Comments received on poems by arqios
unlikely treasures
sorenbarrett said:
A poet\'s work here. Miners of jems that come rough and uncut from the ground, They require polishing and cutting. Very nicely mined and cut in this poem
December 10th, 2024 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poet\'s work here. Miners of jems that come rough and uncut from the ground, They require polishing and cutting. Very nicely mined and cut in this poem
December 10th, 2024 06:14
where is home?
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
Short and succinct
awesomazing brevity!
Great use of metaphor,
yup kindness is the key! 🗝️
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 10th, 2024 00:07
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
Short and succinct
awesomazing brevity!
Great use of metaphor,
yup kindness is the key! 🗝️
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 10th, 2024 00:07
where is home?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is another example of great word economy! A lot said in such few words! Well done, friend! 🌹👏
December 9th, 2024 16:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is another example of great word economy! A lot said in such few words! Well done, friend! 🌹👏
December 9th, 2024 16:19
where is home?
Teddy.15 said:
Could be stuck in the middle of nowhere, beautiful dear arqios, much to reflect on in so little words elegant and I couldn\'t agree more about words. I believe Kindness is underrated my friend it really can go a long way. 🌹
December 9th, 2024 06:15
Teddy.15 said:
Could be stuck in the middle of nowhere, beautiful dear arqios, much to reflect on in so little words elegant and I couldn\'t agree more about words. I believe Kindness is underrated my friend it really can go a long way. 🌹
December 9th, 2024 06:15
where is home?
sorenbarrett said:
Been there my friend and it is not where one wants to be. So nicely put in so few words
December 9th, 2024 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
Been there my friend and it is not where one wants to be. So nicely put in so few words
December 9th, 2024 06:14
where is home?
David Wakeling said:
This is intriguing.powerful metaphors here.
December 9th, 2024 05:54
David Wakeling said:
This is intriguing.powerful metaphors here.
December 9th, 2024 05:54
where is home?
Caring dove said:
Interesting well written poem
Makes me think of those things that are missing .. then it doesn’t always feel like ‘ home ‘ does it
I get that feeling sometimes here , where I live doesn’t always feel like ‘ home
But I guess ‘ home ‘ can be when around certain people aswell
December 9th, 2024 05:36
Caring dove said:
Interesting well written poem
Makes me think of those things that are missing .. then it doesn’t always feel like ‘ home ‘ does it
I get that feeling sometimes here , where I live doesn’t always feel like ‘ home
But I guess ‘ home ‘ can be when around certain people aswell
December 9th, 2024 05:36
life\'s no faerie tale
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive words arqios.
Andy
December 9th, 2024 03:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive words arqios.
Andy
December 9th, 2024 03:12
life\'s no faerie tale
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem, my friend! A true delight to read. ❤️🙏
December 8th, 2024 17:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem, my friend! A true delight to read. ❤️🙏
December 8th, 2024 17:18
life\'s no faerie tale
Cassie58 said:
Shades of Byron. Beautiful poetry. Reads so very nicely.
December 8th, 2024 13:08
Cassie58 said:
Shades of Byron. Beautiful poetry. Reads so very nicely.
December 8th, 2024 13:08
life\'s no faerie tale
David Wakeling said:
this is so amazing.I love the cadence and rhyme. I,m not sure who she is but it can stand for all of us.Its all a fairy tale.
December 8th, 2024 06:01
David Wakeling said:
this is so amazing.I love the cadence and rhyme. I,m not sure who she is but it can stand for all of us.Its all a fairy tale.
December 8th, 2024 06:01
life\'s no faerie tale
sorenbarrett said:
I love the archaic language Used in this poem. It adds a sense of age and with it credibility. The Rhymin of this poem was wonderful and add so much to the meaning itself. It has a very classical field to it.
December 8th, 2024 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
I love the archaic language Used in this poem. It adds a sense of age and with it credibility. The Rhymin of this poem was wonderful and add so much to the meaning itself. It has a very classical field to it.
December 8th, 2024 05:50
life\'s no faerie tale
Lorenz said:
Very nicely expressed ! good job chat gpt !
December 8th, 2024 05:17
Lorenz said:
Very nicely expressed ! good job chat gpt !
December 8th, 2024 05:17
life\'s no faerie tale
Caring dove said:
Change even tho things may feel difficult .
This is lovely . ))
It can be hard to change things when we are struggling .. sometimes
There’s a soft feel to this poem
Very nicely expressed
December 8th, 2024 05:13
Caring dove said:
Change even tho things may feel difficult .
This is lovely . ))
It can be hard to change things when we are struggling .. sometimes
There’s a soft feel to this poem
Very nicely expressed
December 8th, 2024 05:13
life\'s no faerie tale
Poetic Licence said:
Very tender and sweet poem, a lovely read on a wet and cold Sunday, Thank you
December 8th, 2024 05:04
Poetic Licence said:
Very tender and sweet poem, a lovely read on a wet and cold Sunday, Thank you
December 8th, 2024 05:04
a makar’s legacy
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words makar, may they never cease.
Andy
December 8th, 2024 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words makar, may they never cease.
Andy
December 8th, 2024 02:27
a makar’s legacy
Neville said:
whilst the border is unimpressive, what lies beyond will blow the mind .. you just took me back several road trips & for that priceless gift I thank you alone .. Neville
December 8th, 2024 02:01
Neville said:
whilst the border is unimpressive, what lies beyond will blow the mind .. you just took me back several road trips & for that priceless gift I thank you alone .. Neville
December 8th, 2024 02:01
a makar’s legacy
Dan Williams said:
Unsure of a Makar but consider this an education. Well done.
December 8th, 2024 01:33
Dan Williams said:
Unsure of a Makar but consider this an education. Well done.
December 8th, 2024 01:33
a makar’s legacy
Thad Wilk said:
A most splendid poem,
and poetic pictorial,
eye pleasing imagery,!!🙏
Just resonates with greatness,
penned superbly!! 👏
My pleasure to read indeed!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 7th, 2024 20:57
Thad Wilk said:
A most splendid poem,
and poetic pictorial,
eye pleasing imagery,!!🙏
Just resonates with greatness,
penned superbly!! 👏
My pleasure to read indeed!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 7th, 2024 20:57
a makar’s legacy
Doggerel Dave said:
Och aye - your makar does what good poets aspire to do - navigate through a complex reality in as rich but concise way as possible,
Enjoyed the read, mate.
December 7th, 2024 16:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Och aye - your makar does what good poets aspire to do - navigate through a complex reality in as rich but concise way as possible,
Enjoyed the read, mate.
December 7th, 2024 16:23
tango of us
Caring dove said:
A lovely interesting and engaging writing .. very nice to read
December 7th, 2024 15:16
Caring dove said:
A lovely interesting and engaging writing .. very nice to read
December 7th, 2024 15:16
a makar’s legacy
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a bard. It speaks of his role and importance in the telling of stories, the evoking of emotions and imparting of wisdom. Cast in Scotland it gives a particular flavor to this poem of the mystical, historical, and for many the exotic. Very nicely done, my friend With lines of beauty and poetic artistry.
December 7th, 2024 14:04
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a bard. It speaks of his role and importance in the telling of stories, the evoking of emotions and imparting of wisdom. Cast in Scotland it gives a particular flavor to this poem of the mystical, historical, and for many the exotic. Very nicely done, my friend With lines of beauty and poetic artistry.
December 7th, 2024 14:04
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