Comments received on poems by Areon101
The Jester\'s Guide to the Galaxy
L. B. Mek said:
\'trying not to breathe in hysteria\'s contagion.
Pretending not to realize that we\'re all flawed,\'
Brilliant!
(I read and try, to heed
dear Poet)
you\'re Awesome! so
so much depth, unfurled accessible
and illuminating commentary, versed
poetically succinct
(oh and a title, playing
on one of my favourite books of all time)
June 23rd, 2022 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'trying not to breathe in hysteria\'s contagion.
Pretending not to realize that we\'re all flawed,\'
Brilliant!
(I read and try, to heed
dear Poet)
you\'re Awesome! so
so much depth, unfurled accessible
and illuminating commentary, versed
poetically succinct
(oh and a title, playing
on one of my favourite books of all time)
June 23rd, 2022 04:05
The Art of Writing
L. B. Mek said:
so well realised, a good read
thanks for sharing
June 21st, 2022 03:42
L. B. Mek said:
so well realised, a good read
thanks for sharing
June 21st, 2022 03:42
Waiting
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'m waiting for the world to save me.\'
I would advise, you\'re better
trying to save yourself, sadly..
(last week, i checked-in
with my sister and she mentioned
she felt like, life
\'was stuck: in-between\'
and I think
that\'s a good way of abbreviating
the sentiments in your write)
a good read, thanks for sharing
stay strong!
June 16th, 2022 03:50
L. B. Mek said:
\'I\'m waiting for the world to save me.\'
I would advise, you\'re better
trying to save yourself, sadly..
(last week, i checked-in
with my sister and she mentioned
she felt like, life
\'was stuck: in-between\'
and I think
that\'s a good way of abbreviating
the sentiments in your write)
a good read, thanks for sharing
stay strong!
June 16th, 2022 03:50
Love Yourself
L. B. Mek said:
loving yourself, is the mountain peak
of self validation,
maybe start with traversing the lower hills
like that forgiveness of self, hill..
(an important and poignant write
thank you! for choosing to share your wisdom
because in your words, I see
a war being waged
that so many can relate to..)
in meaning well, even supportive affectionate advice
can be warped into someone\'s idea of toxicity..
bare little grudges in life, let them loose
for they\'re just chains, adding to the weight of your baggage..
all the best!
February 8th, 2022 06:14
L. B. Mek said:
loving yourself, is the mountain peak
of self validation,
maybe start with traversing the lower hills
like that forgiveness of self, hill..
(an important and poignant write
thank you! for choosing to share your wisdom
because in your words, I see
a war being waged
that so many can relate to..)
in meaning well, even supportive affectionate advice
can be warped into someone\'s idea of toxicity..
bare little grudges in life, let them loose
for they\'re just chains, adding to the weight of your baggage..
all the best!
February 8th, 2022 06:14
Alone
Rocky Lagou said:
Great writing! Once again made a statement and wrapped it up with confetti and imagery and ended up with a beautiful poem. Good job!🌟💖
February 7th, 2022 13:19
Rocky Lagou said:
Great writing! Once again made a statement and wrapped it up with confetti and imagery and ended up with a beautiful poem. Good job!🌟💖
February 7th, 2022 13:19
Alone
somthingpoetry. said:
you are so talented this poem is really a treasure
February 7th, 2022 00:24
somthingpoetry. said:
you are so talented this poem is really a treasure
February 7th, 2022 00:24
Voices
Buzz Bray said:
I love it!!!!! This is magnificent. It\'s like you read my own thoughts. \"Have you ever experienced a voice so beautiful you had to close your eyes to completely enjoy it?\" Yes! Yes! Yes! Thank you for this work of beauty!
February 4th, 2022 14:05
Buzz Bray said:
I love it!!!!! This is magnificent. It\'s like you read my own thoughts. \"Have you ever experienced a voice so beautiful you had to close your eyes to completely enjoy it?\" Yes! Yes! Yes! Thank you for this work of beauty!
February 4th, 2022 14:05
Voices
Rocky Lagou said:
As a music lover myself, this was relatable. Music has a power over people that is nearly unexplainable. Lovely worded. Great job on this masterpiece!🎶
February 4th, 2022 13:30
Rocky Lagou said:
As a music lover myself, this was relatable. Music has a power over people that is nearly unexplainable. Lovely worded. Great job on this masterpiece!🎶
February 4th, 2022 13:30
Infatuation Intoxication
Rocky Lagou said:
Holy sh!t. Pardon my French. But this was so good! Reminds me of my own poetry a little. I\'m in love with astronomy and incorporating it into my poetry. I\'m gonna be honest, I love short poems, so reading this took a lot of willpower but after the first few lines I was hooked. I really felt this piece on a transcendental level. I love the way you related people like yourself and \"him\" to celestial bodies. The emotion was there. And when you began to repeat yourself I almost gasped. Really clever. And it\'s true, sometimes what we think is our \"destiny\" just doesn\'t align with reality. 💖🌟💫
February 4th, 2022 11:59
Rocky Lagou said:
Holy sh!t. Pardon my French. But this was so good! Reminds me of my own poetry a little. I\'m in love with astronomy and incorporating it into my poetry. I\'m gonna be honest, I love short poems, so reading this took a lot of willpower but after the first few lines I was hooked. I really felt this piece on a transcendental level. I love the way you related people like yourself and \"him\" to celestial bodies. The emotion was there. And when you began to repeat yourself I almost gasped. Really clever. And it\'s true, sometimes what we think is our \"destiny\" just doesn\'t align with reality. 💖🌟💫
February 4th, 2022 11:59
Infatuation Intoxication
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Wow .. definitely an engaging great read ! So well expressed …
February 3rd, 2022 12:29
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Wow .. definitely an engaging great read ! So well expressed …
February 3rd, 2022 12:29
