Comments received on poems by Hailey Black

Meghaltam-I am dead
peto said:

It translates extremely well
Very impressive talent
Not only are you not dead
Alive and kicking
Ko\"szo\"no\"m sze\'pen

July 8th, 2023 19:35

Better time
L. B. Mek said:

betrayal, is such a cruel part of life
but many have overcome it
and so that gives us, strength
to imagine the days to come
when we too, can soar above it..
wonderfully raw and relatable
thanks for sharing

February 10th, 2022 03:57

Dance of the lilies
FallenAngel1🕊 said:

The imagery your words project is nothing short of beautiful. My favourite part, \"But here we are together,listening our wild heart,,....\" all the way to, \"I don\'t care anymore,no\"
Absolutely gorgeous expressions,...🌟🌟🌟🌹🙂🕊

February 9th, 2022 17:52

Better time
Rocky Lagou said:

Great poem! Young love is always filled with confusion and uncertainty. You wrote it well! 👍

February 9th, 2022 14:30

Dance of the lilies
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow you encapsulated love so well. The way lovers just fall so deep for each other is amazing. And the mystery of \"the other side\" always leaves us worried. 🙌

February 8th, 2022 09:23

Eleven o’clock
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow this is beautifully written. I love how the third stanza incorporates both present and past tense of the words \"go\" and \"look\" as it could\'ve happened, or be happening. Good job!👍

February 8th, 2022 09:03

Eleven o’clock
L. B. Mek said:

your words, linger
likes whispers from a lost love\'s ghost
and the trails visible to the eye
make-out, the outlines
used to create that artwork..
(that\'s how intertwined
your words are to the artwork..
a beautiful page of diverse artforms
gloriously, in sync)
thanks for sharing! your scintillating creativity

February 8th, 2022 04:49

Eleven o’clock
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Nicely expressed ) good poem

February 7th, 2022 15:23