Comments received on poems by Desertwind
A Mountain to Stare
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow I love this picturesque imagery. Very vivid and real. You truly depict a fine and rich landscape.
March 18th, 2022 10:05
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow I love this picturesque imagery. Very vivid and real. You truly depict a fine and rich landscape.
March 18th, 2022 10:05
A Mountain to Stare
L. B. Mek said:
a great read!
thanks for sharing dear poet
loved that last stanza, what a memorable finale
March 18th, 2022 05:23
L. B. Mek said:
a great read!
thanks for sharing dear poet
loved that last stanza, what a memorable finale
March 18th, 2022 05:23
Unspoiled Memories
Desertwind said:
Thanks for the comment and like, I appreciate it , very much.
March 15th, 2022 17:23
Desertwind said:
Thanks for the comment and like, I appreciate it , very much.
March 15th, 2022 17:23
Unspoiled Memories
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes! I love this analogy of memories being stored in a container. Very creative and your sentiments couldn\'t be truer. Well done!
March 15th, 2022 09:23
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes! I love this analogy of memories being stored in a container. Very creative and your sentiments couldn\'t be truer. Well done!
March 15th, 2022 09:23
Unspoiled Memories
L. B. Mek said:
what a great read
but that first stanza, still shines supreme
that, stanza!
is just lines of pure distilled, poetic brilliance..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
March 15th, 2022 06:23
L. B. Mek said:
what a great read
but that first stanza, still shines supreme
that, stanza!
is just lines of pure distilled, poetic brilliance..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
March 15th, 2022 06:23
Lost
Desertwind said:
Thank you , but it was imaginary for someone who has lost a wife. Thanks for the comment and like .
March 14th, 2022 10:26
Desertwind said:
Thank you , but it was imaginary for someone who has lost a wife. Thanks for the comment and like .
March 14th, 2022 10:26
Lost
Rocky Lagou said:
A message conveyed very finely! Emotionally intact and full of memories.
March 14th, 2022 08:50
Rocky Lagou said:
A message conveyed very finely! Emotionally intact and full of memories.
March 14th, 2022 08:50
Lost
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful dedication
I\'m sorry you\'re on that road alone now
hope, your path will reach
those brighter stages of life
soon, dear poet
thanks for sharing
March 14th, 2022 05:54
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful dedication
I\'m sorry you\'re on that road alone now
hope, your path will reach
those brighter stages of life
soon, dear poet
thanks for sharing
March 14th, 2022 05:54
Alive
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully written. Captures the feeling of being one with this incredible, natural world. We too often forget to stop and smell the roses.
March 12th, 2022 12:57
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully written. Captures the feeling of being one with this incredible, natural world. We too often forget to stop and smell the roses.
March 12th, 2022 12:57
Alive
Thekkinkkattil said:
A nice read both the words and the thoughts are beautiful
March 12th, 2022 01:43
Thekkinkkattil said:
A nice read both the words and the thoughts are beautiful
March 12th, 2022 01:43
A Beautiful Mountain Trail
Desertwind said:
Thanks a lot for the like and comment. I\'m a nature lover too, just remembering last years hike. I\'m looking forward to warm weather too , to get out in the peaceful woods and it\'s beauty.
March 10th, 2022 14:19
Desertwind said:
Thanks a lot for the like and comment. I\'m a nature lover too, just remembering last years hike. I\'m looking forward to warm weather too , to get out in the peaceful woods and it\'s beauty.
March 10th, 2022 14:19
A Beautiful Mountain Trail
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Maybe it’s because I’m here in Canada nearing winters end,..I hope,and longing for warm weather + I’m a big nature lover. Between the two,I just had to fav your poem. A beautiful scenery you’ve painted here. Thanks for sharing 🌞🕊
March 10th, 2022 10:22
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Maybe it’s because I’m here in Canada nearing winters end,..I hope,and longing for warm weather + I’m a big nature lover. Between the two,I just had to fav your poem. A beautiful scenery you’ve painted here. Thanks for sharing 🌞🕊
March 10th, 2022 10:22
A Beautiful Mountain Trail
L. B. Mek said:
a great read!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
in the traditions
of Li Bai, Bashō
Keats, Shelley
and Gary Snyder
see how your words, favourably compare
to this acclaimed poem:
\' We finished clearing the last
Section of trail by noon,
High on the ridge-side
Two thousand feet above the creek
Reached the pass, went on
Beyond the white pine groves,
Granite shoulders, to a small
Green meadow watered by the snow,
Edged with Aspen—sun
Straight high and blazing
But the air was cool.\'
(from \'Above Pate Valley\'
by Gary Snyder
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/47179/above-pate-valley
)
March 10th, 2022 05:16
L. B. Mek said:
a great read!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
in the traditions
of Li Bai, Bashō
Keats, Shelley
and Gary Snyder
see how your words, favourably compare
to this acclaimed poem:
\' We finished clearing the last
Section of trail by noon,
High on the ridge-side
Two thousand feet above the creek
Reached the pass, went on
Beyond the white pine groves,
Granite shoulders, to a small
Green meadow watered by the snow,
Edged with Aspen—sun
Straight high and blazing
But the air was cool.\'
(from \'Above Pate Valley\'
by Gary Snyder
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/47179/above-pate-valley
)
March 10th, 2022 05:16
A Puzzled Heart
Rocky Lagou said:
Sometimes we just have to move on. There\'s plenty of fish in the sea and we can always go searching for the missing puzzle piece. Poignant write!
