Comments received on poems by MR.apocalypse
It\'s not a battle
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, but what a lovely loaded couplet! Awesome! Thank you for sharing!
September 13th, 2024 14:42
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, but what a lovely loaded couplet! Awesome! Thank you for sharing!
September 13th, 2024 14:42
Stop running please
Mase ♪ said:
Wow, Impressive write, I see all the emotion you put into this piece. Keep up the amazing work Mr,apocalapse
September 12th, 2024 21:11
Mase ♪ said:
Wow, Impressive write, I see all the emotion you put into this piece. Keep up the amazing work Mr,apocalapse
September 12th, 2024 21:11
im done being politicaly correct
DeadRose said:
\"...to control my thought is what they want
and thats not being free\"
god forbid we ever commit thoughtcrimes....more evidence of 1984 becoming reality and not fiction. doubleplusungood
also, you say nothing, you get labeled, you say something, you get labeled, you exist, you get labeled, you stop existing, another label. i feel like its human nature to label and categorize things, but some take it farther to an extent to criticize .
☕🌹
September 11th, 2024 16:33
DeadRose said:
\"...to control my thought is what they want
and thats not being free\"
god forbid we ever commit thoughtcrimes....more evidence of 1984 becoming reality and not fiction. doubleplusungood
also, you say nothing, you get labeled, you say something, you get labeled, you exist, you get labeled, you stop existing, another label. i feel like its human nature to label and categorize things, but some take it farther to an extent to criticize .
☕🌹
September 11th, 2024 16:33
A short goodbye
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely, see you soon! I love how you told readers in a rhymed quatrain! Beautifully rendered farewell. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 13:01
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely, see you soon! I love how you told readers in a rhymed quatrain! Beautifully rendered farewell. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 13:01
IM NOT ALONE INSIDE MY HEAD
Dan Williams said:
What a comforting poem. I believe most of us feel the weight of loneliness at times. Thanks for this.
September 11th, 2024 00:42
Dan Williams said:
What a comforting poem. I believe most of us feel the weight of loneliness at times. Thanks for this.
September 11th, 2024 00:42
IM NOT ALONE INSIDE MY HEAD
Thad Wilk said:
A fantastic poem
brilliantly composed indeed!!👍
Strong feelings
and emotions,
eloquently expressed
and a real treat to read!! 💯
Best regards ✌️ Thad
September 10th, 2024 09:05
Thad Wilk said:
A fantastic poem
brilliantly composed indeed!!👍
Strong feelings
and emotions,
eloquently expressed
and a real treat to read!! 💯
Best regards ✌️ Thad
September 10th, 2024 09:05
IM NOT ALONE INSIDE MY HEAD
AuburnScribbler said:
The flow of this is masterfully done, and the sentiment that you have raised is relatable brilliance!
Well worth a favourite, bravo, and I hope that all is well!
September 10th, 2024 06:40
AuburnScribbler said:
The flow of this is masterfully done, and the sentiment that you have raised is relatable brilliance!
Well worth a favourite, bravo, and I hope that all is well!
September 10th, 2024 06:40
im done being politicaly correct
Dan Williams said:
Bravo, and hooray for you. This attitude needs to be contagious. Very good, very good.
September 10th, 2024 01:03
Dan Williams said:
Bravo, and hooray for you. This attitude needs to be contagious. Very good, very good.
September 10th, 2024 01:03
im done being politicaly correct
Doggerel Dave said:
Part of me wants to argue and shout because some of the ideas that are buried under the abusive term ‘political correctness’ are worth considering and do mean something,
However, When I take your piece as a whole I do understand where you are coming from and the issues you hint at are over hyped and cause confusion when getting along should be the key. Tell me I’m wrong if I have your main message as ‘cool it’.
September 9th, 2024 08:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Part of me wants to argue and shout because some of the ideas that are buried under the abusive term ‘political correctness’ are worth considering and do mean something,
However, When I take your piece as a whole I do understand where you are coming from and the issues you hint at are over hyped and cause confusion when getting along should be the key. Tell me I’m wrong if I have your main message as ‘cool it’.
September 9th, 2024 08:47
im done being politicaly correct
sorenbarrett said:
I love the message in this poem. It is well written with good sound logic. One cannot legislate freedom for it is a contradiction in terms. Very nicely done.
September 9th, 2024 06:25
sorenbarrett said:
I love the message in this poem. It is well written with good sound logic. One cannot legislate freedom for it is a contradiction in terms. Very nicely done.
September 9th, 2024 06:25
im done being politicaly correct
Mase ♪ said:
Awesome poem, if only everyone could see it this way.
