Comments received on poems by Ameljor
A Foolish Heart
L. B. Mek said:
really well versed
the light sing song, qualities
juxtapose
the deep loss and grief you word
a memorable read, thanks for sharing
December 6th, 2021 05:01
L. B. Mek said:
really well versed
the light sing song, qualities
juxtapose
the deep loss and grief you word
a memorable read, thanks for sharing
December 6th, 2021 05:01
A Foolish Heart
Caring dove said:
A sad writing but filled with so much care for this person .
December 5th, 2021 17:28
Caring dove said:
A sad writing but filled with so much care for this person .
December 5th, 2021 17:28
The Narcissist
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful flow
and great control in your wording
of exasperation
allowing us access to the layers
in your meaningful message,
thanks for sharing
December 3rd, 2021 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful flow
and great control in your wording
of exasperation
allowing us access to the layers
in your meaningful message,
thanks for sharing
December 3rd, 2021 05:26
Where Is Heaven
dusk arising said:
I found heaven is all around us, but i found it when my eyes were ready to see.
November 22nd, 2021 07:57
dusk arising said:
I found heaven is all around us, but i found it when my eyes were ready to see.
November 22nd, 2021 07:57
Where Is Heaven
HangingbyaHalo said:
Ooo a change of perspective. Lovely piece.
I love the thought provoking..
“ This morning I woke up,
I had the strangest thought.
What if this place I’m living,
Is the Heaven I have sought?”
I have a poem called awakening that somewhat mirrors this thought process.
Thank you for sharing ❤️
-B-
November 22nd, 2021 04:57
HangingbyaHalo said:
Ooo a change of perspective. Lovely piece.
I love the thought provoking..
“ This morning I woke up,
I had the strangest thought.
What if this place I’m living,
Is the Heaven I have sought?”
I have a poem called awakening that somewhat mirrors this thought process.
Thank you for sharing ❤️
-B-
November 22nd, 2021 04:57
Broken Smashed Drunken And Beat
Paul Bell said:
The drug that gets you high, gets you broke, and eventually kills you, now replaced by coke. You can see why the lookers on slowly die with them.
November 20th, 2021 07:57
Paul Bell said:
The drug that gets you high, gets you broke, and eventually kills you, now replaced by coke. You can see why the lookers on slowly die with them.
November 20th, 2021 07:57
Freedom
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing ) everybody wants to feel free and peaceful away from a past that may have been painful
November 19th, 2021 03:50
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing ) everybody wants to feel free and peaceful away from a past that may have been painful
November 19th, 2021 03:50
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