March 8th, 2022 13:51
Rocky Lagou said:
Sometimes we just have to move on. There\'s plenty of fish in the sea and we can always go searching for the missing puzzle piece. Poignant write!
March 8th, 2022 13:51
A Puzzled Heart
Desertwind said:
Yes that\'s true. I wrote this about a friend\'s wife. I never told him, but I think the the missing part of the puzzle was money. She loved money not him. I never saw him cry about it , I just meant she had no sympathy for him, took everything and left him paying for it. He was in state of depression for 10 or more years though, oh well that\'s life.
March 8th, 2022 10:39
Desertwind said:
Yes that\'s true. I wrote this about a friend\'s wife. I never told him, but I think the the missing part of the puzzle was money. She loved money not him. I never saw him cry about it , I just meant she had no sympathy for him, took everything and left him paying for it. He was in state of depression for 10 or more years though, oh well that\'s life.
March 8th, 2022 10:39
The Ocean\'s Power and Beauty
Desertwind said:
Thanks you very much I really appreciate your comment and like .
March 7th, 2022 20:06
Desertwind said:
Thanks you very much I really appreciate your comment and like .
March 7th, 2022 20:06
The Ocean\'s Power and Beauty
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow what a fine display you\'ve painted with words. Truly powerful and the shortness of it is also really nice. I enjoyed the shoreline metaphor and the last lines were like a big hug. Well done! 💖
March 7th, 2022 13:41
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow what a fine display you\'ve painted with words. Truly powerful and the shortness of it is also really nice. I enjoyed the shoreline metaphor and the last lines were like a big hug. Well done! 💖
March 7th, 2022 13:41
The Ocean\'s Power and Beauty
L. B. Mek said:
\'Listening to you roar
I know the beauty
of your power ,
making beautiful sandy beaches
out of what you
devour\'
forgive me, dear Poet
I couldn\'t help
but favourably compare
these verse and your write
in totality, to the great words
of Keats:
\'Oh, ye! who have your eyeballs vexed and tired,
Feast them upon the wideness of the Sea;
Oh ye! whose ears are dinned with uproar rude,
Or fed too much with cloying melody---
Sit ye near some old Cavern\'s Mouth and brood,\'
from \'On the Sea\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-14516 )
thank you! for choosing to share
a great read
\'in my humble opinion\'
March 7th, 2022 06:22
L. B. Mek said:
\'Listening to you roar
I know the beauty
of your power ,
making beautiful sandy beaches
out of what you
devour\'
forgive me, dear Poet
I couldn\'t help
but favourably compare
these verse and your write
in totality, to the great words
of Keats:
\'Oh, ye! who have your eyeballs vexed and tired,
Feast them upon the wideness of the Sea;
Oh ye! whose ears are dinned with uproar rude,
Or fed too much with cloying melody---
Sit ye near some old Cavern\'s Mouth and brood,\'
from \'On the Sea\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-14516 )
thank you! for choosing to share
a great read
\'in my humble opinion\'
March 7th, 2022 06:22
My Breath of Sunshine
Desertwind said:
Thanks a lot , you\'re nice. Thanks for the comment and like.
March 5th, 2022 20:00
Desertwind said:
Thanks a lot , you\'re nice. Thanks for the comment and like.
March 5th, 2022 20:00
My Breath of Sunshine
Christina8 said:
Very nice! Lovely write about my favorite subject---Love! :)
March 5th, 2022 12:07
Christina8 said:
Very nice! Lovely write about my favorite subject---Love! :)
March 5th, 2022 12:07
Morning Light
Desertwind said:
Thank you very much , that\'s a great comment. I also appreciate the like .
March 4th, 2022 18:02
Desertwind said:
Thank you very much , that\'s a great comment. I also appreciate the like .
March 4th, 2022 18:02
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