Comments received on poems by arqios
unlikely treasures
Neville said:
its what we do and how we go about achieving it .. each individual word a potential gem or invaluable nugget .. building blocks .. a part of a whole .. a process of construction .. or something very much like that .. maybe .. Neville
December 10th, 2024 11:19
Neville said:
its what we do and how we go about achieving it .. each individual word a potential gem or invaluable nugget .. building blocks .. a part of a whole .. a process of construction .. or something very much like that .. maybe .. Neville
December 10th, 2024 11:19
unlikely treasures
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful, bejeweled write, my friend! I always enjoy stopping by and reading your words! 🌹👏 Faved.
December 10th, 2024 10:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful, bejeweled write, my friend! I always enjoy stopping by and reading your words! 🌹👏 Faved.
December 10th, 2024 10:16
Hidden Garden (reverse nonet)
Caring dove said:
Nice soft words .. I like your writing
December 10th, 2024 09:20
Caring dove said:
Nice soft words .. I like your writing
December 10th, 2024 09:20
unlikely treasures
Poetic Licence said:
I have learnt a lot reading your poetry, i enjoy reading it and it always raises questions for me, this one makes me think of me. Thank you
December 10th, 2024 08:44
Poetic Licence said:
I have learnt a lot reading your poetry, i enjoy reading it and it always raises questions for me, this one makes me think of me. Thank you
December 10th, 2024 08:44
where is home?
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. I found this rather thought-provoking, about the idea of what is home, and where is it. Nicely done.
December 10th, 2024 08:28
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. I found this rather thought-provoking, about the idea of what is home, and where is it. Nicely done.
December 10th, 2024 08:28
unlikely treasures
sorenbarrett said:
A poet\'s work here. Miners of jems that come rough and uncut from the ground, They require polishing and cutting. Very nicely mined and cut in this poem
December 10th, 2024 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poet\'s work here. Miners of jems that come rough and uncut from the ground, They require polishing and cutting. Very nicely mined and cut in this poem
December 10th, 2024 06:14
where is home?
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
Short and succinct
awesomazing brevity!
Great use of metaphor,
yup kindness is the key! 🗝️
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 10th, 2024 00:07
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
Short and succinct
awesomazing brevity!
Great use of metaphor,
yup kindness is the key! 🗝️
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 10th, 2024 00:07
where is home?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is another example of great word economy! A lot said in such few words! Well done, friend! 🌹👏
December 9th, 2024 16:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is another example of great word economy! A lot said in such few words! Well done, friend! 🌹👏
December 9th, 2024 16:19
where is home?
Teddy.15 said:
Could be stuck in the middle of nowhere, beautiful dear arqios, much to reflect on in so little words elegant and I couldn\'t agree more about words. I believe Kindness is underrated my friend it really can go a long way. 🌹
December 9th, 2024 06:15
Teddy.15 said:
Could be stuck in the middle of nowhere, beautiful dear arqios, much to reflect on in so little words elegant and I couldn\'t agree more about words. I believe Kindness is underrated my friend it really can go a long way. 🌹
December 9th, 2024 06:15
where is home?
sorenbarrett said:
Been there my friend and it is not where one wants to be. So nicely put in so few words
December 9th, 2024 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
Been there my friend and it is not where one wants to be. So nicely put in so few words
December 9th, 2024 06:14
where is home?
David Wakeling said:
This is intriguing.powerful metaphors here.
December 9th, 2024 05:54
David Wakeling said:
This is intriguing.powerful metaphors here.
December 9th, 2024 05:54
where is home?
Caring dove said:
Interesting well written poem
Makes me think of those things that are missing .. then it doesn’t always feel like ‘ home ‘ does it
I get that feeling sometimes here , where I live doesn’t always feel like ‘ home
But I guess ‘ home ‘ can be when around certain people aswell
December 9th, 2024 05:36
Caring dove said:
Interesting well written poem
Makes me think of those things that are missing .. then it doesn’t always feel like ‘ home ‘ does it
I get that feeling sometimes here , where I live doesn’t always feel like ‘ home
But I guess ‘ home ‘ can be when around certain people aswell
December 9th, 2024 05:36
life\'s no faerie tale
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive words arqios.
Andy
December 9th, 2024 03:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive words arqios.
Andy
December 9th, 2024 03:12
life\'s no faerie tale
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem, my friend! A true delight to read. ❤️🙏
December 8th, 2024 17:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem, my friend! A true delight to read. ❤️🙏
December 8th, 2024 17:18
life\'s no faerie tale
Cassie58 said:
Shades of Byron. Beautiful poetry. Reads so very nicely.
December 8th, 2024 13:08
Cassie58 said:
Shades of Byron. Beautiful poetry. Reads so very nicely.
December 8th, 2024 13:08
life\'s no faerie tale
David Wakeling said:
this is so amazing.I love the cadence and rhyme. I,m not sure who she is but it can stand for all of us.Its all a fairy tale.
December 8th, 2024 06:01
David Wakeling said:
this is so amazing.I love the cadence and rhyme. I,m not sure who she is but it can stand for all of us.Its all a fairy tale.
December 8th, 2024 06:01
life\'s no faerie tale
sorenbarrett said:
I love the archaic language Used in this poem. It adds a sense of age and with it credibility. The Rhymin of this poem was wonderful and add so much to the meaning itself. It has a very classical field to it.
December 8th, 2024 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
I love the archaic language Used in this poem. It adds a sense of age and with it credibility. The Rhymin of this poem was wonderful and add so much to the meaning itself. It has a very classical field to it.
December 8th, 2024 05:50
life\'s no faerie tale
Lorenz said:
Very nicely expressed ! good job chat gpt !
December 8th, 2024 05:17
Lorenz said:
Very nicely expressed ! good job chat gpt !
December 8th, 2024 05:17
life\'s no faerie tale
Caring dove said:
Change even tho things may feel difficult .
This is lovely . ))
It can be hard to change things when we are struggling .. sometimes
There’s a soft feel to this poem
Very nicely expressed
December 8th, 2024 05:13
Caring dove said:
Change even tho things may feel difficult .
This is lovely . ))
It can be hard to change things when we are struggling .. sometimes
There’s a soft feel to this poem
Very nicely expressed
December 8th, 2024 05:13
life\'s no faerie tale
Poetic Licence said:
Very tender and sweet poem, a lovely read on a wet and cold Sunday, Thank you
December 8th, 2024 05:04
Poetic Licence said:
Very tender and sweet poem, a lovely read on a wet and cold Sunday, Thank you
December 8th, 2024 05:04
a makar’s legacy
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words makar, may they never cease.
Andy
December 8th, 2024 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words makar, may they never cease.
Andy
December 8th, 2024 02:27
a makar’s legacy
Neville said:
whilst the border is unimpressive, what lies beyond will blow the mind .. you just took me back several road trips & for that priceless gift I thank you alone .. Neville
December 8th, 2024 02:01
Neville said:
whilst the border is unimpressive, what lies beyond will blow the mind .. you just took me back several road trips & for that priceless gift I thank you alone .. Neville
December 8th, 2024 02:01
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