Comments received on poems by th3rdeye
A State of Transition
L. B. Mek said:
\'there\'s no watch that can tell
my time
no person
can kill, my vibe
nobody cant tell me, I ain\'t
tried
sometimes, liquor and pain
just coincide
I avoided suicide
smiling it away, on the outside
keeping it hidden away
deep inside
you, always lacked
the insight
to witness
grim reality\'s, fight
gotta push the envelope
in life
just dont forget
to mail it
my road to success
I\'m dodging the potholes
my aura, is on point
now I feel energy, comin
from the cosmos
no more why me\'s
no talks of could-have-been\'s\'
(Brilliant!
sorry for rudely making suggestion to your wording, dear poet
I meant no disrespect
I just humbly wanted to make your wisdom
accessible to a wider audience..
thank you for sharing, brother
I\'ll strive to heed your words
and shining example
in my life\'s. dogged fight!)
January 13th, 2022 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
\'there\'s no watch that can tell
my time
no person
can kill, my vibe
nobody cant tell me, I ain\'t
tried
sometimes, liquor and pain
just coincide
I avoided suicide
smiling it away, on the outside
keeping it hidden away
deep inside
you, always lacked
the insight
to witness
grim reality\'s, fight
gotta push the envelope
in life
just dont forget
to mail it
my road to success
I\'m dodging the potholes
my aura, is on point
now I feel energy, comin
from the cosmos
no more why me\'s
no talks of could-have-been\'s\'
(Brilliant!
sorry for rudely making suggestion to your wording, dear poet
I meant no disrespect
I just humbly wanted to make your wisdom
accessible to a wider audience..
thank you for sharing, brother
I\'ll strive to heed your words
and shining example
in my life\'s. dogged fight!)
January 13th, 2022 04:49
WHO ARE YOU?
L. B. Mek said:
\'the question
of who i am, more so than who am i
a question
of am i wanting to live or am i living to die,
i guess its about perspective
we perceive change different
and the lesson that i get is that
i received change different
in the end
i can at least say i transitioned, willingly
more appreciative of my past
as my present continues
gifting me\'..
(there is so much depth
in just these few lines
so reading your whole poem
is like swimming
in the deep-end of life: willingly...)
just a sublime write!
thank you for choosing to share
December 17th, 2021 03:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'the question
of who i am, more so than who am i
a question
of am i wanting to live or am i living to die,
i guess its about perspective
we perceive change different
and the lesson that i get is that
i received change different
in the end
i can at least say i transitioned, willingly
more appreciative of my past
as my present continues
gifting me\'..
(there is so much depth
in just these few lines
so reading your whole poem
is like swimming
in the deep-end of life: willingly...)
just a sublime write!
thank you for choosing to share
December 17th, 2021 03:39
WHO ARE YOU?
KomfortKorner said:
Growth and the strength to persevere, nothing you experienced in the past was in vein!!
December 16th, 2021 14:07
KomfortKorner said:
Growth and the strength to persevere, nothing you experienced in the past was in vein!!
December 16th, 2021 14:07
SCRAMBLED
KomfortKorner said:
You\'re getting more in touch with those things you cannot change. Keep going ..
November 30th, 2021 22:16
KomfortKorner said:
You\'re getting more in touch with those things you cannot change. Keep going ..
November 30th, 2021 22:16
YOUR WELCOME
Nicholas Browning said:
This is a pretty good read. Has a nice contrast to most of the other stuff on here. Much enjoyed.
November 26th, 2021 10:59
Nicholas Browning said:
This is a pretty good read. Has a nice contrast to most of the other stuff on here. Much enjoyed.
November 26th, 2021 10:59
YOUR WELCOME
L. B. Mek said:
thank you
mr lyricist, supreme
waterfalls, ain\'t got sh\'t
on u, smooth with it
from \'change
to tripping\', my fingers
be tapping
to your, silent beat
November 25th, 2021 07:01
L. B. Mek said:
thank you
mr lyricist, supreme
waterfalls, ain\'t got sh\'t
on u, smooth with it
from \'change
to tripping\', my fingers
be tapping
to your, silent beat
November 25th, 2021 07:01
VIVID ART
Doggerel Dave said:
;Let\'s see a little more context (Public profile?) They gravestones in your picture?
Welcome to MPS
November 20th, 2021 03:37
Doggerel Dave said:
;Let\'s see a little more context (Public profile?) They gravestones in your picture?
Welcome to MPS
November 20th, 2021 03:37
