Comments received on poems by MR.apocalypse
with my rhymes i am greater
crypticbard said:
That voice and the truth that it speaks shall ring on through the years.
December 1st, 2022 07:20
crypticbard said:
That voice and the truth that it speaks shall ring on through the years.
December 1st, 2022 07:20
with my rhymes i am greater
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this poem. At first it reminded me of a poem I had written some time ago but it evolved into your own story and a great message. I loved the rhyme scheme and some internal rhyme as well as the flow.
November 30th, 2022 22:04
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this poem. At first it reminded me of a poem I had written some time ago but it evolved into your own story and a great message. I loved the rhyme scheme and some internal rhyme as well as the flow.
November 30th, 2022 22:04
my brothers skateboard
crypticbard said:
That\'s quite the brotherly thing to do. Reminds me of mine. Worked enough to bring him home a Fender on day just as an everyday present. Still plays good music to this day.
November 30th, 2022 03:28
crypticbard said:
That\'s quite the brotherly thing to do. Reminds me of mine. Worked enough to bring him home a Fender on day just as an everyday present. Still plays good music to this day.
November 30th, 2022 03:28
lost in time
crypticbard said:
And quite a surprise when something that is deemed lost resurfaces as having been misplaced.
November 27th, 2022 04:30
crypticbard said:
And quite a surprise when something that is deemed lost resurfaces as having been misplaced.
November 27th, 2022 04:30
lost in time
Crowns4Christ said:
This is a great piece, it\'s Life,it can be a cruel neverending circle of hell,but somethings are worth reliving
November 26th, 2022 23:57
Crowns4Christ said:
This is a great piece, it\'s Life,it can be a cruel neverending circle of hell,but somethings are worth reliving
November 26th, 2022 23:57
can you understand me
Mr. Not said:
it\'s sad to hear mr. apocalypse, i wish i could help
November 26th, 2022 17:05
Mr. Not said:
it\'s sad to hear mr. apocalypse, i wish i could help
November 26th, 2022 17:05
lost child
Eugene S. said:
Can totally relate as my tears are flowing. Glad to have discovered your words.
November 26th, 2022 09:54
Eugene S. said:
Can totally relate as my tears are flowing. Glad to have discovered your words.
November 26th, 2022 09:54
can you understand me
Eugene S. said:
Just know that time is an ally, writing is a release, and the caring of others can fill the void. Your chronicle here is no less valuable than Whitman\'s \'Leaves of Grass\'. All are just pieces of the process of healing. Never forget what was done, and never be the doer. ~ from a fellow abuse victim and runaway.
November 26th, 2022 09:47
Eugene S. said:
Just know that time is an ally, writing is a release, and the caring of others can fill the void. Your chronicle here is no less valuable than Whitman\'s \'Leaves of Grass\'. All are just pieces of the process of healing. Never forget what was done, and never be the doer. ~ from a fellow abuse victim and runaway.
November 26th, 2022 09:47
can you understand me
crypticbard said:
That\'s quite rough and it is both people that can make it good or make it bad. My thoughts are for the ones that make it good to surround you and for you to be around.
November 23rd, 2022 03:03
crypticbard said:
That\'s quite rough and it is both people that can make it good or make it bad. My thoughts are for the ones that make it good to surround you and for you to be around.
November 23rd, 2022 03:03
THe evaluation of our world
arflory90 said:
This is honestly beautiful, and it is very relative to todays actions. I enjoyed reading this. Your observations are exactly right. And many of us can\'t see the truth that is right in front of us. I honestly think the sad part is that people refuse to see the truth.
November 7th, 2022 11:07
arflory90 said:
This is honestly beautiful, and it is very relative to todays actions. I enjoyed reading this. Your observations are exactly right. And many of us can\'t see the truth that is right in front of us. I honestly think the sad part is that people refuse to see the truth.
November 7th, 2022 11:07
Greed
crypticbard said:
So true. And to be able to speak out from eye witness and experience lends so much credence to the expression! Thanks for sharing.
October 10th, 2022 09:13
crypticbard said:
So true. And to be able to speak out from eye witness and experience lends so much credence to the expression! Thanks for sharing.
October 10th, 2022 09:13
the kids have guns
Rocky Lagou said:
This is honestly so eye-opening dear poet. Reading your side note is also really saddening. How haven\'t officials taken control of the situation at your bus stop? If I were you I would actually fear for my life. Only a few years ago one of the deadliest school shootings occured only about an hour from where I live, the Parkland Shooting. And to see these massacres continuing is beyond words. I can only hope for brighter days.
June 8th, 2022 08:56
Rocky Lagou said:
This is honestly so eye-opening dear poet. Reading your side note is also really saddening. How haven\'t officials taken control of the situation at your bus stop? If I were you I would actually fear for my life. Only a few years ago one of the deadliest school shootings occured only about an hour from where I live, the Parkland Shooting. And to see these massacres continuing is beyond words. I can only hope for brighter days.
