Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Peace on earth, good will
orchidee said:
Some versions amend it to something like \'Peace on earth; good will to men with whom God is pleased\'. But He isn\'t pleased with those who go on sinning.
Yes, we should respect trees, etc. Many have been around longer than us, unless you\'re 100 million years old, like Goldfinch and I are! lol.
December 13th, 2024 03:23
orchidee said:
Some versions amend it to something like \'Peace on earth; good will to men with whom God is pleased\'. But He isn\'t pleased with those who go on sinning.
Yes, we should respect trees, etc. Many have been around longer than us, unless you\'re 100 million years old, like Goldfinch and I are! lol.
December 13th, 2024 03:23
Undeserving
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren showing those things that happen and slip passed us.
Andy
December 13th, 2024 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words soren showing those things that happen and slip passed us.
Andy
December 13th, 2024 02:16
Once there was a time
sheta said:
beautifully composed
i sounds like children
December 13th, 2024 00:15
sheta said:
beautifully composed
i sounds like children
December 13th, 2024 00:15
Undeserving
vicecream said:
I’ve always believed that the searing pain of guilt is itself the price to be paid for wrongdoing; that true justice is brought on by the internal process of feeling guilt, learning from it, and (hopefully) working through it into self forgiveness. It is human to make mistakes. Now what defines the future is how do we move forward from them
December 12th, 2024 09:32
vicecream said:
I’ve always believed that the searing pain of guilt is itself the price to be paid for wrongdoing; that true justice is brought on by the internal process of feeling guilt, learning from it, and (hopefully) working through it into self forgiveness. It is human to make mistakes. Now what defines the future is how do we move forward from them
December 12th, 2024 09:32
Undeserving
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yup…this is how it is! Contentment and happiness are ever fleeting, as expressed so poignantly in this poem! 🌹👏
December 12th, 2024 07:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yup…this is how it is! Contentment and happiness are ever fleeting, as expressed so poignantly in this poem! 🌹👏
December 12th, 2024 07:07
Undeserving
Teddy.15 said:
What a way to see something fade. Memory or other kudos dear friend. 🌹
December 12th, 2024 04:11
Teddy.15 said:
What a way to see something fade. Memory or other kudos dear friend. 🌹
December 12th, 2024 04:11
Undeserving
Neville said:
Unfortunately, that\'s the way the cookie crumbles .. it\'s so unfair .. but not new, it just goes round and around .. perfect penmanship displayed .. Neville 👍
December 12th, 2024 04:10
Neville said:
Unfortunately, that\'s the way the cookie crumbles .. it\'s so unfair .. but not new, it just goes round and around .. perfect penmanship displayed .. Neville 👍
December 12th, 2024 04:10
Undeserving
David Wakeling said:
This is well constructed. I like the rhyme. Guilt and shame are always with us.
December 12th, 2024 03:48
David Wakeling said:
This is well constructed. I like the rhyme. Guilt and shame are always with us.
December 12th, 2024 03:48
Undeserving
arqios said:
For me this poem captures the frustration of life\'s fleeting joys and the weight of guilt and shame that makes them unattainable. The imagery of \"dissolving threads of sunlight\" and \"water between fingers\" poignantly illustrates the elusive nature of happiness and fulfilment. Yet a beautifully haunting reflection on the transient beauty in our lives.
December 12th, 2024 03:47
arqios said:
For me this poem captures the frustration of life\'s fleeting joys and the weight of guilt and shame that makes them unattainable. The imagery of \"dissolving threads of sunlight\" and \"water between fingers\" poignantly illustrates the elusive nature of happiness and fulfilment. Yet a beautifully haunting reflection on the transient beauty in our lives.
December 12th, 2024 03:47
Mist
arqios said:
I am loving the ephemeral beauty of a misty morning, where the interplay of light and shadow creates a sense of magic and wonder. The emphasis appears to be the fleeting and transformative moments in nature, where the mundane becomes extraordinary!
December 12th, 2024 02:45
arqios said:
I am loving the ephemeral beauty of a misty morning, where the interplay of light and shadow creates a sense of magic and wonder. The emphasis appears to be the fleeting and transformative moments in nature, where the mundane becomes extraordinary!
December 12th, 2024 02:45
Mist
Thad Wilk said:
Wonderfully vivid view
of the mornings sunrise! 🌄 🌅
Mellifluously penned my friend!!
Thanks for sharing your
superb poetic vision!! 🏆
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 11th, 2024 21:38
Thad Wilk said:
Wonderfully vivid view
of the mornings sunrise! 🌄 🌅
Mellifluously penned my friend!!
Thanks for sharing your
superb poetic vision!! 🏆
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 11th, 2024 21:38
Mist
Cassie58 said:
Stunning imagery of the sun breaking through the mist at dawn. Have seen that so many times on the river and it really is ghostly in its appearance. A word painting Soren. Just wonderful.
December 11th, 2024 07:57
Cassie58 said:
Stunning imagery of the sun breaking through the mist at dawn. Have seen that so many times on the river and it really is ghostly in its appearance. A word painting Soren. Just wonderful.
December 11th, 2024 07:57
The perfect poem
NafisaSB said:
TWO WORDS THAT ENCOMPASS A WORLD OF MEANING- THIS IS INDED BREVITY AT IT\'S BEST.
NEXT POEM ON YOURSELF [TITLED ME , MYSELF AND PERHAPS A BIT LONGER ?]
WAITING EAGERLY
December 11th, 2024 06:17
NafisaSB said:
TWO WORDS THAT ENCOMPASS A WORLD OF MEANING- THIS IS INDED BREVITY AT IT\'S BEST.
NEXT POEM ON YOURSELF [TITLED ME , MYSELF AND PERHAPS A BIT LONGER ?]
WAITING EAGERLY
December 11th, 2024 06:17
Mist
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Even though it is dark and no doubt dreary by me (we in the Northeast US need the rain)…you helped me see the sunrise and got me hungry for breakfast at the same time! Love that description of the sun rays! Well done, Soren!. 🌹👏
December 11th, 2024 06:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Even though it is dark and no doubt dreary by me (we in the Northeast US need the rain)…you helped me see the sunrise and got me hungry for breakfast at the same time! Love that description of the sun rays! Well done, Soren!. 🌹👏
December 11th, 2024 06:14
Mist
rin said:
I don\'t know if it\'s surrealism, but that\'s the image I got.
December 11th, 2024 05:02
rin said:
I don\'t know if it\'s surrealism, but that\'s the image I got.
December 11th, 2024 05:02
Mist
Teddy.15 said:
Absolutely stunning imagery and so joyful at the end, in Tuscany we have these exact moments early in the morning this time of year, wonderful poetry as yours always is my dear sorrenbarret perfectly composed in a scene. 🌹
December 11th, 2024 04:07
Teddy.15 said:
Absolutely stunning imagery and so joyful at the end, in Tuscany we have these exact moments early in the morning this time of year, wonderful poetry as yours always is my dear sorrenbarret perfectly composed in a scene. 🌹
December 11th, 2024 04:07
Words of the prophets
Goldfinch60 said:
Wise words can come from some very surprising places soren.
Andy
December 11th, 2024 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Wise words can come from some very surprising places soren.
Andy
December 11th, 2024 02:15
Words of the prophets
Dan Williams said:
I love how this makes me cringe with gospel truth. Should be \"words from a prophet\".
December 11th, 2024 01:20
Dan Williams said:
I love how this makes me cringe with gospel truth. Should be \"words from a prophet\".
December 11th, 2024 01:20
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