Comments received on poems by sirlocowicked AKA Bubba
Expect !!
L. B. Mek said:
so true
we act like we live a scripted life
when most of us can\'t read the omens
in our path..
loving the empowering message dear poet
August 25th, 2023 03:38
L. B. Mek said:
so true
we act like we live a scripted life
when most of us can\'t read the omens
in our path..
loving the empowering message dear poet
August 25th, 2023 03:38
9/11/2001
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
The poem was so good that i started to imagine what might have happened with those people, what kind of hell they went through
September 11th, 2022 13:28
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
The poem was so good that i started to imagine what might have happened with those people, what kind of hell they went through
September 11th, 2022 13:28
Halloween 🎃👻🍁🧡
L. B. Mek said:
no, no I appreciate your thinking
anything to distract
from the fact
that I\'m being boiled alive...
lol
thank you!
(oh yeah
football baby, Football
tailgate parties and helmets
galore!)
admittedly I just get to see it, onscreen
at about 2am...
but hey, football baby!
lol
August 16th, 2022 04:53
L. B. Mek said:
no, no I appreciate your thinking
anything to distract
from the fact
that I\'m being boiled alive...
lol
thank you!
(oh yeah
football baby, Football
tailgate parties and helmets
galore!)
admittedly I just get to see it, onscreen
at about 2am...
but hey, football baby!
lol
August 16th, 2022 04:53
Route 66!
Raven333 said:
Great work my friend, I have never been there but by your description I do believe i was there..
August 9th, 2022 16:52
Raven333 said:
Great work my friend, I have never been there but by your description I do believe i was there..
August 9th, 2022 16:52
Route 66!
L. B. Mek said:
route66, was such a romantic notion
in my youth,
a \'drop top\' car or preferably
a Harley Davidson
a friend or two, for the lucky few
and there
your ticket, to writing a page
upon those mythology adventures
a story to tell, all of your own...
(thanks for sharing, dear poet
and helping me reminisce
my childhood daydreams
a little)
August 9th, 2022 02:25
L. B. Mek said:
route66, was such a romantic notion
in my youth,
a \'drop top\' car or preferably
a Harley Davidson
a friend or two, for the lucky few
and there
your ticket, to writing a page
upon those mythology adventures
a story to tell, all of your own...
(thanks for sharing, dear poet
and helping me reminisce
my childhood daydreams
a little)
August 9th, 2022 02:25
My hurting feet
L. B. Mek said:
take it easy, sometimes
we just gotta get through the rough patches in life
fck anything else, just try
and literally
take it a step at a time..
hope you get better soon, sounds real painful
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 4th, 2022 03:16
L. B. Mek said:
take it easy, sometimes
we just gotta get through the rough patches in life
fck anything else, just try
and literally
take it a step at a time..
hope you get better soon, sounds real painful
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 4th, 2022 03:16
Alcoholic anonymous!!
jazzwa30 said:
Love it I love the fact you state lawyers doctors because these people are so highly thought of and people dt realize they may go through the same struggles.
July 29th, 2022 09:33
jazzwa30 said:
Love it I love the fact you state lawyers doctors because these people are so highly thought of and people dt realize they may go through the same struggles.
July 29th, 2022 09:33
Alcoholic anonymous!!
L. B. Mek said:
Yes you are, so worth it!
I for one am privileged to witness
your Fight!
More power to you! dear Poet
what an inspiration, you represent
July 29th, 2022 03:21
L. B. Mek said:
Yes you are, so worth it!
I for one am privileged to witness
your Fight!
More power to you! dear Poet
what an inspiration, you represent
July 29th, 2022 03:21
Boxing 🥊my amateur career
Raven333 said:
Aww, I loved your poem, was nice to hear about your boxing days but so sorry about your mom. Great Job
July 26th, 2022 16:50
Raven333 said:
Aww, I loved your poem, was nice to hear about your boxing days but so sorry about your mom. Great Job
July 26th, 2022 16:50
Death!!
Raven333 said:
I thought that was absolutely beautiful and inspirational!! very good write with a great flow to it..
July 25th, 2022 11:08
Raven333 said:
I thought that was absolutely beautiful and inspirational!! very good write with a great flow to it..
