Comments received on poems by jim56



will the war be over
2781 said:

If they stop what they start, villany gets the praise.

November 27th, 2024 08:11

will the war be over
sorenbarrett said:

A poem for peace, a noble cause nicely written Jim

November 27th, 2024 07:40

will the war be over
Cassie58 said:

We just want the war to end, but not at the expense of dictators winning and stamping their feet on more territory. I hope Trump can do an acceptable deal. Too much killing in this world of ours, too much suffering and violence. A very topical subject Jim, pulls on the heart strings. Have a happy Wednesday.

November 27th, 2024 06:57

life
Cassie58 said:

That’s what we can expect from life Jim. The good, the bad and the inbetween. You have summed up this so well in your poem and the play on our emotions. Hope your day has been good.

November 26th, 2024 16:36

life
Caring dove said:

Well , we can’t always be strong ..

November 26th, 2024 15:31

life
Tony36 said:

Great write Jim

November 26th, 2024 10:46

life
sorenbarrett said:

The duality of life it has its good and it’s bad points just as a whole other things to nicely written Jim

November 26th, 2024 06:31

united hearts
NafisaSB said:

lovely poem. hope every one gets a mate who lasts a lifetime

November 26th, 2024 00:38

ding a ling
Cassie58 said:

Hello Jim, another little Christmas poem. I reckon I heard those bells. Out shopping today for presents for the family. Lots of fun. Take care. I enjoyed your lines.

November 25th, 2024 16:44

ding a ling
sorenbarrett said:

This one reminded me of the song by Chuck Berry, my Dingaling, but then that was not a Christmas song. Very nice Jim.

November 25th, 2024 15:51

lovebird love
Caring dove said:

Some things are meant to be .. sadly some things aren’t … nice writing anyway

November 25th, 2024 12:36

dove song
rin said:

I once passed a dove on the side of the road.
Japanese doves are not alert at all.
That\'s because Japanese people eat whales but not doves.

November 24th, 2024 19:42

dove song
Cassie58 said:

Such a beautiful write Jim about one of the loveliest of our avian friends. Wonderful imagery here. Very much enjoyed on an abysmal weekend weather wise. Keep warm and dry.

November 24th, 2024 17:01

dove song
sorenbarrett said:

Tranquil and beautiful this poem speaks of nature and feels light and airy. Very nicely done.

November 24th, 2024 07:18

believe in you
Caring dove said:

Self love snd self belief important although some people struggle and miss out too much in life and that’s unfair

November 23rd, 2024 12:59

grand kids
Caring dove said:

Grandkids … oh right ….

November 23rd, 2024 12:57

forever friend
Caring dove said:

Sometimes we have ‘ friends ‘ and they don’t want to talk to you anymore .. or we have friend then they don’t want to know ( for some reason

November 23rd, 2024 12:55

christmas happiness
Tony36 said:

Great write Jim

November 23rd, 2024 11:55

christmas happiness
sorenbarrett said:

A seasonal poem Jim. A fun read with a catchy rhyme and rhythm.

November 23rd, 2024 08:10

christmas happiness
Cassie58 said:

Good morning Jim. Christmas is a happy time and I wish people would stop saying happy holidays instead of happy Christmas . It certainly is a great fun time for children. I have such lovely memories of my youngsters waking up on Christmas morning to a sackful of presents. Such a cold day here. Wrap up warm. Enjoyed your festive poem today.

November 23rd, 2024 07:40

united hearts
RSM0812 said:

When two hearts unite. It\'s simple like a picture. A thousand words in 14 lines.

November 23rd, 2024 07:27

united hearts
Cassie58 said:

Love, nothing better. What a beautiful poem Jim. Hope your day has been happy. All good wishes.

November 22nd, 2024 15:13

united hearts
Tony36 said:

Great write Jim

November 22nd, 2024 10:49

united hearts
arqios said:

Written only like one in love can!

November 22nd, 2024 08:57

united hearts
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Beautiful poem Jim. Rings beautifully! ❤️

November 22nd, 2024 08:33

united hearts
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of love reads Idyllic. Written in good verse this poem flows well and rolls off the tongue.

November 22nd, 2024 05:55

special friend
Cassie58 said:

Jim your video and song are delightful. Wonderful that you have a best friend called gill who has been able to be a rock for you when you needed her most. Nice song as well. Hope you are keeping warm today.

November 21st, 2024 12:34

special friend
Caring dove said:

Yeah , you have a nice Christmas aswell ..

November 21st, 2024 10:54

special friend
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

November 21st, 2024 10:30

special friend
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful, very nice and catchy who wrote the music Jim? I loved it

November 21st, 2024 08:17



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