Comments received on poems by MKL
Holes to fill
L. B. Mek said:
so relatable, thanks for sharing
(oft
we are so certain, that ending
will be the onset of our demise
and yet
Time, removed we soon realise
that ending, was merely a beginning
to all that next, awaiting our
arrival...)
May 1st, 2023 04:53
L. B. Mek said:
so relatable, thanks for sharing
(oft
we are so certain, that ending
will be the onset of our demise
and yet
Time, removed we soon realise
that ending, was merely a beginning
to all that next, awaiting our
arrival...)
May 1st, 2023 04:53
Tastes
David Wakeling said:
I read this but because the characters are not named I am left asking \"who cares\"
April 26th, 2023 00:07
David Wakeling said:
I read this but because the characters are not named I am left asking \"who cares\"
April 26th, 2023 00:07
Dripping
David Wakeling said:
How depressing.I really struggle to see the purpose of this writing.
April 11th, 2023 00:23
David Wakeling said:
How depressing.I really struggle to see the purpose of this writing.
April 11th, 2023 00:23
Mountain
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, breakups can be such gruelling climbs
worst part, we hardly ever know
if we can survive what we find at that mountain peak...
thanks for sharing
January 27th, 2022 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, breakups can be such gruelling climbs
worst part, we hardly ever know
if we can survive what we find at that mountain peak...
thanks for sharing
January 27th, 2022 05:45
Is love real?
Anna Colette said:
It\'s a complicated thing to love. Some know what it\'s not before they know what it is. Best regards.
November 27th, 2021 10:56
Anna Colette said:
It\'s a complicated thing to love. Some know what it\'s not before they know what it is. Best regards.
November 27th, 2021 10:56
Is love real?
dusk arising said:
Don\'t keep telling yourself you cannot love. That is giving your life to negativity. Love will come to you and come out of you. You will probably feel it and cherish it more than most because of your background. Be patient, it\'s worth it.
November 26th, 2021 12:27
dusk arising said:
Don\'t keep telling yourself you cannot love. That is giving your life to negativity. Love will come to you and come out of you. You will probably feel it and cherish it more than most because of your background. Be patient, it\'s worth it.
November 26th, 2021 12:27
Is love real?
Nicholas Browning said:
From one human being to another, I feel this. A thought provoking read.
Best regards.
November 26th, 2021 12:06
Nicholas Browning said:
From one human being to another, I feel this. A thought provoking read.
Best regards.
November 26th, 2021 12:06
Is love real?
Doggerel Dave said:
Just one one more example of the many uses and abuses of the term \'Love\'.
Take care of yourself.
November 26th, 2021 07:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Just one one more example of the many uses and abuses of the term \'Love\'.
Take care of yourself.
November 26th, 2021 07:35
Is love real?
L. B. Mek said:
does it have a physical form, no
can we feel it, enough
to render it tangible, yes
do we know, how to cherish it
and insure, our own love
is priced: at our worth
before we choose to offer it, no
can we learn - to
Yes!
(thanks for sharing,
I think you imbue
important insight\'s
into your intriguing writes\'
November 26th, 2021 06:09
L. B. Mek said:
does it have a physical form, no
can we feel it, enough
to render it tangible, yes
do we know, how to cherish it
and insure, our own love
is priced: at our worth
before we choose to offer it, no
can we learn - to
Yes!
(thanks for sharing,
I think you imbue
important insight\'s
into your intriguing writes\'
November 26th, 2021 06:09
Am I a temple?
L. B. Mek said:
this starkly worded, defiance
to society\'s, most depraved ideology
should be a necessary read
to every child, on the cusp of adulthood;
I have always found the notion
of sex, warped into a doing-to - act
as the most
macabre betrayal of ourselves,
as People..
why is there this flawed assumption
that the act of sex, necessitates
one person, relinquishing
and the other - taking?
by what measure?
because one has a higher libido
than the other?
that\'s just complete, bull sh\'t!
two people, Choose
to interact, in an act
of their mutual attraction\'s
physical expression,
Both agree - willingly.
But, the old farts
want to vilify this freedom
we have been granted, by Nature.
Word it,
so its something shameful
instead
of teaching our children
how
to enjoy and respect this gift,
we\'re convinced
its something
to hide
a sinister act, that demeans
our capacity
for virtue and righteousness.
(Dear poet,
although I may be a complete stranger
and these words, are arriving
in your life, too late
please, know
You: are not at fault
for how you\'ve been Made, to feel\'
Own your Body
Own your Sexuality
Own your Independence
Own: your Life!)
thank you for sharing
and I apologise, in advance
if you find any offense
with my rather overzealous reply
in my own foolish way,
I meant well, sincerely
November 26th, 2021 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
this starkly worded, defiance
to society\'s, most depraved ideology
should be a necessary read
to every child, on the cusp of adulthood;
I have always found the notion
of sex, warped into a doing-to - act
as the most
macabre betrayal of ourselves,
as People..
why is there this flawed assumption
that the act of sex, necessitates
one person, relinquishing
and the other - taking?
by what measure?
because one has a higher libido
than the other?
that\'s just complete, bull sh\'t!
two people, Choose
to interact, in an act
of their mutual attraction\'s
physical expression,
Both agree - willingly.
But, the old farts
want to vilify this freedom
we have been granted, by Nature.
Word it,
so its something shameful
instead
of teaching our children
how
to enjoy and respect this gift,
we\'re convinced
its something
to hide
a sinister act, that demeans
our capacity
for virtue and righteousness.
(Dear poet,
although I may be a complete stranger
and these words, are arriving
in your life, too late
please, know
You: are not at fault
for how you\'ve been Made, to feel\'
Own your Body
Own your Sexuality
Own your Independence
Own: your Life!)
thank you for sharing
and I apologise, in advance
if you find any offense
with my rather overzealous reply
in my own foolish way,
I meant well, sincerely
November 26th, 2021 05:15
I don’t want to be you
L. B. Mek said:
your unfiltered style is intriguing
thanks for sharing
\'Someone who quits
Who *lets other\'s* down
Who is always the victim\'
November 25th, 2021 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
your unfiltered style is intriguing
thanks for sharing
\'Someone who quits
Who *lets other\'s* down
Who is always the victim\'
November 25th, 2021 04:39
