Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
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Goldfinch60 said:
Age can be like that for many soren but blessfully not for all.
Andy
February 19th, 2024 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Age can be like that for many soren but blessfully not for all.
Andy
February 19th, 2024 02:58
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Doggerel Dave said:
Can\'t reach in there for the metaphor, but can vividly remember the feeling of loss when an old, familiar, much repaired (don\'t see many of them these days) pair of boots are consigned to the bin having sat in the back of the cupboard for far too long, dusty musty and mouldy....
February 18th, 2024 07:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Can\'t reach in there for the metaphor, but can vividly remember the feeling of loss when an old, familiar, much repaired (don\'t see many of them these days) pair of boots are consigned to the bin having sat in the back of the cupboard for far too long, dusty musty and mouldy....
February 18th, 2024 07:13
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arqios said:
Sometimes we can feel like a discarded shoe. I may be taking the metaphor elsewhere. But that’s the strength of the poem.
February 18th, 2024 06:34
arqios said:
Sometimes we can feel like a discarded shoe. I may be taking the metaphor elsewhere. But that’s the strength of the poem.
February 18th, 2024 06:34
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Teddy.15 said:
Maybe you have just described how I feel somedays. Very clever and brilliant imagery as always. 🌹
February 18th, 2024 06:21
Teddy.15 said:
Maybe you have just described how I feel somedays. Very clever and brilliant imagery as always. 🌹
February 18th, 2024 06:21
Dark to light
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful, beautiful words soren to lead me into this \'new Spring day\'.
Andy
February 18th, 2024 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful, beautiful words soren to lead me into this \'new Spring day\'.
Andy
February 18th, 2024 02:21
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orchidee said:
You know that Helios chappie?!
It\'s not a person, daft Orchi, says Fido! lol.
February 17th, 2024 11:09
orchidee said:
You know that Helios chappie?!
It\'s not a person, daft Orchi, says Fido! lol.
February 17th, 2024 11:09
Choices
2781 said:
More thought provoking- if I hadn\'t read your comment I would find it a critique of today, if not tomorrow.
February 17th, 2024 06:43
2781 said:
More thought provoking- if I hadn\'t read your comment I would find it a critique of today, if not tomorrow.
February 17th, 2024 06:43
Dark to light
Teddy.15 said:
Utter beauty within your lines I was totally hynotized and in a spin right to the end and then I saw it I saw spring. Another kudos dear sorenbarret. 🌹 Thank you for sharing your poetry I am so sincerely excited each time to read your magnificent work. 🤗
February 17th, 2024 05:34
Teddy.15 said:
Utter beauty within your lines I was totally hynotized and in a spin right to the end and then I saw it I saw spring. Another kudos dear sorenbarret. 🌹 Thank you for sharing your poetry I am so sincerely excited each time to read your magnificent work. 🤗
February 17th, 2024 05:34
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Doggerel Dave said:
Solid build there, Soren. capped with the last four lines of which the first and last really anchor the whole piece for me.
February 16th, 2024 19:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Solid build there, Soren. capped with the last four lines of which the first and last really anchor the whole piece for me.
February 16th, 2024 19:21
Make me one to go
Olaf Gatermann said:
Witty. I like your kind of humour... O.
February 16th, 2024 15:41
Olaf Gatermann said:
Witty. I like your kind of humour... O.
February 16th, 2024 15:41
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Teddy.15 said:
A very sad day for the world your poem is timeless, as ever making the reader digest your thoughts and reflections, fabulous last words sadly true my dear friend. A superb and extremely powerful piece of poetry. 🌹
February 16th, 2024 12:10
Teddy.15 said:
A very sad day for the world your poem is timeless, as ever making the reader digest your thoughts and reflections, fabulous last words sadly true my dear friend. A superb and extremely powerful piece of poetry. 🌹
February 16th, 2024 12:10
Make me one to go
Goldfinch60 said:
We may well be fleeced soren but all we have done is been moved to a better place in our lives.
Andy
February 16th, 2024 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
We may well be fleeced soren but all we have done is been moved to a better place in our lives.
