Comments received on poems by AL17
Bottled Bruises
A.D. Small said:
Wow great piece I felt this one deeply great job!!!
April 3rd, 2024 03:25
A.D. Small said:
Wow great piece I felt this one deeply great job!!!
April 3rd, 2024 03:25
Bizarre Affairs
Paul Bell said:
I\'m blaming the promiscuous lot. Had they just went to church like normal people, the pandemic would never have happened. Okay, off to church tonight, maybe a few churches.
July 22nd, 2022 12:29
Paul Bell said:
I\'m blaming the promiscuous lot. Had they just went to church like normal people, the pandemic would never have happened. Okay, off to church tonight, maybe a few churches.
July 22nd, 2022 12:29
Bottled Bruises
madalynsamantha said:
A beautiful poem. I hope she finds the strength to leave him,hugs.❤️
July 21st, 2022 19:05
madalynsamantha said:
A beautiful poem. I hope she finds the strength to leave him,hugs.❤️
July 21st, 2022 19:05
Bottled Bruises
Paul Bell said:
Plenty of them around.
Some eventually snap and leave a corpse, some become the corpse.
July 21st, 2022 11:55
Paul Bell said:
Plenty of them around.
Some eventually snap and leave a corpse, some become the corpse.
July 21st, 2022 11:55
Acid Rain
Paul Bell said:
It\'s nice to know the world is killing us slowly. At some point in time, the animals will laugh at our demise.
July 1st, 2022 14:09
Paul Bell said:
It\'s nice to know the world is killing us slowly. At some point in time, the animals will laugh at our demise.
July 1st, 2022 14:09
What Is Terror?
verona said:
very evocative imagery.
I particularly liked the last couplet. \"Sullied and bloodied are the lives of the innocent,
And justice is murdered with the knife of the ignorant\"
June 28th, 2022 09:43
verona said:
very evocative imagery.
I particularly liked the last couplet. \"Sullied and bloodied are the lives of the innocent,
And justice is murdered with the knife of the ignorant\"
June 28th, 2022 09:43
Acid Rain
dusk arising said:
Such a tender vehicle you have created to carry our message.
Beautiful writing which I would like to add to my favourites and re-read many times.
June 26th, 2022 12:13
dusk arising said:
Such a tender vehicle you have created to carry our message.
Beautiful writing which I would like to add to my favourites and re-read many times.
June 26th, 2022 12:13
Dear Diana
A.D. Small said:
I love all your work its truely amazing.... Great job.
April 16th, 2022 02:58
A.D. Small said:
I love all your work its truely amazing.... Great job.
April 16th, 2022 02:58
The Journey of Life
matthew jay said:
I read all 5 of your poems. I enjoyed this one the most.
March 24th, 2022 10:33
matthew jay said:
I read all 5 of your poems. I enjoyed this one the most.
March 24th, 2022 10:33
The Journey of Life
Charles Edward York said:
From the perspective of a 12-year-old comes a very enlightening and profound sense of perspective and prose. It goes without saying that your piece of poetry is highly commendable and you should be encouraged by this to write more.
March 20th, 2022 00:22
Charles Edward York said:
From the perspective of a 12-year-old comes a very enlightening and profound sense of perspective and prose. It goes without saying that your piece of poetry is highly commendable and you should be encouraged by this to write more.
March 20th, 2022 00:22
The Journey of Life
Christina8 said:
A wonderful poem! Hard to believe you were 12 when you wrote it. Agreeing with Mek on this one, you can grasp freedom before our final demise. Great job!
March 17th, 2022 10:12
Christina8 said:
A wonderful poem! Hard to believe you were 12 when you wrote it. Agreeing with Mek on this one, you can grasp freedom before our final demise. Great job!
March 17th, 2022 10:12
The Journey of Life
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this began as elegiac and slightly downcast, but the last line was such a message. Brilliantly done!
March 17th, 2022 08:18
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this began as elegiac and slightly downcast, but the last line was such a message. Brilliantly done!