September 8th, 2024 23:15
Mase ♪ said:
Awesome poem, if only everyone could see it this way.
September 8th, 2024 23:15
im done being politicaly correct
Pappy155 said:
I love that you wrote this - I feel exactly the same way and wish other people were as smart, or as honest as you!
September 8th, 2024 22:06
Pappy155 said:
I love that you wrote this - I feel exactly the same way and wish other people were as smart, or as honest as you!
September 8th, 2024 22:06
the magic pill
Mase ♪ said:
Yep, such a sad yet true poem. But nothing to worry about. Death is your friend. Right?
September 8th, 2024 01:19
Mase ♪ said:
Yep, such a sad yet true poem. But nothing to worry about. Death is your friend. Right?
September 8th, 2024 01:19
it is not all just sad and gloomy
Dan Williams said:
Wow. You have definitely been reading my mail. I would be happy to sign my name to this. Good work!
September 6th, 2024 01:10
Dan Williams said:
Wow. You have definitely been reading my mail. I would be happy to sign my name to this. Good work!
September 6th, 2024 01:10
it is not all just sad and gloomy
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully stated I love the line about how the rain makes the grass grow. It is adversity that gives us strength. A beautiful message contained in this poem and wisdom beyond years.
September 5th, 2024 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully stated I love the line about how the rain makes the grass grow. It is adversity that gives us strength. A beautiful message contained in this poem and wisdom beyond years.
September 5th, 2024 06:28
ink stains hurt brains
John Lee said:
Hold that shirt, just a few more stains will make a design. Wear the beautiful art that ink spills in your heart.
September 4th, 2024 21:41
John Lee said:
Hold that shirt, just a few more stains will make a design. Wear the beautiful art that ink spills in your heart.
September 4th, 2024 21:41
it is not all just sad and gloomy
John Lee said:
I relate.. we all are but rain drops in a storm.
September 4th, 2024 21:37
John Lee said:
I relate.. we all are but rain drops in a storm.
September 4th, 2024 21:37
it is not all just sad and gloomy
Cheeky Missy said:
That\'s part of the reason many of us likely took to this genre of art, since socially we\'re NOT allowed to say what\'s really within us. Yet only letting our fellows here know leaves the misimpression we\'re fundamentally miserable. Perhaps we are?! I\'ve learned that when I\'m most deeply pressed either with joy or grief, I cannot put it into my work. These are only shadows of what is. Beautifully expressive. Thank you for sharing.
September 4th, 2024 20:31
Cheeky Missy said:
That\'s part of the reason many of us likely took to this genre of art, since socially we\'re NOT allowed to say what\'s really within us. Yet only letting our fellows here know leaves the misimpression we\'re fundamentally miserable. Perhaps we are?! I\'ve learned that when I\'m most deeply pressed either with joy or grief, I cannot put it into my work. These are only shadows of what is. Beautifully expressive. Thank you for sharing.
September 4th, 2024 20:31
ink stains hurt brains
sorenbarrett said:
A thought provoking write. Philosophical and close to the heart. Loved it.
August 19th, 2024 05:24
sorenbarrett said:
A thought provoking write. Philosophical and close to the heart. Loved it.
August 19th, 2024 05:24
to suffer just to suffer
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded this is so true and speaks to the hypocrisy of those that want to look like they are suffering as a pretense to gain sympathy and support from others. Very nice
August 18th, 2024 06:25
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded this is so true and speaks to the hypocrisy of those that want to look like they are suffering as a pretense to gain sympathy and support from others. Very nice
August 18th, 2024 06:25
flowers without light are flowers that dont grow
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written in good rhyme this poem of uncertainty was certainly done well.
August 13th, 2024 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written in good rhyme this poem of uncertainty was certainly done well.
August 13th, 2024 05:22
flowers without light are flowers that dont grow
Eugene S. said:
Keep writing. Three pages a day. Chronicle the thoughts.
August 13th, 2024 04:15
Eugene S. said:
Keep writing. Three pages a day. Chronicle the thoughts.
August 13th, 2024 04:15
flowers without light are flowers that dont grow
2781 said:
What\'s in a name?
August 13th, 2024 02:19
2781 said:
What\'s in a name?
August 13th, 2024 02:19
flowers without light are flowers that dont grow
Saxon Crow said:
Follow your heart bot your mind buddy. Trust me, it\'ll change your life. Great poem
August 13th, 2024 02:03
Saxon Crow said:
Follow your heart bot your mind buddy. Trust me, it\'ll change your life. Great poem
August 13th, 2024 02:03
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