Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Surrender
Doggerel Dave said:
Could well make it to a tombstone, Soren. A polished piece on polished marble
December 12th, 2023 15:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Could well make it to a tombstone, Soren. A polished piece on polished marble
December 12th, 2023 15:59
A tooth ache
Natalie Gladmir said:
I\'m very sorry, but judging by these truthful lines, you suffered very much. Please take proper care of yourself. Health is a great treasure.
December 5th, 2023 16:08
Natalie Gladmir said:
I\'m very sorry, but judging by these truthful lines, you suffered very much. Please take proper care of yourself. Health is a great treasure.
December 5th, 2023 16:08
Ghost of a dream
Doggerel Dave said:
Happened upon (though thankfully not involved with) a few for whom the desire for \'a savior with a slaves behavior\' was present. The need to exert power and control for its own sake as a desirable way of interacting with others brings forth some almost-homicidal tendencies in me.
Message wrapped up in plenty of poetic metaphor which took, for me, some unravelling but worth the effort, Soren.
December 2nd, 2023 19:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Happened upon (though thankfully not involved with) a few for whom the desire for \'a savior with a slaves behavior\' was present. The need to exert power and control for its own sake as a desirable way of interacting with others brings forth some almost-homicidal tendencies in me.
Message wrapped up in plenty of poetic metaphor which took, for me, some unravelling but worth the effort, Soren.
December 2nd, 2023 19:19
Eye of a madman
joshi said:
What was yesterday is not today,
notes must change for the music to play...
this is definitely going on my insta and I will mention you in CAPS.
I was expecting this to be a perspective poem but whatever it is, in the end it\'s a work of art.
November 25th, 2023 09:24
joshi said:
What was yesterday is not today,
notes must change for the music to play...
this is definitely going on my insta and I will mention you in CAPS.
I was expecting this to be a perspective poem but whatever it is, in the end it\'s a work of art.
November 25th, 2023 09:24
Eye of a madman
arqios said:
It makes one think how costly this business really is! Thanks for sharing. Good to be reading you again.
November 25th, 2023 08:47
arqios said:
It makes one think how costly this business really is! Thanks for sharing. Good to be reading you again.
November 25th, 2023 08:47
Eye of a madman
Doggerel Dave said:
First two lines, I woz with you, Soren - I won\'t be forgetting this idea in a hurry....... I slide quickly over the blast at \'science\' and land squarely on \'What was yesterday--- music to play\'
You know - the style and rhythm (almost) got me in..... Good stuff....
November 24th, 2023 17:40
Doggerel Dave said:
First two lines, I woz with you, Soren - I won\'t be forgetting this idea in a hurry....... I slide quickly over the blast at \'science\' and land squarely on \'What was yesterday--- music to play\'
You know - the style and rhythm (almost) got me in..... Good stuff....
November 24th, 2023 17:40
Rights that are left
Goldfinch60 said:
Man is the most dangerous animal in the world soren.
Andy
November 17th, 2023 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Man is the most dangerous animal in the world soren.
Andy
November 17th, 2023 02:10
Rights that are left
Cedrick said:
man is the top apex predator. Great write btw
November 16th, 2023 15:47
Cedrick said:
man is the top apex predator. Great write btw
November 16th, 2023 15:47
Rights that are left
Doggerel Dave said:
Up to your usual neat puzzle poem standard Soren.
Not sure man has the right to confer rights at all, right?
November 16th, 2023 15:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Up to your usual neat puzzle poem standard Soren.
Not sure man has the right to confer rights at all, right?
November 16th, 2023 15:07
Rights that are left
2781 said:
Top of the food chain, we destroy ourselves.
November 16th, 2023 14:16
2781 said:
Top of the food chain, we destroy ourselves.
November 16th, 2023 14:16
One small voice
Teddy.15 said:
Imagery is superb and so too the metaphor. 🩷
November 10th, 2023 00:46
Teddy.15 said:
Imagery is superb and so too the metaphor. 🩷
November 10th, 2023 00:46
One small voice
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
I thought paradigm was a pair of dimes (U.S. money). lol.
November 9th, 2023 14:18
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
I thought paradigm was a pair of dimes (U.S. money). lol.
November 9th, 2023 14:18
No one
rhmn_7 said:
You have witnessed yourself, so there is someone in that story.
October 22nd, 2023 09:04
rhmn_7 said:
You have witnessed yourself, so there is someone in that story.
October 22nd, 2023 09:04
No one
Firefall said:
What amazing experiences! You can feel your love of nature.
October 17th, 2023 16:04
Firefall said:
What amazing experiences! You can feel your love of nature.
October 17th, 2023 16:04
No one
orchidee said:
I never knew ya did all that already, being only age, erm, 21 again! heehee.
October 17th, 2023 09:49
orchidee said:
I never knew ya did all that already, being only age, erm, 21 again! heehee.
October 17th, 2023 09:49
No one
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks for the read Teddy your comments always humble me.
October 17th, 2023 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks for the read Teddy your comments always humble me.
October 17th, 2023 08:43
No one
Teddy.15 said:
I read something very similar on your home notes which I found incredibly marvelous. You truly are inspiring Sorenbarret ❤️
October 17th, 2023 08:09
Teddy.15 said:
I read something very similar on your home notes which I found incredibly marvelous. You truly are inspiring Sorenbarret ❤️
October 17th, 2023 08:09
No one
Pop64 said:
A person who has seen and done so much, Wonderfully descriptive write
October 17th, 2023 06:44
Pop64 said:
A person who has seen and done so much, Wonderfully descriptive write
October 17th, 2023 06:44
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