Comments received on poems by Hollow Enigma
Lets Get Out of This Place
sorenbarrett said:
Clever usage of the god dog inversion. A poem of attraction. Nicely done
May 7th, 2025 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
Clever usage of the god dog inversion. A poem of attraction. Nicely done
May 7th, 2025 03:43
Lets Get Out of This Place
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written and enjoyable read
May 7th, 2025 02:50
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written and enjoyable read
May 7th, 2025 02:50
Whats Waiting
nephilim56 said:
i enjoyed this yearning poem, thanks for sharing
April 24th, 2025 08:10
nephilim56 said:
i enjoyed this yearning poem, thanks for sharing
April 24th, 2025 08:10
Whats Waiting
sorenbarrett said:
A strong plea for reunion is voiced in this poem. There is a sense of longing and wild promises of the impossible to have it accomplished. A powerful statement in this poem
April 21st, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
A strong plea for reunion is voiced in this poem. There is a sense of longing and wild promises of the impossible to have it accomplished. A powerful statement in this poem
April 21st, 2025 04:40
A Poem Illl Write But Hows about May We Marry?
Cheeky Missy said:
How very sweet. I hope when the intended recipient finally sees this she accepts. Beautifully rendered with a charming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 19th, 2025 22:14
Cheeky Missy said:
How very sweet. I hope when the intended recipient finally sees this she accepts. Beautifully rendered with a charming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 19th, 2025 22:14
Thanks to That Old Sun
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of emotion expressed and feeling good about it. A good read
April 19th, 2025 14:25
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of emotion expressed and feeling good about it. A good read
April 19th, 2025 14:25
A Poem Illl Write But Hows about May We Marry?
sorenbarrett said:
Couplets compose this poem with a one line romantic and the other not so much so. It provides a sense of balance to this poem as if logic is paired with emotion. Nicely done
April 18th, 2025 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
Couplets compose this poem with a one line romantic and the other not so much so. It provides a sense of balance to this poem as if logic is paired with emotion. Nicely done
April 18th, 2025 03:53
A Poem Illl Write But Hows about May We Marry?
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a nicely crafted and enjoyable read
April 18th, 2025 02:11
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a nicely crafted and enjoyable read
April 18th, 2025 02:11
Heat and Sweat Add a Dash of Lust
Poetic Licence said:
Caught in the eye of passion, enjoyed the read
February 23rd, 2025 03:36
Poetic Licence said:
Caught in the eye of passion, enjoyed the read
February 23rd, 2025 03:36
Heat and Sweat Add a Dash of Lust
sorenbarrett said:
Infatuation and passion so aptly described. Very nice
February 22nd, 2025 15:58
sorenbarrett said:
Infatuation and passion so aptly described. Very nice
February 22nd, 2025 15:58
You Deserve a Day of Love
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read of a Valentine\'s day poem. Written in rhyme this poem reaches out to a loved one.
February 15th, 2025 04:52
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read of a Valentine\'s day poem. Written in rhyme this poem reaches out to a loved one.
February 15th, 2025 04:52
You Deserve a Day of Love
Poetic Licence said:
A message to a special one, enjoyed the read
February 15th, 2025 03:10
Poetic Licence said:
A message to a special one, enjoyed the read
February 15th, 2025 03:10
Snake and Oil
Cheeky Missy said:
Thinkest thou so, eh? That\'s such a perfect title, like seems my daddy used to call them \"snake oil salesmen\"--la dee. How excellently rendered with good imagery and a taunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 10th, 2025 21:11
Cheeky Missy said:
Thinkest thou so, eh? That\'s such a perfect title, like seems my daddy used to call them \"snake oil salesmen\"--la dee. How excellently rendered with good imagery and a taunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 10th, 2025 21:11
Are You the Thought Are You the Feel?
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written this poem takes one on a journey.
August 15th, 2024 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written this poem takes one on a journey.
August 15th, 2024 05:07
The Only Gift I Know
Parisab said:
‘The Only Gift I Know’ is love: taking ideas everywhere and bringing it all back to a singular concept. Nice flow and good to see you again, Hollow…
October 17th, 2023 00:32
Parisab said:
‘The Only Gift I Know’ is love: taking ideas everywhere and bringing it all back to a singular concept. Nice flow and good to see you again, Hollow…
October 17th, 2023 00:32
The Only Gift I Know
Thomas W Case said:
Great use of language and rhyme to compliment the fantastic flow of the poem.