March 17th, 2022 08:18
The Journey of Life
dusk arising said:
I thought i was going to be critical of this piece, it\'s title from a 12 year old being somewhat precocious. However I was wrong. THis is very good and at my age 70 very relateable.
Speaks of a great furure in perceptive writing.
March 17th, 2022 07:40
dusk arising said:
I thought i was going to be critical of this piece, it\'s title from a 12 year old being somewhat precocious. However I was wrong. THis is very good and at my age 70 very relateable.
Speaks of a great furure in perceptive writing.
March 17th, 2022 07:40
The Journey of Life
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully worded
although I feel, there\'s freedom
we can grasp
before our final demise, dear poet
thanks for sharing
March 17th, 2022 06:04
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully worded
although I feel, there\'s freedom
we can grasp
before our final demise, dear poet
thanks for sharing
March 17th, 2022 06:04
Not mine
Paul Bell said:
Dictators always tell the people what\'s good for them. I think the Russian people might just know now, and action will be taken.
March 15th, 2022 14:24
Paul Bell said:
Dictators always tell the people what\'s good for them. I think the Russian people might just know now, and action will be taken.
March 15th, 2022 14:24
Not mine
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow what an impactful poem. You truly conveyed this message sincerely. It\'s a rough time we\'re going through but I hope to see better days. An amazing piece of persona poetry right here. Well done and the imagery was very apt for your message.
March 15th, 2022 13:16
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow what an impactful poem. You truly conveyed this message sincerely. It\'s a rough time we\'re going through but I hope to see better days. An amazing piece of persona poetry right here. Well done and the imagery was very apt for your message.
March 15th, 2022 13:16
Beauty\'s Grave
spilleronsheet said:
Are we reckless
Are we ignorant
We don’t love the hands that nurtures and take it for granted
And when she is angry, we blame her
Not realising how much did we hurt
Very insightful and necessary lines
Thanks a lot dear poet for shedding light
December 11th, 2021 13:28
spilleronsheet said:
Are we reckless
Are we ignorant
We don’t love the hands that nurtures and take it for granted
And when she is angry, we blame her
Not realising how much did we hurt
Very insightful and necessary lines
Thanks a lot dear poet for shedding light
December 11th, 2021 13:28
Beauty\'s Grave
Paul Bell said:
Something tells me, mother nature is fighting back and will definitely win in the end.
December 9th, 2021 05:23
Paul Bell said:
Something tells me, mother nature is fighting back and will definitely win in the end.
December 9th, 2021 05:23
Beauty\'s Grave
woundedheart said:
Indeed mother nature has truely suffered at the hands of man, we are only care takers so maybe it is time we all showed the world some care. Lovely poem.
December 9th, 2021 05:15
woundedheart said:
Indeed mother nature has truely suffered at the hands of man, we are only care takers so maybe it is time we all showed the world some care. Lovely poem.
December 9th, 2021 05:15
Red Resurrected
dusk arising said:
When you have a family to feed you take every opportunity to provide what they need...... just ask those who are self employed, the risk takers.
December 7th, 2021 12:36
dusk arising said:
When you have a family to feed you take every opportunity to provide what they need...... just ask those who are self employed, the risk takers.
December 7th, 2021 12:36
Red Resurrected
Paul Bell said:
You\'ve got it in one. The rest of Europe works the hours that suit them. The British worker just works, and even in retirement, he\'ll still be working.
December 7th, 2021 08:30
Paul Bell said:
You\'ve got it in one. The rest of Europe works the hours that suit them. The British worker just works, and even in retirement, he\'ll still be working.
December 7th, 2021 08:30
Red Resurrected
L. B. Mek said:
\'996\' is the kind of work culture
so many others have to deal with...
still, we all fight our own battles
thanks for sharing
December 7th, 2021 06:53
L. B. Mek said:
\'996\' is the kind of work culture
so many others have to deal with...
still, we all fight our own battles
thanks for sharing
December 7th, 2021 06:53
