Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Timeless
Doggerel Dave said:
Another memory: My grandmother owned a very old, battered bedside clock which she wound up religiously every night. The clock had no hands, it’s sole function to send Gran to sleep via a special familiar tick.
Timeless nostalgia, Soren. Many thanks.
July 15th, 2024 18:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Another memory: My grandmother owned a very old, battered bedside clock which she wound up religiously every night. The clock had no hands, it’s sole function to send Gran to sleep via a special familiar tick.
Timeless nostalgia, Soren. Many thanks.
July 15th, 2024 18:10
Timeless
Cassie58 said:
You reminded me of a grandfather clock owned by my grandparents. It fascinated me as a child. The mechanics of it and the sounds of the ticking and the chimes every fifteen minutes. All inside a beautiful mahogany case. Clicks these days just don’t compare. You brought me some lovely nostalgia and imagery. Thank you.
July 15th, 2024 14:57
Cassie58 said:
You reminded me of a grandfather clock owned by my grandparents. It fascinated me as a child. The mechanics of it and the sounds of the ticking and the chimes every fifteen minutes. All inside a beautiful mahogany case. Clicks these days just don’t compare. You brought me some lovely nostalgia and imagery. Thank you.
July 15th, 2024 14:57
Timeless
Teddy.15 said:
How very beautiful and mechanical I saw deep within the clock face and this also reminded me of my dear Mother who absolutely loved clocks. A profound write that has so many angles. Wonderful sorrenbarret 🌹
July 15th, 2024 06:33
Teddy.15 said:
How very beautiful and mechanical I saw deep within the clock face and this also reminded me of my dear Mother who absolutely loved clocks. A profound write that has so many angles. Wonderful sorrenbarret 🌹
July 15th, 2024 06:33
Corpses
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sorrowful words in a world where this is so true soren.
Andy
July 15th, 2024 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sorrowful words in a world where this is so true soren.
Andy
July 15th, 2024 01:17
Corpses
Christina8 said:
A vivid bit of imagery! Sincerely, I think this is very good.
July 14th, 2024 16:30
Christina8 said:
A vivid bit of imagery! Sincerely, I think this is very good.
July 14th, 2024 16:30
Corpses
Teddy.15 said:
I credibly dark and powerful, kudos dear friend. What imagery you have painted. 🌹
July 14th, 2024 13:44
Teddy.15 said:
I credibly dark and powerful, kudos dear friend. What imagery you have painted. 🌹
July 14th, 2024 13:44
Corpses
Bella Shepard said:
Our world has become a place of such conflict and division, that we fail to see what we are daily creating. We are the architects of the future, God help us. A wonderfully true write my friend.
July 14th, 2024 10:14
Bella Shepard said:
Our world has become a place of such conflict and division, that we fail to see what we are daily creating. We are the architects of the future, God help us. A wonderfully true write my friend.
July 14th, 2024 10:14
Corpses
Cassie58 said:
This four line poem paints a horror story which breaks the heart. Tragic.
July 14th, 2024 07:13
Cassie58 said:
This four line poem paints a horror story which breaks the heart. Tragic.
July 14th, 2024 07:13
Corpses
Maplespal said:
the flies are born
because a child has died
while the parents morn
life\'s circle is applied.
July 14th, 2024 06:43
Maplespal said:
the flies are born
because a child has died
while the parents morn
life\'s circle is applied.
July 14th, 2024 06:43
Become what is not
Teddy.15 said:
I see a glass half empty soon to be full. Brilliant imagery and emotion dear sorrenbarret 🌹
July 14th, 2024 03:12
Teddy.15 said:
I see a glass half empty soon to be full. Brilliant imagery and emotion dear sorrenbarret 🌹
July 14th, 2024 03:12
Become what is not
Goldfinch60 said:
That life will be always with us soren.
Andy
July 14th, 2024 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
That life will be always with us soren.
Andy
July 14th, 2024 01:24
Become what is not
Bella Shepard said:
Love the juxtaposition in these lines, beautifully penned!
July 13th, 2024 11:44
Bella Shepard said:
Love the juxtaposition in these lines, beautifully penned!
July 13th, 2024 11:44
Cold rain
Cassie58 said:
Beautifully conveyed. Touches the emotions and tells a story about relationships in stormy weather.
July 12th, 2024 15:39
Cassie58 said:
Beautifully conveyed. Touches the emotions and tells a story about relationships in stormy weather.
July 12th, 2024 15:39
I once had a coat
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words soren, it may be gone but it is within your memory.
Andy
July 12th, 2024 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words soren, it may be gone but it is within your memory.
Andy
July 12th, 2024 01:12
I once had a coat
Teddy.15 said:
Gone by in a flash, but I saw it all. Stunning dear sorrenbarret 🌹
July 11th, 2024 10:41
Teddy.15 said:
Gone by in a flash, but I saw it all. Stunning dear sorrenbarret 🌹
July 11th, 2024 10:41
Words of smoke
Goldfinch60 said:
Those billowing emotions will always rise with the smoke soren.
Andy
July 11th, 2024 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Those billowing emotions will always rise with the smoke soren.
Andy
July 11th, 2024 01:19
Words of smoke
Teddy.15 said:
A fight between two, even when the heart pounds sadness and disappointment at the end of the day the air is cleared. Truly beautiful and speaks loud and clear to me. 🌹
July 10th, 2024 08:34
Teddy.15 said:
A fight between two, even when the heart pounds sadness and disappointment at the end of the day the air is cleared. Truly beautiful and speaks loud and clear to me. 🌹
July 10th, 2024 08:34
Words of smoke
orchidee said:
Well, I want to breathe in fresh air, not 2781\'s air! lol.
KP is full of hot air, not thin air. lol.
July 10th, 2024 07:35
orchidee said:
Well, I want to breathe in fresh air, not 2781\'s air! lol.
KP is full of hot air, not thin air. lol.
July 10th, 2024 07:35
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