Comments received on poems by Keith
Really Refra\'s
L. B. Mek said:
\'No fakery here
And not much money
As such
But honesty\'..
funny
how this line, is oft
turned upside down
when money is abundant
and yet
majority of us
make it our goal in life, to prioritise
the accumulation of money
above all else...
(loved the reflective tone
and insightful commentary
a lovely read, dear poet)
setting it in the Pub
makes it, that much more relatable
\'in my humble opinion\'
thanks for sharing
March 14th, 2022 06:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'No fakery here
And not much money
As such
But honesty\'..
funny
how this line, is oft
turned upside down
when money is abundant
and yet
majority of us
make it our goal in life, to prioritise
the accumulation of money
above all else...
(loved the reflective tone
and insightful commentary
a lovely read, dear poet)
setting it in the Pub
makes it, that much more relatable
\'in my humble opinion\'
thanks for sharing
March 14th, 2022 06:48
RUDE FOOD RAP
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, fast food is awful, I ALWAYS cook, as I have been for over sixty years, and you are welcome to drop in anytime.
Andy
February 5th, 2022 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, fast food is awful, I ALWAYS cook, as I have been for over sixty years, and you are welcome to drop in anytime.
Andy
February 5th, 2022 01:36
RUDE FOOD RAP
Rozina said:
Love this! So funny (luckily I never got the rash after Kentucky!). Will forward to my daughter who never eats Fast Food - she’ll say “I told you so”.
February 4th, 2022 18:40
Rozina said:
Love this! So funny (luckily I never got the rash after Kentucky!). Will forward to my daughter who never eats Fast Food - she’ll say “I told you so”.
February 4th, 2022 18:40
Mont St Michel
Fay Slimm. said:
Beautifully poemed this compellingly worded tribute of prose to a late brother who maybe had the name Michael - -- a lasting closeness seeps through your lines dear Keith as you see love beam hope onto sad missing - -- a most moving read - - - Cornwall\'s St. Michael\'s Mount near to me has a similar magic that heals.
February 2nd, 2022 08:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Beautifully poemed this compellingly worded tribute of prose to a late brother who maybe had the name Michael - -- a lasting closeness seeps through your lines dear Keith as you see love beam hope onto sad missing - -- a most moving read - - - Cornwall\'s St. Michael\'s Mount near to me has a similar magic that heals.
February 2nd, 2022 08:10
Mont St Michel
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute Keith, he will always be there for you - but not yet.
Andy
February 2nd, 2022 07:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute Keith, he will always be there for you - but not yet.
Andy
February 2nd, 2022 07:01
A PERSON POOR
Fay Slimm. said:
A poetic lament that sears the heart when what is longed for is not appearing - - love hurts and you verse that so well Keith. This joins my list of faves for sure.
February 1st, 2022 15:57
Fay Slimm. said:
A poetic lament that sears the heart when what is longed for is not appearing - - love hurts and you verse that so well Keith. This joins my list of faves for sure.
February 1st, 2022 15:57
A PERSON POOR
L. B. Mek said:
\'This world is fine -
It\'s everything
But a person poor.
It\'s the perfect jigsaw
But a piece I need
Is missing.\'
found these words to be so relatable
and that vivid image, of the lonesome scene
that inspired these thoughts
was skilfully painted..
a great, emotive read
thank you! dear Poet
February 1st, 2022 06:54
L. B. Mek said:
\'This world is fine -
It\'s everything
But a person poor.
It\'s the perfect jigsaw
But a piece I need
Is missing.\'
found these words to be so relatable
and that vivid image, of the lonesome scene
that inspired these thoughts
was skilfully painted..
a great, emotive read
thank you! dear Poet
February 1st, 2022 06:54
LOVE IS NOT RED ROSES
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of love Keith, it will always be that way.
Andy
February 1st, 2022 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of love Keith, it will always be that way.
Andy
February 1st, 2022 02:12
LOVE IS NOT RED ROSES
Vamsi Sudha said:
Wonderful flow of words !! and very well written and touches our soul. Thanks poet for this lovely Love Poetry !!
January 31st, 2022 09:40
Vamsi Sudha said:
Wonderful flow of words !! and very well written and touches our soul. Thanks poet for this lovely Love Poetry !!
January 31st, 2022 09:40
LOVE IS NOT RED ROSES
L. B. Mek said:
\'With my Love for you
I can go anywhere
I can ride on your tide
For this is the fuel
That burns deep inside\'..
simply Beautiful!
thank you! for choosing to share, dear Poet
January 31st, 2022 07:52
L. B. Mek said:
\'With my Love for you
I can go anywhere
I can ride on your tide
For this is the fuel
That burns deep inside\'..
simply Beautiful!
thank you! for choosing to share, dear Poet
January 31st, 2022 07:52
LOVE IS NOT RED ROSES
Fay Slimm. said:
The flow of your loving expressions warms this reader\'s heart - that\'s how love is and should feel dear Keith - - you poem its power so well.
January 31st, 2022 07:08
Fay Slimm. said:
The flow of your loving expressions warms this reader\'s heart - that\'s how love is and should feel dear Keith - - you poem its power so well.
