Comments received on poems by sirlocowicked AKA Bubba
🍻🍻🍺🍻 beer
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, \'alcohol\'
one of the world\'s
most devastatingly, addictive
chemicals
available for purchase, with a
\'valid\' ID card
anywhere and everywhere
yet, we outlaw cigarettes..
(but you see, dear Poet
that\'s why
depending on society, to guide us
is like
abstaining from sex
to find, righteousness:
often, one
doesn\'t necessarily, effect
the other..;
so the solution, must come
from within
Temperance, is the answer
we must strive for)
to \'know thy self\'
while humbly, accepting
that \'we know nothing, at all\'
as
in that conflicting
duality
exists, our glimpsed
Clarity...!
(we must, learn
our own, individual limitations
and search for solutions
for our perfectly fallible
natural, Failings..
and in that
we empower ourselves
to make the best of our lives:
see, while
we may have hay fever
we can learn to not smell, flowers
yet, that still doesn\'t prevent us
form looking upon
and appreciating
their delicate, nature\'s Beauty..
ergo
if we suspect, we may have a weakness
to addictive things, then
we must learn, to not
create trappings, that will hinder
our freedom
refrain, from activities
that can easily become, addictive
like
playing computer games, too much
or drinking, alcohol
just because, everyone else is)
and on...
No
we can\'t change the world
or force it, to be curated
so that our life\'s can become easier to navigate
instead
we can curate, ourselves
to insure, we can survive
whatever
the world has to throw at us!
and in that, Truth
exists
the True cure, to addiction\'s
plague upon Humanity..
(but who do we have
to teach this to us, before
it\'s, Too late...
this be the curse of Fate
and limitations, to intellect
see
no one, Fckin cares
untill, it\'s Too
Fckin late..!!!)
June 30th, 2022 05:32
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, \'alcohol\'
one of the world\'s
most devastatingly, addictive
chemicals
available for purchase, with a
\'valid\' ID card
anywhere and everywhere
yet, we outlaw cigarettes..
(but you see, dear Poet
that\'s why
depending on society, to guide us
is like
abstaining from sex
to find, righteousness:
often, one
doesn\'t necessarily, effect
the other..;
so the solution, must come
from within
Temperance, is the answer
we must strive for)
to \'know thy self\'
while humbly, accepting
that \'we know nothing, at all\'
as
in that conflicting
duality
exists, our glimpsed
Clarity...!
(we must, learn
our own, individual limitations
and search for solutions
for our perfectly fallible
natural, Failings..
and in that
we empower ourselves
to make the best of our lives:
see, while
we may have hay fever
we can learn to not smell, flowers
yet, that still doesn\'t prevent us
form looking upon
and appreciating
their delicate, nature\'s Beauty..
ergo
if we suspect, we may have a weakness
to addictive things, then
we must learn, to not
create trappings, that will hinder
our freedom
refrain, from activities
that can easily become, addictive
like
playing computer games, too much
or drinking, alcohol
just because, everyone else is)
and on...
No
we can\'t change the world
or force it, to be curated
so that our life\'s can become easier to navigate
instead
we can curate, ourselves
to insure, we can survive
whatever
the world has to throw at us!
and in that, Truth
exists
the True cure, to addiction\'s
plague upon Humanity..
(but who do we have
to teach this to us, before
it\'s, Too late...
this be the curse of Fate
and limitations, to intellect
see
no one, Fckin cares
untill, it\'s Too
Fckin late..!!!)
June 30th, 2022 05:32
Anxious !!!
Raven333 said:
I liked your poem, but it sucks that some people do that to others. really nice flow.
June 29th, 2022 18:35
Raven333 said:
I liked your poem, but it sucks that some people do that to others. really nice flow.
June 29th, 2022 18:35
Smitty!!!!
Raven333 said:
you know, I really liked this poem for the simple fact that as I was reading I felt you guys relationship. and it felt special, really close. very nice read.. God bless my friend
June 27th, 2022 17:53
Raven333 said:
you know, I really liked this poem for the simple fact that as I was reading I felt you guys relationship. and it felt special, really close. very nice read.. God bless my friend
June 27th, 2022 17:53
3000!! Days free from alcohol!
Blueledge said:
I heard someone sum it up well the other day.
\"One drink is too many but ten is not enough.\"
June 26th, 2022 02:35
Blueledge said:
I heard someone sum it up well the other day.
\"One drink is too many but ten is not enough.\"
June 26th, 2022 02:35
International balloon fiesta/Albuquerque NM
Saxon Crow said:
Sounds like an awesome spectacle.
June 25th, 2022 01:48
Saxon Crow said:
Sounds like an awesome spectacle.
June 25th, 2022 01:48
Pops
Raven333 said:
Great poem, a true tribute to all father\'s. nicely penned with a good flow.
June 24th, 2022 23:41
Raven333 said:
Great poem, a true tribute to all father\'s. nicely penned with a good flow.
June 24th, 2022 23:41
Hell
Raven333 said:
What a Powerful poem, to get that message out there and make people aware that this is happening right next door. excellent write!!!
