Comments received on poems by Not Entirely here
Death
charles69 said:
I liked reading your poem and was touched by it. I think the way you shift from a philosophical and general statement to a personal one is very effective. I hope the poem isn\'t about someone close to you, that took their own life, or maybe died from natural cause at a young age..I have the greatest respect for poets like you who can elegantly express and share tragedy.
January 4th, 2023 07:48
charles69 said:
I liked reading your poem and was touched by it. I think the way you shift from a philosophical and general statement to a personal one is very effective. I hope the poem isn\'t about someone close to you, that took their own life, or maybe died from natural cause at a young age..I have the greatest respect for poets like you who can elegantly express and share tragedy.
January 4th, 2023 07:48
Easy to Forget
Jonas Robinson said:
A deep, gentle enchanting ink. Thank you for sharing. :)
May 26th, 2022 22:19
Jonas Robinson said:
A deep, gentle enchanting ink. Thank you for sharing. :)
May 26th, 2022 22:19
Constantly searching
dusk arising said:
Good writing. And writing does ease away the pains, helping us come to terms with things, showing us our growing wisdom about life and living and how we fit into it all.
Well, it works for me anyhow LOL.
May 14th, 2022 07:58
dusk arising said:
Good writing. And writing does ease away the pains, helping us come to terms with things, showing us our growing wisdom about life and living and how we fit into it all.
Well, it works for me anyhow LOL.
May 14th, 2022 07:58
To the boy who broke my heart
dusk arising said:
You found love and with it you found the feelings of really being alive. It was as if suddenly everything was turned on so you could really see and feel them. Never forget that feeling. It is still out there and will come to you again. Never ever feel that it wont or that you are unworthy of it.
Begin to love yourself more. Know and respect yourself. Know that you are really worthwhile and worthy of good love coming to you.
You are a part of life on planet earth with as much right to be here as the trees and the stars above.
You are a poet, a gift to treasure.
May 13th, 2022 08:29
dusk arising said:
You found love and with it you found the feelings of really being alive. It was as if suddenly everything was turned on so you could really see and feel them. Never forget that feeling. It is still out there and will come to you again. Never ever feel that it wont or that you are unworthy of it.
Begin to love yourself more. Know and respect yourself. Know that you are really worthwhile and worthy of good love coming to you.
You are a part of life on planet earth with as much right to be here as the trees and the stars above.
You are a poet, a gift to treasure.
May 13th, 2022 08:29
To the boy who broke my heart
Rocky Lagou said:
I\'m so sorry dear poet for your heartache. Love is truly a delicate thing, and it\'s not a game, however for some it can seem that way. To see it\'s even caused you writer\'s block is also saddening, I hope you\'ll overcome it and know that there\'s always people who\'ll be ready to love you more than that person could.
May 13th, 2022 08:17
Rocky Lagou said:
I\'m so sorry dear poet for your heartache. Love is truly a delicate thing, and it\'s not a game, however for some it can seem that way. To see it\'s even caused you writer\'s block is also saddening, I hope you\'ll overcome it and know that there\'s always people who\'ll be ready to love you more than that person could.
May 13th, 2022 08:17
To the boy who broke my heart
L. B. Mek said:
well expressed, good utilisation
of poetry\'s capacity
to air out, our entangled thoughts..
thanks for sharing
May 13th, 2022 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
well expressed, good utilisation
of poetry\'s capacity
to air out, our entangled thoughts..
thanks for sharing
May 13th, 2022 04:13
To the boy who broke my heart
Saxon Crow said:
For someone who isn\'t writing poems anymore you\'ve done a really good job with this piece. Although you don\'t feel it right now. There is ALWAYS someone better to love you and be loved. Stay strong
May 13th, 2022 00:39
Saxon Crow said:
For someone who isn\'t writing poems anymore you\'ve done a really good job with this piece. Although you don\'t feel it right now. There is ALWAYS someone better to love you and be loved. Stay strong
May 13th, 2022 00:39
Utterly Alone
Paul Bell said:
To be human is to be weak, that way we can be led to the promised land.
Though, the promised land might just be a good night out.
May 3rd, 2022 12:59
Paul Bell said:
To be human is to be weak, that way we can be led to the promised land.
Though, the promised land might just be a good night out.
May 3rd, 2022 12:59
Utterly Alone
Crowns4Christ said:
This is a very good piece, and you are never utterly alone, God is and always will be with you
April 23rd, 2022 18:14
Crowns4Christ said:
This is a very good piece, and you are never utterly alone, God is and always will be with you
April 23rd, 2022 18:14
I am but a broken human
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was beautiful. I can relate with the sleepless nights being tormented by memories. It\'s an ache that seems to not fade. But you did wonderfully expressing the sensation.
April 11th, 2022 11:00
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was beautiful. I can relate with the sleepless nights being tormented by memories. It\'s an ache that seems to not fade. But you did wonderfully expressing the sensation.
April 11th, 2022 11:00
I am but a broken human
dusk arising said:
Yes sad but so well composed. Don\'t let that broken feeling last. You have flown high on the wings of love and miss the ecstacy of flight, but you will fly again. Just look after yourself as time does it\'s wonderful job of repairing you.
A big welcome to MPS. Join in and leave your thoughts as comments on other peoples posts on here. Throw stones at my humble efforts by all means, but most of all, enjoy yourself here.
April 11th, 2022 10:48
dusk arising said:
Yes sad but so well composed. Don\'t let that broken feeling last. You have flown high on the wings of love and miss the ecstacy of flight, but you will fly again. Just look after yourself as time does it\'s wonderful job of repairing you.
A big welcome to MPS. Join in and leave your thoughts as comments on other peoples posts on here. Throw stones at my humble efforts by all means, but most of all, enjoy yourself here.
April 11th, 2022 10:48
