Comments received on poems by arqios
hands off that snooze button!
Doggerel Dave said:
Never thought I\'d do this - just faved it without commentary....
September 22nd, 2022 18:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Never thought I\'d do this - just faved it without commentary....
September 22nd, 2022 18:14
hands off that snooze button!
Tony Grannell said:
A profound wakeup call in the true art of poetry and a wonderful command of the English language. The couplets bring it all together to form an unremitting verse into the final awakning and thus - the light. Excellent!
Kind regards,
Tony.
September 22nd, 2022 12:21
Tony Grannell said:
A profound wakeup call in the true art of poetry and a wonderful command of the English language. The couplets bring it all together to form an unremitting verse into the final awakning and thus - the light. Excellent!
Kind regards,
Tony.
September 22nd, 2022 12:21
hands off that snooze button!
Fay Slimm. said:
Inspiringly good and alive with empowerment these fine linguistic invites. This goes into my faves.
September 22nd, 2022 07:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Inspiringly good and alive with empowerment these fine linguistic invites. This goes into my faves.
September 22nd, 2022 07:45
live fed matins
Bella Shepard said:
I would say dear friend, take it where you can get, even if it\'s on a live feed. It\'s real, it\'s there, and you can almost reach out and touch it in your thoughts. Thank you for sharing all of it.
September 20th, 2022 10:18
Bella Shepard said:
I would say dear friend, take it where you can get, even if it\'s on a live feed. It\'s real, it\'s there, and you can almost reach out and touch it in your thoughts. Thank you for sharing all of it.
September 20th, 2022 10:18
live fed matins
Doggerel Dave said:
Irony - via live screen.
Got it - Not the real thing?
Dunno where you live, but there has to be some not far away....
September 20th, 2022 07:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Irony - via live screen.
Got it - Not the real thing?
Dunno where you live, but there has to be some not far away....
September 20th, 2022 07:35
Hey! You bit my sandwich!
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - Having taken all factors into consideration, I think you might just conceivably be right......................
September 18th, 2022 19:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - Having taken all factors into consideration, I think you might just conceivably be right......................
September 18th, 2022 19:02
the insolent bystander
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll vote for the grey areas anytime - thanks.
September 17th, 2022 07:00
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll vote for the grey areas anytime - thanks.
September 17th, 2022 07:00
thanks for the applause
Doggerel Dave said:
At last! one I can halfway comprehend! Permission to amend to some of my crap as a token of gratitude?
September 17th, 2022 06:54
Doggerel Dave said:
At last! one I can halfway comprehend! Permission to amend to some of my crap as a token of gratitude?
September 17th, 2022 06:54
re(ad)writing poetry
sorenbarrett said:
This struck me in a long-buried place. Long before I started writing poetry, I had a muse for reading. I particularly liked the imagery of the first stanza.
September 17th, 2022 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
This struck me in a long-buried place. Long before I started writing poetry, I had a muse for reading. I particularly liked the imagery of the first stanza.
September 17th, 2022 06:49
impervious impermeability
Bella Shepard said:
To see, yet not to attend and comprehend, the ultimate blind spot. Open the mind and you open endless possibilities. This is what I take away from this well penned verse. Thank you my friend!
September 15th, 2022 10:52
Bella Shepard said:
To see, yet not to attend and comprehend, the ultimate blind spot. Open the mind and you open endless possibilities. This is what I take away from this well penned verse. Thank you my friend!
September 15th, 2022 10:52
impervious impermeability
sorenbarrett said:
Perceptive from eyes that do not see. I liked this poem very much, it strikes home.
September 15th, 2022 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
Perceptive from eyes that do not see. I liked this poem very much, it strikes home.
September 15th, 2022 09:02
would-be people\'s queen
orchidee said:
A fine write and tribute CB. Those gone, those left behind........
September 12th, 2022 02:07
orchidee said:
A fine write and tribute CB. Those gone, those left behind........
September 12th, 2022 02:07
non-elegy
Bella Shepard said:
A wonderfully fitting write my dear poet, a legacy that will continue to unfold for years to come.
September 9th, 2022 14:21
Bella Shepard said:
A wonderfully fitting write my dear poet, a legacy that will continue to unfold for years to come.
September 9th, 2022 14:21
waterfront solitude
Bella Shepard said:
There is something special about water; flowing, falling, babbling, meandering, that does soothe the soul. Beautifully captured dear friend.
September 7th, 2022 14:33
Bella Shepard said:
There is something special about water; flowing, falling, babbling, meandering, that does soothe the soul. Beautifully captured dear friend.
September 7th, 2022 14:33
the insolent bystander
Bella Shepard said:
Cryptic? You\'ve got me thinking real hard.
September 6th, 2022 12:53
Bella Shepard said:
Cryptic? You\'ve got me thinking real hard.
September 6th, 2022 12:53
thanks for the applause
Mr. Not said:
im not good with words, but i like this poem a lot.
September 6th, 2022 02:27
Mr. Not said:
im not good with words, but i like this poem a lot.
September 6th, 2022 02:27
thanks for the applause
Bella Shepard said:
A fond adieu, may these sweet words find gentle rest in ethereal bliss. A well deserved standing O.
September 5th, 2022 13:04
Bella Shepard said:
A fond adieu, may these sweet words find gentle rest in ethereal bliss. A well deserved standing O.
September 5th, 2022 13:04
thanks for the applause
orchidee said:
Yep, a standing ovation from me, for these fine words CB!
September 5th, 2022 12:00
orchidee said:
Yep, a standing ovation from me, for these fine words CB!
September 5th, 2022 12:00
tempest
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
If I had not got the message of this, I would say - oohh, you need a brolly there! lol.
September 3rd, 2022 11:31
orchidee said:
Good write CB.
If I had not got the message of this, I would say - oohh, you need a brolly there! lol.
September 3rd, 2022 11:31
dangling carrot
Doggerel Dave said:
I get that completely (now I\'ve found it!)
Let them go, I say - I cannot get my head around what \'success\' means anyway....
September 2nd, 2022 21:04
Doggerel Dave said:
I get that completely (now I\'ve found it!)
Let them go, I say - I cannot get my head around what \'success\' means anyway....
September 2nd, 2022 21:04
the other side of the coin
orchidee said:
It\'s not too dark for my teef to read!
Whatever am I talking about?! lol.
September 2nd, 2022 02:01
orchidee said:
It\'s not too dark for my teef to read!
Whatever am I talking about?! lol.
September 2nd, 2022 02:01
forsaking all else
Bella Shepard said:
So profoundly stated my friend. In love and in life, acuity and mindfulness do go hand in hand.
August 31st, 2022 11:14
Bella Shepard said:
So profoundly stated my friend. In love and in life, acuity and mindfulness do go hand in hand.
August 31st, 2022 11:14
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