Comments received on poems by MR.apocalypse



if i had a heart
sorenbarrett said:

A line from the Wizard of Oz that has as much meaning today as it did then. I too have been accused of having no heart. I too would’ve preferred to have a brain. But in my leader years, I think BACC and a heart may have been preferable.

November 17th, 2024 19:33

Treat me like a human
sorenbarrett said:

Boundaries blurr and need to be reinforced to keep life in perspective. Very nicely written

November 15th, 2024 05:38

i could know all truth and still have no meaning
Dan Williams said:

Amen brother. Lurch through life thinking something settled but no. Nice work.

November 10th, 2024 01:16

i could know all truth and still have no meaning
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 9th, 2024 07:15

i could know all truth and still have no meaning
Demar Desu said:

What is truth… what gives meaning meaning? Ahh I love the philosophy… maybe there is no truth and maybe nothing means anything at all… good poem

November 8th, 2024 18:59

i could know all truth and still have no meaning
Doggerel Dave said:

Could be because there is no meaning, or that it is completely inaccessible to you and me.

Good to pose the question (sometimes), though.

November 8th, 2024 17:55

i could know all truth and still have no meaning
sorenbarrett said:

There is a sadness in this porn and it touches the heart. Well done.

November 8th, 2024 16:09

i can never be alone
sorenbarrett said:

Music the key to emotions and with it one is never alone

November 8th, 2024 06:42

2 birds in a cage
Cheeky Missy said:

Were you allowed to make me laugh out loud with your metaphor? La dee! How beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.

November 6th, 2024 18:50

kamala or trump
Mutley Ravishes said:

Ain’t that right!
The Mosquito Mafia playing the same old game
Works again and again!
Don’s our frontman
Kama’s our front dame


November 5th, 2024 19:11

this is a poem
sorenbarrett said:

Let me think about that.... loved the rhyme and the paradoxical twist of writing about nothing and thinking of nothing. A fun read

October 31st, 2024 03:54

this is a poem
RickthePoetWarrior said:

A very nice little poem pointless though it is. good job.

October 30th, 2024 22:19

the new form of protest is not signs its knowledge
Qurrathul Ain said:

True, knowledge can be unleashed as the sharpest and smartest weapon at times. Oppression, mistreatment, bullying and everything alike are targeted towards the group that\'s less educated, less aware and those that are unable to speak up for themselves (which is because of lack of confidence in their own take).
Nice write.

October 25th, 2024 04:27

the new form of protest is not signs its knowledge
Demar Desu said:

This is foolish, imagine if Martin Luther King thought what you think, we would still have apartheid in America today. SMH terrible poem

October 24th, 2024 16:55

the new form of protest is not signs its knowledge
Doggerel Dave said:

Wish I could fully agree (I cannot) since I’ve participated in more than a few protest marches in my time and have occasionally seen them as exercises in futility.
Unfortunately societal change is much more complicated than either of our positions at this point (for and against protest) would admit.


October 24th, 2024 16:31

People say I think to much
Cheeky Missy said:

I\'ll disagree politely with those who suggest that and concur with you. Delightfully rendered with a subtle poignancy in tasteful brevity. Thank you for sharing.

October 24th, 2024 00:17

People say I think to much
Thad Wilk said:

Haaa! ( I think )
this poem is
short and succinct indeed! 👍
Skillfully expressed
and a treat to read! ⭐⭐⭐
Best regards peace ✌️ Thad


October 23rd, 2024 15:43

the train is coming chooooo chooooo
Mase ♪ said:

Never thought of it that way! Good poem MR.apocalypes.

October 4th, 2024 14:39

the train is coming chooooo chooooo
Lorenz said:

Imaginative !

October 4th, 2024 13:04

what should i write about
Cheeky Missy said:

Take a walk and look and listen.

September 24th, 2024 14:48

its a choice
Mase ♪ said:

Good write.

September 22nd, 2024 01:25

its a choice
Dan Williams said:

I would say that this is aimed directly at me but take issue with \"never tried\" Maybe tried and derailed.

September 21st, 2024 00:21

Wellcome to the 5:00 news
DeadRose said:

this is a poem that needs to be read out loud. it has good flow and a good message. i actually did read it out loud a couple times lol

i can picture it... typical american news anchor accent, slightly creepy but unassuming smile, bright red lipstick, picture of new york in the background. I need to get out my dusty suit and steal someones tie.

☕🌹

September 15th, 2024 13:38

Wellcome to the 5:00 news
Thad Wilk said:

Powerful penning 🖋️
and very true! 👍😢
Their all trying to
do your thinking
to please all of you!! ,😳😡
Thanks for sharing!!
Great read my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

September 15th, 2024 10:14

Wellcome to the 5:00 news
Dan Williams said:

Amen, amen. Watch CNN to learn what to think. It\'s so sad.

September 15th, 2024 00:37

Wellcome to the 5:00 news
Doggerel Dave said:

Nah - Wot\'s it about, then???😂🙃

Grrreat stuff...

September 15th, 2024 00:04

Wellcome to the 5:00 news
Tony36 said:

LOL

September 14th, 2024 21:04

Wellcome to the 5:00 news
NinjaGirl said:

So true and so powerful--the controlling power of tech in society is ever so present

September 14th, 2024 19:32

Wellcome to the 5:00 news
Cheeky Missy said:

You, you, you, I declare! You made me laugh out loud! This is too rich! La dee! Tripping down the page in dainty fashion with such delicate stanzas yet also such a seductive pull the perverse humor is infectious. I love it! Thank you so very much for sharing.

September 14th, 2024 18:55

to suffer just to suffer
Alan R said:

Powerful!

September 13th, 2024 20:58

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