June 8th, 2022 08:56
DOES NOTHING LAST FOREVER?
JudyStella said:
Nice poem with a rhetorical question at the end which makes me question if forever really exists
May 24th, 2022 10:00
JudyStella said:
Nice poem with a rhetorical question at the end which makes me question if forever really exists
May 24th, 2022 10:00
THe evaluation of our world
Rocky Lagou said:
Such a sad reality we\'re living in. I wish peace could be seized, but it seems we\'re far from it. All we can do is hope and spread kindness.
May 23rd, 2022 08:54
Rocky Lagou said:
Such a sad reality we\'re living in. I wish peace could be seized, but it seems we\'re far from it. All we can do is hope and spread kindness.
May 23rd, 2022 08:54
THe evaluation of our world
crypticbard said:
Good observations. These wedded with counsel of past observations and future plans should help with action toward a better tomorrow. Thanks for sharing.
May 23rd, 2022 08:14
crypticbard said:
Good observations. These wedded with counsel of past observations and future plans should help with action toward a better tomorrow. Thanks for sharing.
May 23rd, 2022 08:14
THIS IS NOT A DRILL
L. B. Mek said:
\'but when their face is covered their sacrifice is forgot\'..
such a profound line
thanks for sharing
May 23rd, 2022 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'but when their face is covered their sacrifice is forgot\'..
such a profound line
thanks for sharing
May 23rd, 2022 05:11
SR/U
Rocky Lagou said:
The title could be, \"Soviet Russia vs. Ukraine,\" maybe? Or something along those lines. All in all, you present a true message, it\'s so sad with what\'s going on. I pray for better days, well done!
April 28th, 2022 08:31
Rocky Lagou said:
The title could be, \"Soviet Russia vs. Ukraine,\" maybe? Or something along those lines. All in all, you present a true message, it\'s so sad with what\'s going on. I pray for better days, well done!
April 28th, 2022 08:31
The crave of the attention
Sophenia said:
Beautiful!!! \'You can ether choose to tell the truth. Or you can win and the one who cared lose\' I choose to tell the truth. Thank you dear poet!
April 27th, 2022 01:18
Sophenia said:
Beautiful!!! \'You can ether choose to tell the truth. Or you can win and the one who cared lose\' I choose to tell the truth. Thank you dear poet!
April 27th, 2022 01:18
You don\'t know yet
Crowns4Christ said:
Absolutely true, such wise words, especially for somebody so young, I personally know adults who hasn\'t figured this out yet, great piece
April 26th, 2022 11:09
Crowns4Christ said:
Absolutely true, such wise words, especially for somebody so young, I personally know adults who hasn\'t figured this out yet, great piece
April 26th, 2022 11:09
WITH A BANG
Neville said:
I dig this, I just hope it reflects your poetic imagination and that your middle name is not Nostradamus or some kind of prophet ..... Neville
April 26th, 2022 09:52
Neville said:
I dig this, I just hope it reflects your poetic imagination and that your middle name is not Nostradamus or some kind of prophet ..... Neville
April 26th, 2022 09:52
You don\'t know yet
Neville said:
having just visited your profile page .. and read \'You Don\'t Know Yet\' I get the distinct feeling that you sir are going places .. and that, is one hell of a pat on the back from this side of the Pond .......... Neville
April 26th, 2022 09:48
Neville said:
having just visited your profile page .. and read \'You Don\'t Know Yet\' I get the distinct feeling that you sir are going places .. and that, is one hell of a pat on the back from this side of the Pond .......... Neville
April 26th, 2022 09:48
You don\'t know yet
Rocky Lagou said:
True words, you don\'t know one until knowing the other. In order to reach bliss, you have to go through hell. Deep words.
April 26th, 2022 08:32
Rocky Lagou said:
True words, you don\'t know one until knowing the other. In order to reach bliss, you have to go through hell. Deep words.
April 26th, 2022 08:32
WITH A BANG
Crowns4Christ said:
WOW, this really took me by surprise, haha, I mean that would literally be going out with a bang for sure
Thank you for your addition to the fusion
This really blows my mind,pun intended, hahahahaha
April 25th, 2022 14:05
Crowns4Christ said:
WOW, this really took me by surprise, haha, I mean that would literally be going out with a bang for sure
Thank you for your addition to the fusion
This really blows my mind,pun intended, hahahahaha
April 25th, 2022 14:05
Why
Crowns4Christ said:
There\'s always a story to be told, some are,happy,sad true or not, maybe inspirational or down right hilarious, life is a big neverending story,you just have to find your main character
April 24th, 2022 17:28
Crowns4Christ said:
There\'s always a story to be told, some are,happy,sad true or not, maybe inspirational or down right hilarious, life is a big neverending story,you just have to find your main character
April 24th, 2022 17:28
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