Comments received on poems by arqios
in memory’s wake
Goldfinch60 said:
That path has been found arqios and will always be there.
Andy
October 18th, 2024 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
That path has been found arqios and will always be there.
Andy
October 18th, 2024 01:13
ginkgo
Neville said:
excellent ink if you don\'t mind me saying .. wistfully yours a real fan .. Me
October 17th, 2024 07:11
Neville said:
excellent ink if you don\'t mind me saying .. wistfully yours a real fan .. Me
October 17th, 2024 07:11
in memory’s wake
sorenbarrett said:
Melancholic and haunting a reflection that glimers in the bottom of a dark well the font of inspiration. Lovely and haunting.
October 17th, 2024 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
Melancholic and haunting a reflection that glimers in the bottom of a dark well the font of inspiration. Lovely and haunting.
October 17th, 2024 05:59
in memory’s wake
Neville said:
No matter when it began exactly .. or how long I can make it last for .. that precise moment, despite so often trying to recollect it has always so far eluded me .. and I imagine might always do so .. a fine reflection my friend .. Neville
October 17th, 2024 04:49
Neville said:
No matter when it began exactly .. or how long I can make it last for .. that precise moment, despite so often trying to recollect it has always so far eluded me .. and I imagine might always do so .. a fine reflection my friend .. Neville
October 17th, 2024 04:49
in public view
sorenbarrett said:
A lesson too often learned by too many people. Pain is a negative reinforcement and is best used to prevent further dangerous behavior in such cases is seems the best solution. Nicely written with such a good flow
October 16th, 2024 08:02
sorenbarrett said:
A lesson too often learned by too many people. Pain is a negative reinforcement and is best used to prevent further dangerous behavior in such cases is seems the best solution. Nicely written with such a good flow
October 16th, 2024 08:02
ginkgo
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, well, a tidy little bit of exposure and neatly tied up lesson. While I\'m still disinclined to try it, this is very sweetly rendered with excellent imagery and none too subtle poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 15th, 2024 15:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, well, a tidy little bit of exposure and neatly tied up lesson. While I\'m still disinclined to try it, this is very sweetly rendered with excellent imagery and none too subtle poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 15th, 2024 15:35
ginkgo
Doggerel Dave said:
All of the above in a celebration of Ginkgo biloba. Been around for a very long time.... worked? I don\'t remember... Last line summary great, Rik.
October 15th, 2024 05:23
Doggerel Dave said:
All of the above in a celebration of Ginkgo biloba. Been around for a very long time.... worked? I don\'t remember... Last line summary great, Rik.
October 15th, 2024 05:23
ginkgo
sorenbarrett said:
Used to decrease aspects of dimentia seems a clue to the title\'s tie to the poem. The poem itself is masterful in its wording feeling wistful and the last line is genius in its tying of hope, regret and forgetfulness into their relationship. Lovelu
October 15th, 2024 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
Used to decrease aspects of dimentia seems a clue to the title\'s tie to the poem. The poem itself is masterful in its wording feeling wistful and the last line is genius in its tying of hope, regret and forgetfulness into their relationship. Lovelu
October 15th, 2024 05:12
a rude remorse
Goldfinch60 said:
We should never put down our pen arqois.
Andy
October 15th, 2024 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
We should never put down our pen arqois.
Andy
October 15th, 2024 01:24
a rude remorse
sorenbarrett said:
Now Cryptic this one requires thought. I like to think of my ink well as a wishing well but sometimes it goes dry. Now people have said that what I write is sometimes rude but putting down the pen being rude that I\'ve never been accused. I guess you are right it would be the most rude to myself.
October 14th, 2024 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
Now Cryptic this one requires thought. I like to think of my ink well as a wishing well but sometimes it goes dry. Now people have said that what I write is sometimes rude but putting down the pen being rude that I\'ve never been accused. I guess you are right it would be the most rude to myself.
October 14th, 2024 05:07
The Burden of Upgrades
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic each stanza has its own depth and deep it goes. I initially was taken by the first stanza in its tightness of thought and expression so nicely worded. Upon second reading it was the second stanza that stood out and upon the third reading it was the third. Then the last two lines. Masterfully worded this sonnet might we say is a work of art.
October 13th, 2024 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic each stanza has its own depth and deep it goes. I initially was taken by the first stanza in its tightness of thought and expression so nicely worded. Upon second reading it was the second stanza that stood out and upon the third reading it was the third. Then the last two lines. Masterfully worded this sonnet might we say is a work of art.
October 13th, 2024 04:50
A Familiar Stranger
Doggerel Dave said:
Works for me as son - father relationship over time, and as such has a tone of veracity about it.
October 12th, 2024 13:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Works for me as son - father relationship over time, and as such has a tone of veracity about it.
October 12th, 2024 13:49
be-lightedly
sorenbarrett said:
Criptic this is a metaphor so applicable to many things from romance to work not done, ideas never implimented, intentions left undone, words not spoken and life not lived. A masterpiece lit
October 11th, 2024 07:29
sorenbarrett said:
Criptic this is a metaphor so applicable to many things from romance to work not done, ideas never implimented, intentions left undone, words not spoken and life not lived. A masterpiece lit
October 11th, 2024 07:29
no longer spectral, Brontës shall remain
sorenbarrett said:
Etched in stone can still be altered by someone else and memories can be changed with which history past and the present becomes something else. Reunification becomes possible
October 10th, 2024 19:52
sorenbarrett said:
Etched in stone can still be altered by someone else and memories can be changed with which history past and the present becomes something else. Reunification becomes possible
October 10th, 2024 19:52
no longer spectral, Brontës shall remain
MaxSmith said:
A lovely read, nicely penned,
October 10th, 2024 11:29
MaxSmith said:
A lovely read, nicely penned,
October 10th, 2024 11:29
dream slices
Neville said:
exquisite images dance before my eyes .. indeed stunning
October 10th, 2024 05:52
Neville said:
exquisite images dance before my eyes .. indeed stunning
October 10th, 2024 05:52
no longer spectral, Brontës shall remain
Neville said:
How time flies .. it never gets old tho does it .. poetry that is .. Neville
October 10th, 2024 05:08
Neville said:
How time flies .. it never gets old tho does it .. poetry that is .. Neville
October 10th, 2024 05:08
A Rare Edition
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent work. I did that acestery dna thing...turns out, I\'m 25% Scottish.
October 9th, 2024 11:47
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent work. I did that acestery dna thing...turns out, I\'m 25% Scottish.
October 9th, 2024 11:47
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