July 25th, 2022 11:08
Pumpkin 🎃🎃 patch
Raven333 said:
I loved your poem, kinda got me in the mood for halloween
July 24th, 2022 00:00
Raven333 said:
I loved your poem, kinda got me in the mood for halloween
July 24th, 2022 00:00
James Smitty Hank Fargo\"
L. B. Mek said:
may he rest in peace
these words read so intimate..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 22nd, 2022 04:11
L. B. Mek said:
may he rest in peace
these words read so intimate..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 22nd, 2022 04:11
Podiatrist 🦶👣!!
Raven333 said:
Love this poem about your feet!!! Once again your rhyme was tight and made everything flow just right.
July 21st, 2022 01:46
Raven333 said:
Love this poem about your feet!!! Once again your rhyme was tight and made everything flow just right.
July 21st, 2022 01:46
Podiatrist 🦶👣!!
L. B. Mek said:
ouch, sorry for your pain
still
go easy on those jumps shots..
lol
thanks for sharing
July 21st, 2022 01:20
L. B. Mek said:
ouch, sorry for your pain
still
go easy on those jumps shots..
lol
thanks for sharing
July 21st, 2022 01:20
Paths
Raven333 said:
Awesome poem, really enjoyed it and totally agree. Also your flow was tight
July 14th, 2022 13:56
Raven333 said:
Awesome poem, really enjoyed it and totally agree. Also your flow was tight
July 14th, 2022 13:56
Paths
Caring dove said:
A good writing .. life can be unkind and we definately need others ti be there for us / help us
July 13th, 2022 00:33
Caring dove said:
A good writing .. life can be unkind and we definately need others ti be there for us / help us
July 13th, 2022 00:33
Untitled
Raven333 said:
Wow, what a touching poem. am almost lost for words. well written with a great rhyme which made the flow.. flow.
July 12th, 2022 05:19
Raven333 said:
Wow, what a touching poem. am almost lost for words. well written with a great rhyme which made the flow.. flow.
July 12th, 2022 05:19
Untitled
L. B. Mek said:
\'But like this tree it hadn\'t a choice,
Mother nature was it\'s voice.\'
yeah
these lines read so sincere and
are full of deep, wisdom
that can actually be utilised
in our everyday lives..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
a great read
(I read and learn)
July 12th, 2022 02:16
L. B. Mek said:
\'But like this tree it hadn\'t a choice,
Mother nature was it\'s voice.\'
yeah
these lines read so sincere and
are full of deep, wisdom
that can actually be utilised
in our everyday lives..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
a great read
(I read and learn)
July 12th, 2022 02:16
For granted!!
L. B. Mek said:
so true
we try to grab one more, evermore
while our arms are full to the brim
and if we but drop, one
minuscule item, it\'s all
woe is me laments and disaster..
lol
we be a funny lot..
thanks for sharing
July 11th, 2022 02:34
L. B. Mek said:
so true
we try to grab one more, evermore
while our arms are full to the brim
and if we but drop, one
minuscule item, it\'s all
woe is me laments and disaster..
lol
we be a funny lot..
thanks for sharing
July 11th, 2022 02:34
Beatles Pandora playlist!!!
Raven333 said:
I think this is the most clever poem I have ever read. To flow like it did and have all those awesome tunes inscripted in the poem . Thank you for sharing this piece. I have to include, I believe there is over 18 songs in there. All the great ones I grew up on. Awesome Write...
July 7th, 2022 01:43
Raven333 said:
I think this is the most clever poem I have ever read. To flow like it did and have all those awesome tunes inscripted in the poem . Thank you for sharing this piece. I have to include, I believe there is over 18 songs in there. All the great ones I grew up on. Awesome Write...
July 7th, 2022 01:43
The Fourth of July!!! Evening 🌆
Raven333 said:
Nicely done, loved to hear how you spent it. LOL I thought it was nicely written and had a really good flow.
July 5th, 2022 23:58
Raven333 said:
Nicely done, loved to hear how you spent it. LOL I thought it was nicely written and had a really good flow.