January 31st, 2022 07:08
LOVE IS NOT RED ROSES
Narayan Gadagkar said:
Excellent depiction of emotions and feelings on \'Love\'. The beginning lines are superb
\"Love is not red roses
Or Instagram poses\"
January 31st, 2022 07:02
Narayan Gadagkar said:
Excellent depiction of emotions and feelings on \'Love\'. The beginning lines are superb
\"Love is not red roses
Or Instagram poses\"
January 31st, 2022 07:02
ROTTEN EVE
Goldfinch60 said:
This happens so much and it is not just physical violence mental violence is as bad.
The press only show us the bad news!
Andy
January 30th, 2022 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
This happens so much and it is not just physical violence mental violence is as bad.
The press only show us the bad news!
Andy
January 30th, 2022 01:24
ROTTEN EVE
Paul Bell said:
Sadly, they are just plenty of sickos out there, and for some reason they seem to have rights. As for the press, truth is an inconvenience to them.
January 29th, 2022 07:15
Paul Bell said:
Sadly, they are just plenty of sickos out there, and for some reason they seem to have rights. As for the press, truth is an inconvenience to them.
January 29th, 2022 07:15
SLEEP
Rozina said:
Your poem describes insomnia so elegantly. I really sympathise with you. So difficult to fall asleep; when I\'m just about to fall asleep a noisy bird starts his noise at 4 am!
January 28th, 2022 23:32
Rozina said:
Your poem describes insomnia so elegantly. I really sympathise with you. So difficult to fall asleep; when I\'m just about to fall asleep a noisy bird starts his noise at 4 am!
January 28th, 2022 23:32
SLEEP
spilleronsheet said:
What beautiful way to describe insomnia
Well crafted dear poet
January 28th, 2022 09:41
spilleronsheet said:
What beautiful way to describe insomnia
Well crafted dear poet
January 28th, 2022 09:41
SLEEP
Fay Slimm. said:
I love this superb assessment of urges to fight sleep with those \"worms of worry\" and can relate to the wanderings among \"pillows of thoughts\" - - thanks for sharing your insomniac habits dear Keith - - - - really must save this one for further reading.
January 28th, 2022 05:24
Fay Slimm. said:
I love this superb assessment of urges to fight sleep with those \"worms of worry\" and can relate to the wanderings among \"pillows of thoughts\" - - thanks for sharing your insomniac habits dear Keith - - - - really must save this one for further reading.
January 28th, 2022 05:24
Vow
Goldfinch60 said:
Old buildings just seem to speak to me when I enter them.
Andy
January 28th, 2022 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Old buildings just seem to speak to me when I enter them.
Andy
January 28th, 2022 02:45
Vow
Rozina said:
To be on the receiving end of such beautiful words….…sigh! I must show this to my hubby. Maybe he’d be inspired to write something for Valentine’s Day, even if he starts with Roses are red violets are blue…..
January 28th, 2022 02:21
Rozina said:
To be on the receiving end of such beautiful words….…sigh! I must show this to my hubby. Maybe he’d be inspired to write something for Valentine’s Day, even if he starts with Roses are red violets are blue…..
January 28th, 2022 02:21
Vow
Fay Slimm. said:
A love affair with ancient buildings - we have that in common to a degree my friend - they cant drag me away from their history when I enter these places - thanks for the read and you poem it well Keith - -- I really related.
January 27th, 2022 09:10
Fay Slimm. said:
A love affair with ancient buildings - we have that in common to a degree my friend - they cant drag me away from their history when I enter these places - thanks for the read and you poem it well Keith - -- I really related.
January 27th, 2022 09:10
Until the Rain Turns Red
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes -- when carnival\'s over reality can hurt - - an intriguing read Keith - I see a parting when a lonely day-dreamer needs more - -- breakfast for one pains but waiting \'til rain turns red must bring only heartache. Methinks time to move on from that clamped cold stream. Just my take on interpretation of course but your short-lined lament suits a slow reading perfectly.
January 26th, 2022 17:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes -- when carnival\'s over reality can hurt - - an intriguing read Keith - I see a parting when a lonely day-dreamer needs more - -- breakfast for one pains but waiting \'til rain turns red must bring only heartache. Methinks time to move on from that clamped cold stream. Just my take on interpretation of course but your short-lined lament suits a slow reading perfectly.
January 26th, 2022 17:15
FREEDOM
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Keith. I feel that I am free a in my retirement I can do what I want to do, it is wonderful.
Andy
January 26th, 2022 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Keith. I feel that I am free a in my retirement I can do what I want to do, it is wonderful.
Andy
January 26th, 2022 01:49
FREEDOM
Rozina said:
Freedom means different things to the people in charge and the people they are in charge of. So many countries facing this dilemma. So it is in our own minds. So true.
January 25th, 2022 20:57
Rozina said:
Freedom means different things to the people in charge and the people they are in charge of. So many countries facing this dilemma. So it is in our own minds. So true.
January 25th, 2022 20:57
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