder though. Like your assonance though!
March 29th, 2022 13:24
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