July 5th, 2022 23:58
The Fourth of July!!! Evening 🌆
L. B. Mek said:
again finely weaved wisdom
delivered accessible and succinct
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 5th, 2022 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
again finely weaved wisdom
delivered accessible and succinct
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 5th, 2022 04:05
January 6th 2021
L. B. Mek said:
yes, a horrid foreshadowing
of democracy and civility\'s
inevitable, demise..
\'be it for goodness or decimation
it just takes, one
yet, we never learn..\'
(sorry for my lengthy comment
thanks for sharing, dear poet
an important message)
July 4th, 2022 03:09
L. B. Mek said:
yes, a horrid foreshadowing
of democracy and civility\'s
inevitable, demise..
\'be it for goodness or decimation
it just takes, one
yet, we never learn..\'
(sorry for my lengthy comment
thanks for sharing, dear poet
an important message)
July 4th, 2022 03:09
🍻🍻🍺🍻 beer
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, \'alcohol\'
one of the world\'s
most devastatingly, addictive
chemicals
available for purchase, with a
\'valid\' ID card
anywhere and everywhere
yet, we outlaw cigarettes..
(but you see, dear Poet
that\'s why
depending on society, to guide us
is like
abstaining from sex
to find, righteousness:
often, one
doesn\'t necessarily, effect
the other..;
so the solution, must come
from within
Temperance, is the answer
we must strive for)
to \'know thy self\'
while humbly, accepting
that \'we know nothing, at all\'
as
in that conflicting
duality
exists, our glimpsed
Clarity...!
(we must, learn
our own, individual limitations
and search for solutions
for our perfectly fallible
natural, Failings..
and in that
we empower ourselves
to make the best of our lives:
see, while
we may have hay fever
we can learn to not smell, flowers
yet, that still doesn\'t prevent us
form looking upon
and appreciating
their delicate, nature\'s Beauty..
ergo
if we suspect, we may have a weakness
to addictive things, then
we must learn, to not
create trappings, that will hinder
our freedom
refrain, from activities
that can easily become, addictive
like
playing computer games, too much
or drinking, alcohol
just because, everyone else is)
and on...
No
we can\'t change the world
or force it, to be curated
so that our life\'s can become easier to navigate
instead
we can curate, ourselves
to insure, we can survive
whatever
the world has to throw at us!
and in that, Truth
exists
the True cure, to addiction\'s
plague upon Humanity..
(but who do we have
to teach this to us, before
it\'s, Too late...
this be the curse of Fate
and limitations, to intellect
see
no one, Fckin cares
untill, it\'s Too
Fckin late..!!!)
June 30th, 2022 05:32
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, \'alcohol\'
one of the world\'s
most devastatingly, addictive
chemicals
available for purchase, with a
\'valid\' ID card
anywhere and everywhere
yet, we outlaw cigarettes..
(but you see, dear Poet
that\'s why
depending on society, to guide us
is like
abstaining from sex
to find, righteousness:
often, one
doesn\'t necessarily, effect
the other..;
so the solution, must come
from within
Temperance, is the answer
we must strive for)
to \'know thy self\'
while humbly, accepting
that \'we know nothing, at all\'
as
in that conflicting
duality
exists, our glimpsed
Clarity...!
(we must, learn
our own, individual limitations
and search for solutions
for our perfectly fallible
natural, Failings..
and in that
we empower ourselves
to make the best of our lives:
see, while
we may have hay fever
we can learn to not smell, flowers
yet, that still doesn\'t prevent us
form looking upon
and appreciating
their delicate, nature\'s Beauty..
ergo
if we suspect, we may have a weakness
to addictive things, then
we must learn, to not
create trappings, that will hinder
our freedom
refrain, from activities
that can easily become, addictive
like
playing computer games, too much
or drinking, alcohol
just because, everyone else is)
and on...
No
we can\'t change the world
or force it, to be curated
so that our life\'s can become easier to navigate
instead
we can curate, ourselves
to insure, we can survive
whatever
the world has to throw at us!
and in that, Truth
exists
the True cure, to addiction\'s
plague upon Humanity..
(but who do we have
to teach this to us, before
it\'s, Too late...
this be the curse of Fate
and limitations, to intellect
see
no one, Fckin cares
untill, it\'s Too
Fckin late..!!!)
June 30th, 2022 05:32
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