Comments received on poems by That quiet girl
The Words We Don\\\\\\\'t Say
David Wakeling said:
I don\'t understand this.Why would you advertise the fact that you have nothing to say. Try saying something
December 1st, 2023 15:59
David Wakeling said:
I don\'t understand this.Why would you advertise the fact that you have nothing to say. Try saying something
December 1st, 2023 15:59
My Little World
BlessedbyGod said:
Wow,this is a great piece,very well written,though I can feel your pain ,if you ever want to talk I\'m here for you
December 26th, 2022 20:51
BlessedbyGod said:
Wow,this is a great piece,very well written,though I can feel your pain ,if you ever want to talk I\'m here for you
December 26th, 2022 20:51
Empty
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Sorry about this situation.
But, a good write.
September 27th, 2022 18:08
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Sorry about this situation.
But, a good write.
September 27th, 2022 18:08
I Felt Pretty Today...
Paul Bell said:
You appear to be carrying the weight of the world on your shoulders. Sometimes you just need to dump the baggage and love yourself more.
September 27th, 2022 03:39
Paul Bell said:
You appear to be carrying the weight of the world on your shoulders. Sometimes you just need to dump the baggage and love yourself more.
September 27th, 2022 03:39
I Felt Pretty Today...
Ryszard said:
Honest, raw, the rhyme softens the blow. Powerful.
September 26th, 2022 22:10
Ryszard said:
Honest, raw, the rhyme softens the blow. Powerful.
September 26th, 2022 22:10
I\'ve lost my smile
Meowsic said:
Great poem! I love the rhyme you have going on too. I hope the smile finds you ;)
September 22nd, 2022 16:05
Meowsic said:
Great poem! I love the rhyme you have going on too. I hope the smile finds you ;)
September 22nd, 2022 16:05
Little Red Riding hood
jarcher54 said:
A fine retelling of the story... the sacrifice to the wolves is a brilliant, intense touch! Turns a slightly trivial tale into a deeply mysterious myth!
September 17th, 2022 22:48
jarcher54 said:
A fine retelling of the story... the sacrifice to the wolves is a brilliant, intense touch! Turns a slightly trivial tale into a deeply mysterious myth!
September 17th, 2022 22:48
Panic attack
jarcher54 said:
You fooled me for a minute! I read classical Greek and started trying to read it as if it were modern Greek! This is fun to read but, gradually, the message comes through and it is quite moving.
September 17th, 2022 22:43
jarcher54 said:
You fooled me for a minute! I read classical Greek and started trying to read it as if it were modern Greek! This is fun to read but, gradually, the message comes through and it is quite moving.
September 17th, 2022 22:43
Little Red Riding hood
tallisman said:
Darn, I thought she would beat the wolf! Super write TQG !
August 3rd, 2022 00:45
tallisman said:
Darn, I thought she would beat the wolf! Super write TQG !
August 3rd, 2022 00:45
Love Laced With Poison
tallisman said:
Well written good imagery, love this….
August 3rd, 2022 00:43
tallisman said:
Well written good imagery, love this….
August 3rd, 2022 00:43
I\'ve lost my smile
tallisman said:
This was a good write, poet. Enjoyed this….
August 3rd, 2022 00:40
tallisman said:
This was a good write, poet. Enjoyed this….
August 3rd, 2022 00:40
Love Laced With Poison
Ajax (he/xe) said:
Amazing poem, it very well describes my relationship with my parents
May 19th, 2022 00:28
Ajax (he/xe) said:
Amazing poem, it very well describes my relationship with my parents
May 19th, 2022 00:28
I\'ve lost my smile
Rozina said:
I like your poem. It is sad but it made me smile as I imagined looking for the smile in the fridge (I\'ve forgottenly put my spectacles in the fridge ), under the sofa (lots of things drop under the sofa), and other places. I hope you find your smile again. Have a lovely weekend.
May 12th, 2022 17:54
Rozina said:
I like your poem. It is sad but it made me smile as I imagined looking for the smile in the fridge (I\'ve forgottenly put my spectacles in the fridge ), under the sofa (lots of things drop under the sofa), and other places. I hope you find your smile again. Have a lovely weekend.
May 12th, 2022 17:54
The Secrets Rain Hides
L. B. Mek said:
subtle, your pacing and natural rhythm
feels effortless
such a hard style to get right
your keyboard must have seen
a lot of mileage, for you to accrue
such practised skill..
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
(imagine tears, as your mind\'s
way of sweating, some
of those suffocating hurts and anxieties
in your life..
don\'t fight them, instead
use them, like rivers
follow them back to their
sprouting, roots
and deal with that initial problem
causing you pain
not your emotions or feelings
the actual, factual
problem
you can deal with, find it
and strive to find a way
from having it Affect your life
to such an extent..
I wish you, Peace)
April 28th, 2022 03:19
L. B. Mek said:
subtle, your pacing and natural rhythm
feels effortless
such a hard style to get right
your keyboard must have seen
a lot of mileage, for you to accrue
such practised skill..
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
(imagine tears, as your mind\'s
way of sweating, some
of those suffocating hurts and anxieties
in your life..
don\'t fight them, instead
use them, like rivers
follow them back to their
sprouting, roots
and deal with that initial problem
causing you pain
not your emotions or feelings
the actual, factual
problem
you can deal with, find it
and strive to find a way
from having it Affect your life
to such an extent..
I wish you, Peace)
April 28th, 2022 03:19
The Secrets Rain Hides
Crowns4Christ said:
You shouldn\'t have to hide to cry dear, I love your style of writing
April 27th, 2022 19:04
Crowns4Christ said:
You shouldn\'t have to hide to cry dear, I love your style of writing
April 27th, 2022 19:04