October 15th, 2023 00:28
Thomas W Case said:
Great use of language and rhyme to compliment the fantastic flow of the poem.
October 15th, 2023 00:28
A powerful Stranger
Parisab said:
The mirror reflects us, doubled by cracks
Me and the witch wink, as the angles smile back
Looks like you are starting a good fusion poem…
July 4th, 2023 00:43
Parisab said:
The mirror reflects us, doubled by cracks
Me and the witch wink, as the angles smile back
Looks like you are starting a good fusion poem…
July 4th, 2023 00:43
The brother You Know
Bobby O said:
It really ended cool. In the middle o had to regroup and work a little cuz of the directional shift. Maybe a different transition or maybe not. It’s the cop car line I speak of but after a reread I see the reason you just dropped it that way. Either way it’s a good piece.
April 28th, 2023 20:55
Bobby O said:
It really ended cool. In the middle o had to regroup and work a little cuz of the directional shift. Maybe a different transition or maybe not. It’s the cop car line I speak of but after a reread I see the reason you just dropped it that way. Either way it’s a good piece.
April 28th, 2023 20:55
The brother You Know
David Wakeling said:
This is okay.A tribute to brotherhood.I liked the rhyme
April 25th, 2023 00:54
David Wakeling said:
This is okay.A tribute to brotherhood.I liked the rhyme
April 25th, 2023 00:54
Not Another Self Help on Success
L. B. Mek said:
so well crafted and distilled
showcasing practised wordsmith skills
a literary joy to read, thank you!
\'The learned wrath,
of an adaptive sociopath.\'
April 17th, 2023 03:36
L. B. Mek said:
so well crafted and distilled
showcasing practised wordsmith skills
a literary joy to read, thank you!
\'The learned wrath,
of an adaptive sociopath.\'
April 17th, 2023 03:36
The Fall is Okay
Bobby O said:
Pet you request for suggestions :
After you write a piece , always plan to rewrite it using the content that you put ion paper as a guide. ie:don’t make statements ,, like “!I feel the sand beneath my feet “‘ nobody cares and it’s a nit an interesting statement as it doesn’t draw the reader in.
Instead , using similar content and change sentence structures avoiding standard subject:/!verb format So, that sentence may change to
Beneath me , coarse sand seems to alert , pronouncing, heightening my sense to account for the reduced visual , creeping shade darkening a path , gaining the sense to never Again talk about silly crows best nest for rest going nowhere waste of space lines .,,,
April 16th, 2023 18:09
Bobby O said:
Pet you request for suggestions :
After you write a piece , always plan to rewrite it using the content that you put ion paper as a guide. ie:don’t make statements ,, like “!I feel the sand beneath my feet “‘ nobody cares and it’s a nit an interesting statement as it doesn’t draw the reader in.
Instead , using similar content and change sentence structures avoiding standard subject:/!verb format So, that sentence may change to
Beneath me , coarse sand seems to alert , pronouncing, heightening my sense to account for the reduced visual , creeping shade darkening a path , gaining the sense to never Again talk about silly crows best nest for rest going nowhere waste of space lines .,,,
April 16th, 2023 18:09
The Fall is Okay
Bobby O said:
Nice piece it moves. Points to a moment, and then declares capability.
April 16th, 2023 02:04
Bobby O said:
Nice piece it moves. Points to a moment, and then declares capability.
April 16th, 2023 02:04
To Give Meaning to the Songs that Birds Sing
unbeknownst.to said:
Beautiful. painful. Jesus
January 23rd, 2023 06:36
unbeknownst.to said:
Beautiful. painful. Jesus
January 23rd, 2023 06:36
Keys in Pocket
unbeknownst.to said:
This one is my favorite of all the new ones you have written
January 23rd, 2023 06:33
unbeknownst.to said:
This one is my favorite of all the new ones you have written
January 23rd, 2023 06:33
As Much Choice as Flying While Falling
unbeknownst.to said:
The grass is greener on this side of the fence
January 23rd, 2023 06:29
unbeknownst.to said:
The grass is greener on this side of the fence
January 23rd, 2023 06:29
A Word a Past and an Ultimate Fear
arqios said:
Sends chills reading that.
And couplets a fine hat.
For rhyme or rap it’s good
It’s rhythm’s well understood!
November 24th, 2022 06:01
arqios said:
Sends chills reading that.
And couplets a fine hat.
For rhyme or rap it’s good
It’s rhythm’s well understood!
November 24th, 2022 06:01
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