Andy
February 16th, 2024 02:19
Make me one to go
Teddy.15 said:
This reminds me of Limoncello a shot glass filled with southern lemons and it\'s just what the doctor ordered any time after dinner. 🤗
February 15th, 2024 12:23
Teddy.15 said:
This reminds me of Limoncello a shot glass filled with southern lemons and it\'s just what the doctor ordered any time after dinner. 🤗
February 15th, 2024 12:23
Make me one to go
Bella Shepard said:
Such a potent sensory feel to this poem. As I read I can smell the lemon, taste its tartness and visualize the empty shell. Good things come in small packages, and here something wonderful!
February 15th, 2024 09:06
Bella Shepard said:
Such a potent sensory feel to this poem. As I read I can smell the lemon, taste its tartness and visualize the empty shell. Good things come in small packages, and here something wonderful!
February 15th, 2024 09:06
Make me one to go
orchidee said:
I must be briefer sometimes. Is it the soul of wit - brevity? From \'Hamlet\'. Lots of Shakey\'s quotable quotes in that, but he also said some daft stuff, I think.
February 15th, 2024 02:57
orchidee said:
I must be briefer sometimes. Is it the soul of wit - brevity? From \'Hamlet\'. Lots of Shakey\'s quotable quotes in that, but he also said some daft stuff, I think.
February 15th, 2024 02:57
A white crow on black snow
Goldfinch60 said:
So true soren, many people just do not want to see beyond the accepted reality.
Andy
February 15th, 2024 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
So true soren, many people just do not want to see beyond the accepted reality.
Andy
February 15th, 2024 02:25
Prevarication
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d give both an equal rating, Soren. Circumstances dictate outcome..........
February 15th, 2024 00:34
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d give both an equal rating, Soren. Circumstances dictate outcome..........
February 15th, 2024 00:34
A white crow on black snow
arqios said:
A white crow in white snow ❄️ like coal lump eyes would be the only clue. This poem has me thinking on several tangents!
February 14th, 2024 05:59
arqios said:
A white crow in white snow ❄️ like coal lump eyes would be the only clue. This poem has me thinking on several tangents!
February 14th, 2024 05:59
A white crow on black snow
Teddy.15 said:
I always believe we each have a story and that we should treat eachother with compassion and empathy and never to judge a book by it\'s cover dear sorenbarret, another breathtaking piece of poetry which makes the reader pause to look through all the imagery. Your first lines to your last just wonderful. 🌹
February 14th, 2024 03:58
Teddy.15 said:
I always believe we each have a story and that we should treat eachother with compassion and empathy and never to judge a book by it\'s cover dear sorenbarret, another breathtaking piece of poetry which makes the reader pause to look through all the imagery. Your first lines to your last just wonderful. 🌹
February 14th, 2024 03:58
A white crow on black snow
orchidee said:
I shall look into these important variations! Good write SB.
I saw a black cat in a coal cellar at midnight - is that a variation?
February 14th, 2024 03:51
orchidee said:
I shall look into these important variations! Good write SB.
I saw a black cat in a coal cellar at midnight - is that a variation?
February 14th, 2024 03:51
Prevarication
orchidee said:
I recall procrasti-wotsit - procrastination, but not a lot of prevarication! lol.
February 13th, 2024 05:23
orchidee said:
I recall procrasti-wotsit - procrastination, but not a lot of prevarication! lol.
February 13th, 2024 05:23
Prevarication
orchidee said:
Sins of commission, and sins of omission. How much pay is the \'commission\'? Doh! heehee. Not THAT sort of commission, says Fido.
Also - a bit of tongue twister:
\'We have done those things which we ought not to have done; and have left undone those things which we ought to have done\'.
Should we try a bit of prevari-wotsit?!
February 13th, 2024 05:19
orchidee said:
Sins of commission, and sins of omission. How much pay is the \'commission\'? Doh! heehee. Not THAT sort of commission, says Fido.
Also - a bit of tongue twister:
\'We have done those things which we ought not to have done; and have left undone those things which we ought to have done\'.
Should we try a bit of prevari-wotsit?!
February 13th, 2024 05:19
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