Comments received on poems by Hollow Enigma
A Good Day to the Unpleasant Night
Goldfinch60 said:
Positive ending Jake. I have the way of thinking that every day I get up it is a good day.
Andy
October 16th, 2022 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Positive ending Jake. I have the way of thinking that every day I get up it is a good day.
Andy
October 16th, 2022 02:52
To sit and wait or repeat the Mistake
madalynsamantha said:
Beautifully said.❤️
July 15th, 2022 23:06
madalynsamantha said:
Beautifully said.❤️
July 15th, 2022 23:06
Gravity and my fault of self destruction
arqios said:
Decay and the elements are the strangest bedfellows of the human body and soul. Thanks for sharing Jake.
July 10th, 2022 19:41
arqios said:
Decay and the elements are the strangest bedfellows of the human body and soul. Thanks for sharing Jake.
July 10th, 2022 19:41
No Peace Found
L. B. Mek said:
\'I will leave you *now for its time to get dressed
fully clothed but my face is the only thing left\'..
(seek ye, Peace
first learn, defeat
immerse yourself, wholly
within its callous, waters
drink, heartily
vomit and repeat, but
eventually
when you realise, this
but one more
experience of life, so
exaggerated
begin, again
to contemplate, to question
and in those swirling
chaotic, thought clouds
if fate be kind, silence
will come to greet
befriend you and whisper
wisdom, replete
of simplicity\'s
capacity for release
and somewhere, thereafter
a path to peace
you\'ll uncover, your
very own and tailor made
thread carefully, quest bravely
cherish, your journey...)
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
I wish you peace!
April 21st, 2022 04:40
L. B. Mek said:
\'I will leave you *now for its time to get dressed
fully clothed but my face is the only thing left\'..
(seek ye, Peace
first learn, defeat
immerse yourself, wholly
within its callous, waters
drink, heartily
vomit and repeat, but
eventually
when you realise, this
but one more
experience of life, so
exaggerated
begin, again
to contemplate, to question
and in those swirling
chaotic, thought clouds
if fate be kind, silence
will come to greet
befriend you and whisper
wisdom, replete
of simplicity\'s
capacity for release
and somewhere, thereafter
a path to peace
you\'ll uncover, your
very own and tailor made
thread carefully, quest bravely
cherish, your journey...)
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
I wish you peace!
April 21st, 2022 04:40
No turning when you can\'t see anyone
L. B. Mek said:
\'10 dollar words complete my selfish mind
what a line..
a great shorty, thanks for sharing
April 15th, 2022 04:42
L. B. Mek said:
\'10 dollar words complete my selfish mind
what a line..
a great shorty, thanks for sharing
April 15th, 2022 04:42
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