Comments received on poems by MR.apocalypse
a kiss from death
sorenbarrett said:
A most traumatic event cast in a rather serene and peace wording of the poem it opened into much deeper meaning with the author\'s note. A raw poem in smooth words. Nicely done
September 10th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
A most traumatic event cast in a rather serene and peace wording of the poem it opened into much deeper meaning with the author\'s note. A raw poem in smooth words. Nicely done
September 10th, 2025 04:05
like a bird with painted wings
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one is quite thought provoking. Well done
September 8th, 2025 20:28
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one is quite thought provoking. Well done
September 8th, 2025 20:28
to be content is to be happy
NinjaGirl said:
Yes! Lower expectations protect the heart indeed, but joy is then harder to succeed.
August 28th, 2025 23:15
NinjaGirl said:
Yes! Lower expectations protect the heart indeed, but joy is then harder to succeed.
August 28th, 2025 23:15
to be content is to be happy
sorenbarrett said:
Logic that does not fit the push of society and its need for increased production. Nicely written
August 28th, 2025 13:03
sorenbarrett said:
Logic that does not fit the push of society and its need for increased production. Nicely written
August 28th, 2025 13:03
forcefully empty
MR.apocalypse said:
first part
someone is trying to talk me an emotional level but its just not working all there is left to do is pray the message gets through
.....
seconded part
they try to speak again desperate attempt to get a something but all they get is the lies of \"all is well\"
......
third part addressed to the person speaking
\"you think that there is something to reach hidden behind the \"all is well\" but when moved beyond the ambition of yourself and you see it as what i am I\'m not hiding anything there is nothing there to hide its true emptiness
....
last part addressed to the person speaking
\" while i feel , the feeling is lost behind a search for what the feeling means and to understand it it fully i cannot look at it with my bias . i need to see the feeling itself isolated from what ideas i may have. but after such isolation of emotions its not possible to reconnect to them and the feeling is lost to deaf ears and blind eyes
only to be understood but never to be truly felt.
sorry for the long read
August 25th, 2025 11:49
MR.apocalypse said:
first part
someone is trying to talk me an emotional level but its just not working all there is left to do is pray the message gets through
.....
seconded part
they try to speak again desperate attempt to get a something but all they get is the lies of \"all is well\"
......
third part addressed to the person speaking
\"you think that there is something to reach hidden behind the \"all is well\" but when moved beyond the ambition of yourself and you see it as what i am I\'m not hiding anything there is nothing there to hide its true emptiness
....
last part addressed to the person speaking
\" while i feel , the feeling is lost behind a search for what the feeling means and to understand it it fully i cannot look at it with my bias . i need to see the feeling itself isolated from what ideas i may have. but after such isolation of emotions its not possible to reconnect to them and the feeling is lost to deaf ears and blind eyes
only to be understood but never to be truly felt.
sorry for the long read
August 25th, 2025 11:49
forcefully empty
sorenbarrett said:
This one is a bit cryptic and got my mind rolling the mention of prayer and lies made it feel religious in some way but otherwise it seemed more psychological. Nicely done
August 23rd, 2025 11:22
sorenbarrett said:
This one is a bit cryptic and got my mind rolling the mention of prayer and lies made it feel religious in some way but otherwise it seemed more psychological. Nicely done
August 23rd, 2025 11:22
disco cat
Poetic Licence said:
I feel at times we have all tried to be that disco cat, enjoyed the read
August 10th, 2025 07:07
Poetic Licence said:
I feel at times we have all tried to be that disco cat, enjoyed the read
August 10th, 2025 07:07
disco cat
sorenbarrett said:
A fun short that leaves a feel of many disco cats that I have seen in the past. Well done
August 10th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
A fun short that leaves a feel of many disco cats that I have seen in the past. Well done
August 10th, 2025 04:10
i have had many wishes
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely expressed write, when all wishes are never appearing we get stuck in-between giving up or thinking maybe the next wish will happen, a difficult place to be, well written write
August 9th, 2025 05:07
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely expressed write, when all wishes are never appearing we get stuck in-between giving up or thinking maybe the next wish will happen, a difficult place to be, well written write
August 9th, 2025 05:07
i have had many wishes
sorenbarrett said:
Wishing seldom results in the desired. A clever wording in this poem still gives hope.
