Comments received on poems by jim56
winters night
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem the repetition feels like the continual returning of thoughts when there is a loss. Powerful.
October 27th, 2024 05:54
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem the repetition feels like the continual returning of thoughts when there is a loss. Powerful.
October 27th, 2024 05:54
angel love
Goldfinch60 said:
Fly away together into that wonderful world of love Jim.
Andy
October 27th, 2024 02:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Fly away together into that wonderful world of love Jim.
Andy
October 27th, 2024 02:29
angel love
sorenbarrett said:
Romance in a poem full of fanciful flight to the heights of love
October 26th, 2024 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
Romance in a poem full of fanciful flight to the heights of love
October 26th, 2024 08:19
good days bad days
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Jim but I consider that all my days will be good.
Andy
October 26th, 2024 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Jim but I consider that all my days will be good.
Andy
October 26th, 2024 01:07
good days bad days
sorenbarrett said:
Some times not knowing is the best, like a wrapped present it is a surprise waiting to be opened. Anticipation is the best part. Loved the poem Jim
October 25th, 2024 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
Some times not knowing is the best, like a wrapped present it is a surprise waiting to be opened. Anticipation is the best part. Loved the poem Jim
October 25th, 2024 05:07
a guide dogs story
sorenbarrett said:
A great story of man\'s best friend. Loved the rhyme and some internal rhyme madeit all the better.
October 24th, 2024 07:30
sorenbarrett said:
A great story of man\'s best friend. Loved the rhyme and some internal rhyme madeit all the better.
October 24th, 2024 07:30
back in my memories
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories can bring absolute joy to our lives Jim.
Andy
October 24th, 2024 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories can bring absolute joy to our lives Jim.
Andy
October 24th, 2024 01:24
back in my memories
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful thought that lifts the day. So nicely stated in poetic verse it reaches out to me and I too feel touched by it.
October 23rd, 2024 07:01
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful thought that lifts the day. So nicely stated in poetic verse it reaches out to me and I too feel touched by it.
October 23rd, 2024 07:01
lifes school
jim56 said:
life is there to learn as we go along
thanks for comment means a lot
October 22nd, 2024 06:06
jim56 said:
life is there to learn as we go along
thanks for comment means a lot
October 22nd, 2024 06:06
lifes school
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded in the beginning of this poem language remniscent of a child learning. Well done
October 22nd, 2024 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded in the beginning of this poem language remniscent of a child learning. Well done
October 22nd, 2024 06:02
empty heart
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been in that place when my wife dies five years ago, but luckily life moves on.
Andy
October 22nd, 2024 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been in that place when my wife dies five years ago, but luckily life moves on.
Andy
October 22nd, 2024 01:40
we dont die
sorenbarrett said:
An old gospel song (I\'ll fly away) Although not religious myself I always loved that song. A beautiful thought
October 21st, 2024 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
An old gospel song (I\'ll fly away) Although not religious myself I always loved that song. A beautiful thought
October 21st, 2024 06:31
empty heart
sorenbarrett said:
Loneliness is an empty place and can only be filled by others, that is why solitary confinement is reserved for the worst offenses.
October 20th, 2024 06:25
sorenbarrett said:
Loneliness is an empty place and can only be filled by others, that is why solitary confinement is reserved for the worst offenses.
October 20th, 2024 06:25
goodbye liam
Cheeky Missy said:
Curiosity killed the proverbial cat, but I\'m dissatisfied with the official report. Sad indeed such a handsome fellow lost his life at such a young age. Beautifully rendered with a hauntingly apt poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 19th, 2024 12:39
Cheeky Missy said:
Curiosity killed the proverbial cat, but I\'m dissatisfied with the official report. Sad indeed such a handsome fellow lost his life at such a young age. Beautifully rendered with a hauntingly apt poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 19th, 2024 12:39
my best friend
Thad Wilk said:
Awww, what a lovely
poem and dedication
to your cat 😺
and best friend!! 💯
Awesome read,
great rhyme,
flow and blend!! 🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 19th, 2024 10:32
Thad Wilk said:
Awww, what a lovely
poem and dedication
to your cat 😺
and best friend!! 💯
Awesome read,
great rhyme,
flow and blend!! 🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 19th, 2024 10:32
my best friend
Goldfinch60 said:
Pets in our life can be so wonderful Jim.
Andy
October 19th, 2024 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Pets in our life can be so wonderful Jim.
Andy
October 19th, 2024 01:26
my best friend
sorenbarrett said:
The images you have created bring back memories I have of cats I have had in the past. Very nicely written Jim
October 18th, 2024 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
The images you have created bring back memories I have of cats I have had in the past. Very nicely written Jim
October 18th, 2024 05:22
world love
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true jim, love will fix all troubles in our world.
Andy
October 18th, 2024 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true jim, love will fix all troubles in our world.
Andy
October 18th, 2024 01:17
world love
peet said:
Let your lines bring more love to the world. Nice write.
October 17th, 2024 11:48
peet said:
Let your lines bring more love to the world. Nice write.
October 17th, 2024 11:48
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