Comments received on poems by MR.apocalypse



the kids have guns
Rocky Lagou said:

This is honestly so eye-opening dear poet. Reading your side note is also really saddening. How haven\'t officials taken control of the situation at your bus stop? If I were you I would actually fear for my life. Only a few years ago one of the deadliest school shootings occured only about an hour from where I live, the Parkland Shooting. And to see these massacres continuing is beyond words. I can only hope for brighter days.

June 8th, 2022 08:56

WW1
RL Randall said:

A well stated piece regarding the ugliness of war.

June 6th, 2022 12:32

DOES NOTHING LAST FOREVER?
JudyStella said:

Nice poem with a rhetorical question at the end which makes me question if forever really exists

May 24th, 2022 10:00

THe evaluation of our world
Rocky Lagou said:

Such a sad reality we\'re living in. I wish peace could be seized, but it seems we\'re far from it. All we can do is hope and spread kindness.


May 23rd, 2022 08:54

THe evaluation of our world
crypticbard said:

Good observations. These wedded with counsel of past observations and future plans should help with action toward a better tomorrow. Thanks for sharing.

May 23rd, 2022 08:14

THIS IS NOT A DRILL
L. B. Mek said:

\'but when their face is covered their sacrifice is forgot\'..
such a profound line
thanks for sharing

May 23rd, 2022 05:11

Why
Vaughn Walker said:

Enjoyed this one!

May 20th, 2022 22:17

SR/U
Rocky Lagou said:

The title could be, \"Soviet Russia vs. Ukraine,\" maybe? Or something along those lines. All in all, you present a true message, it\'s so sad with what\'s going on. I pray for better days, well done!

April 28th, 2022 08:31

The crave of the attention
blue orchid said:

Wow, wise words

April 27th, 2022 14:07

The crave of the attention
Sophenia said:

Beautiful!!! \'You can ether choose to tell the truth. Or you can win and the one who cared lose\' I choose to tell the truth. Thank you dear poet!

April 27th, 2022 01:18

You don\'t know yet
Rozina said:

Every line is true. A great message.

April 26th, 2022 17:48

You don\'t know yet
blue orchid said:

Absolutely true, such wise words, especially for somebody so young, I personally know adults who hasn\'t figured this out yet, great piece

April 26th, 2022 11:09

WITH A BANG
Neville said:


I dig this, I just hope it reflects your poetic imagination and that your middle name is not Nostradamus or some kind of prophet ..... Neville


April 26th, 2022 09:52

You don\'t know yet
Neville said:



having just visited your profile page .. and read \'You Don\'t Know Yet\' I get the distinct feeling that you sir are going places .. and that, is one hell of a pat on the back from this side of the Pond .......... Neville


April 26th, 2022 09:48

You don\'t know yet
Rocky Lagou said:

True words, you don\'t know one until knowing the other. In order to reach bliss, you have to go through hell. Deep words.


April 26th, 2022 08:32

WITH A BANG
blue orchid said:

WOW, this really took me by surprise, haha, I mean that would literally be going out with a bang for sure

Thank you for your addition to the fusion
This really blows my mind,pun intended, hahahahaha

April 25th, 2022 14:05

Why
ChrisLyn🕊 said:

Beautiful ✨

April 25th, 2022 03:47

Why
blue orchid said:

There\'s always a story to be told, some are,happy,sad true or not, maybe inspirational or down right hilarious, life is a big neverending story,you just have to find your main character

April 24th, 2022 17:28

Why
Saxon Crow said:

And here is some truth about the world. Nice one.

April 24th, 2022 00:46

Pain for one please
blue orchid said:

I\'m really sorry this happened to you, I also was abused,not to that extent but have had my share of beatings, you will come out of this strong and happy, it might not feel like it now but in time you will, message me if you ever need to talk to somebody ok

April 23rd, 2022 18:24

EARTH WE HATE
MR.apocalypse said:



April 22nd, 2022 19:33

EARTH WE HATE
Rocky Lagou said:

Quite the \"Earth Day\" poem. It\'s very real. When will this insensitivity stop? I mean after all we\'re only alive because the Earth is sustaining us, yet we continously harm it. Thank you for raising awareness through your words.


April 22nd, 2022 07:58

result of my actions
Rozina said:

Good lines here.

April 20th, 2022 17:34