August 9th, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Wishing seldom results in the desired. A clever wording in this poem still gives hope.
August 9th, 2025 04:07
the sound showed me nothing
sorenbarrett said:
Here I take sound as a metaphor referred to as an entity. A puzzling poem that begs the question of what it is that the sound is trying to tell or doesn\'t know. It seems to me that the sound in one\'s inner self.but I could be wrong. Well written
July 26th, 2025 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
Here I take sound as a metaphor referred to as an entity. A puzzling poem that begs the question of what it is that the sound is trying to tell or doesn\'t know. It seems to me that the sound in one\'s inner self.but I could be wrong. Well written
July 26th, 2025 05:12
war...war never changes
rrodriguez said:
Reality at its rawness... Painfully true... this is what\'s going on around us ðŸ˜
June 29th, 2025 06:55
rrodriguez said:
Reality at its rawness... Painfully true... this is what\'s going on around us ðŸ˜
June 29th, 2025 06:55
war...war never changes
sorenbarrett said:
A heavy metaphor of drums beating past memories. That throbbing that will not go away. A headache of a vascular throb like a drumbeat. Very nicely done
June 16th, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
A heavy metaphor of drums beating past memories. That throbbing that will not go away. A headache of a vascular throb like a drumbeat. Very nicely done
June 16th, 2025 04:03
war...war never changes
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write that war has effects long after the killing has stopped, for some the nightmares go on, nicely expressed and written
June 16th, 2025 01:07
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write that war has effects long after the killing has stopped, for some the nightmares go on, nicely expressed and written
June 16th, 2025 01:07
a lame atempt to catch the moon
RSM0812 said:
This one made me laugh out loud. Lol
June 8th, 2025 09:41
RSM0812 said:
This one made me laugh out loud. Lol
June 8th, 2025 09:41
a lame atempt to catch the moon
Eugene S. said:
You got a chuckle out of me. Enjoyed.
June 7th, 2025 07:38
Eugene S. said:
You got a chuckle out of me. Enjoyed.
June 7th, 2025 07:38
a lame atempt to catch the moon
sorenbarrett said:
I guess I\'m in a laughing mood because I found this one to be a fave. Cleverly worded it plays off spacial confusion. A most fun read
June 7th, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
I guess I\'m in a laughing mood because I found this one to be a fave. Cleverly worded it plays off spacial confusion. A most fun read
June 7th, 2025 04:01
forever in stone
RSM0812 said:
May your words go down in history. Nice rhythm. Great rhyme. One of my favs today for sure.
May 8th, 2025 06:08
RSM0812 said:
May your words go down in history. Nice rhythm. Great rhyme. One of my favs today for sure.
May 8th, 2025 06:08
victim
RSM0812 said:
Nobody likes or wants to be the victim. But the victimizer will still victimize.
May 6th, 2025 15:59
RSM0812 said:
Nobody likes or wants to be the victim. But the victimizer will still victimize.
May 6th, 2025 15:59
forever in stone
sorenbarrett said:
This is a very good poem that makes its point in just a few words. It is so true that what is said is misheard or forgotten and disappears with time while that that is written down is remembered and not distorted. A most important message for poets. Send it in.
April 24th, 2025 16:14
sorenbarrett said:
This is a very good poem that makes its point in just a few words. It is so true that what is said is misheard or forgotten and disappears with time while that that is written down is remembered and not distorted. A most important message for poets. Send it in.
April 24th, 2025 16:14
Listen to them rhyme then figure out the words
sorenbarrett said:
To me it says that we all put a piece of ourselves into what we see or believe. That the world is a mirror that reflects us back. Very interesting
April 14th, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
To me it says that we all put a piece of ourselves into what we see or believe. That the world is a mirror that reflects us back. Very interesting
April 14th, 2025 05:07
Listen to them rhyme then figure out the words
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of not taking to heart everything you hear and could just be gossip, not look for a meaning that was never there, harbouring misunderstood words can eat at you from the inside, interesting write, enjoyed the read
April 14th, 2025 04:12
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of not taking to heart everything you hear and could just be gossip, not look for a meaning that was never there, harbouring misunderstood words can eat at you from the inside, interesting write, enjoyed the read
April 14th, 2025 04:12
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