keep dancing
L. B. Mek said:

young, isn\'t necessarily dumb
just like, end rhyme
doesn\'t necessarily negate
the fact that
what you\'re writing, isn\'t a poem
(lookup pop music \'lyrics\'
for reference) lol
let the rhymes find you, while you\'re
noting down a few sincere thought\'s
let that, be your mapping
to excavating that poetry
from within...
thanks for sharing, a really interesting read
and Happy New Year!


January 4th, 2022 05:54

speak up
orchidee said:

Good write Blue.

January 3rd, 2022 03:08

Fleeting life
spilleronsheet said:

The poetry is sad
The grief could be felt
Very emotive and strong Margery used
If life a desert and a dream as a mirage
Then the vast desert shall be a sea of opportunities soon
The dreams are wings for us to make a flight
Don’t let them go by
Even though i am sad to see the dreams fading by
Keep writing dear poet
Your pen creates magic
Keep sharing

December 18th, 2021 12:15