Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Broken
Bella Shepard said:
Astutely observed, and finely written! You force one to ponder the plight of human relationships. Disquieting, but nonetheless needed. Thank you for this thought provoking piece, emphasis on \"thought\".
January 7th, 2024 14:41
Bella Shepard said:
Astutely observed, and finely written! You force one to ponder the plight of human relationships. Disquieting, but nonetheless needed. Thank you for this thought provoking piece, emphasis on \"thought\".
January 7th, 2024 14:41
Broken
orchidee said:
A bit of oxi-wotsit and vaso- whatsisname never did anyone any harm! lol.
January 7th, 2024 09:05
orchidee said:
A bit of oxi-wotsit and vaso- whatsisname never did anyone any harm! lol.
January 7th, 2024 09:05
In dreams
Doggerel Dave said:
A parable about world events, I think. They happen, I don\'t witness them, but only later does their importance reach me, sometimes effect me.
Admiration for the construction and rhyme as usual, Soren.
January 6th, 2024 20:03
Doggerel Dave said:
A parable about world events, I think. They happen, I don\'t witness them, but only later does their importance reach me, sometimes effect me.
Admiration for the construction and rhyme as usual, Soren.
January 6th, 2024 20:03
Poison\'s antidote
arqios said:
Reminds me how missing teeth had been the gifting of this child’s lemon 🍋 drop 🍬 🍭 delusion!
January 5th, 2024 18:50
arqios said:
Reminds me how missing teeth had been the gifting of this child’s lemon 🍋 drop 🍬 🍭 delusion!
January 5th, 2024 18:50
Duality
Dev Parth said:
🌈 Life\'s dichotomy: separation and reunion, darkness and light. 🔄 The dance of beginnings and endings reveals profound truths. 🤝 Forgiveness and complexity coexist on the slate of existence. 🧠 Knowledge emerges from the surrender of ignorance. 💪 Strength blooms in the soil of vulnerability. 👀 True vision found in the depths of blindness. 🦸♂️ Courage born from the shadows of fear. 🕵️ Lies unveil the elusive face of truth. 💰 Richness discovered in letting go of material ties. 🔄🤲 Trust woven delicately through promises and uncertainties. ☮️💔 Peace emerges from life\'s conflicts, and in death, life persists. 🌌🔄 From nothingness springs the infinite cosmos. 🌟🤝 Unity prevails in the cosmic dance of duality.
Great thought
Dev
January 4th, 2024 10:17
Dev Parth said:
🌈 Life\'s dichotomy: separation and reunion, darkness and light. 🔄 The dance of beginnings and endings reveals profound truths. 🤝 Forgiveness and complexity coexist on the slate of existence. 🧠 Knowledge emerges from the surrender of ignorance. 💪 Strength blooms in the soil of vulnerability. 👀 True vision found in the depths of blindness. 🦸♂️ Courage born from the shadows of fear. 🕵️ Lies unveil the elusive face of truth. 💰 Richness discovered in letting go of material ties. 🔄🤲 Trust woven delicately through promises and uncertainties. ☮️💔 Peace emerges from life\'s conflicts, and in death, life persists. 🌌🔄 From nothingness springs the infinite cosmos. 🌟🤝 Unity prevails in the cosmic dance of duality.
Great thought
Dev
January 4th, 2024 10:17
Duality
arqios said:
That divine aspect of life’s paradoxes is truly something to behold!
January 4th, 2024 06:27
arqios said:
That divine aspect of life’s paradoxes is truly something to behold!
January 4th, 2024 06:27
Politically correct
arqios said:
And where would all end, PC shall reign supreme. So it would seem.
January 2nd, 2024 09:44
arqios said:
And where would all end, PC shall reign supreme. So it would seem.
January 2nd, 2024 09:44
Politically correct
orchidee said:
Is it PC for Fido, me imaginary dog, to bark at folk who \'forget\' to mark poems 18+ when they should?
He\'s a one, he\'s vicious with that. lol.
Other times he just sits by the fireplace in his slippers and reads, or quiet things like that.
January 2nd, 2024 06:08
orchidee said:
Is it PC for Fido, me imaginary dog, to bark at folk who \'forget\' to mark poems 18+ when they should?
He\'s a one, he\'s vicious with that. lol.
Other times he just sits by the fireplace in his slippers and reads, or quiet things like that.
January 2nd, 2024 06:08
Time
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
I lost the hour hand on me clock. For me, it\'s always something \'past\', or something \'to\' the hour, but I never know what hour it is. Doh! lol.
e.g. 20 past x hour; or 10 to y hour. Aghh, not algebra too!
January 1st, 2024 08:40
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
I lost the hour hand on me clock. For me, it\'s always something \'past\', or something \'to\' the hour, but I never know what hour it is. Doh! lol.
e.g. 20 past x hour; or 10 to y hour. Aghh, not algebra too!
January 1st, 2024 08:40
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