June 22nd, 2022 18:41
Raven333 said:
What a Powerful poem, to get that message out there and make people aware that this is happening right next door. excellent write!!!
June 22nd, 2022 18:41
7 years!!
Raven333 said:
Hey Bubba, I can so identify with this poem. I had to drink every where I went. once again enjoyed the write and loving those rhymes.
June 22nd, 2022 18:36
Raven333 said:
Hey Bubba, I can so identify with this poem. I had to drink every where I went. once again enjoyed the write and loving those rhymes.
June 22nd, 2022 18:36
Dying/life
Raven333 said:
I thought your poem was very well written, I loved the emotion, the message and the rhyme.
June 22nd, 2022 14:34
Raven333 said:
I thought your poem was very well written, I loved the emotion, the message and the rhyme.
June 22nd, 2022 14:34
A.A.
L. B. Mek said:
more power to you!
stay Strong, dear poet
thanks for sharing
June 17th, 2022 04:42
L. B. Mek said:
more power to you!
stay Strong, dear poet
thanks for sharing
June 17th, 2022 04:42
Untitled
L. B. Mek said:
\'Here take This seems like *you\'re* low,
This Will help\'..
its as simple as that!!!
thank you! dear poet
for showcasing
why, taking care of ourselves
and Believing in ourselves, to Affect
and change our Circumstances
for the better
is our Only, truly
meaningful way of maximising
this gifted life...
(and the \'purposed\' self-favouriting of your poem
was a great way to demonstrate and reaffirm your message!)
June 16th, 2022 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
\'Here take This seems like *you\'re* low,
This Will help\'..
its as simple as that!!!
thank you! dear poet
for showcasing
why, taking care of ourselves
and Believing in ourselves, to Affect
and change our Circumstances
for the better
is our Only, truly
meaningful way of maximising
this gifted life...
(and the \'purposed\' self-favouriting of your poem
was a great way to demonstrate and reaffirm your message!)
June 16th, 2022 05:35
7 years!!
L. B. Mek said:
congratulations!
I like these milestone writes
you choose to share with us
I laud
the message and empowering
example, they represent
for those battling, similar
addictions..
we need all the good news, we can get
thank you! dear Poet
June 13th, 2022 06:27
L. B. Mek said:
congratulations!
I like these milestone writes
you choose to share with us
I laud
the message and empowering
example, they represent
for those battling, similar
addictions..
we need all the good news, we can get
thank you! dear Poet
June 13th, 2022 06:27
7 years!!
_lonely__side said:
It\'s commendable for sure. Strength and support to you
June 13th, 2022 02:21
_lonely__side said:
It\'s commendable for sure. Strength and support to you
June 13th, 2022 02:21
Untitled
L. B. Mek said:
if faith helps, you
dear poet, then
it is working, for you..
but
as for your cry of despair
for the plight of the covid generation
children
I agree with you, entirely!
thanks for sharing
and giving voice, to those
whose voices are so easily
disregarded
June 9th, 2022 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
if faith helps, you
dear poet, then
it is working, for you..
but
as for your cry of despair
for the plight of the covid generation
children
I agree with you, entirely!
thanks for sharing
and giving voice, to those
whose voices are so easily
disregarded
June 9th, 2022 05:00
Hell
Blueledge said:
I remember my mother doing the same. If only they cared about the damage they inflicted instead of unloading their own emotional problems
June 5th, 2022 02:08
Blueledge said:
I remember my mother doing the same. If only they cared about the damage they inflicted instead of unloading their own emotional problems
June 5th, 2022 02:08
Alcohol,!
Bragee said:
I love this and I love the ending the most.
Identify a problem and provide a solution!
#classic
June 3rd, 2022 20:51
Bragee said:
I love this and I love the ending the most.
Identify a problem and provide a solution!
#classic
June 3rd, 2022 20:51
Jack n coke
L. B. Mek said:
indeed,
\'it takes nothing to be fucking, kind\'
but
so many smile, preach
and are far, from kind..
thanks for sharing
June 2nd, 2022 04:24
L. B. Mek said:
indeed,
\'it takes nothing to be fucking, kind\'
but
so many smile, preach
and are far, from kind..
thanks for sharing
June 2nd, 2022 04:24
Jack n coke
orchidee said:
Well, I never knew this modern version of Jack and Jill!. They were sweet and innocent when they only went up that hill for a pail of water, and Jack had his mishap and fell down, with Jill tumbling after! lol. Must have stung - that binding his head with vinegar and brown paper - medieval medicine?
Erm, I will be kind, but not f**** kind!
June 2nd, 2022 02:23
orchidee said:
Well, I never knew this modern version of Jack and Jill!. They were sweet and innocent when they only went up that hill for a pail of water, and Jack had his mishap and fell down, with Jill tumbling after! lol. Must have stung - that binding his head with vinegar and brown paper - medieval medicine?
Erm, I will be kind, but not f**** kind!
June 2nd, 2022 02:23
It takes very little to change a life
Caring dove said:
A caring write .. nice words 🙂and so true !
June 1st, 2022 16:01
Caring dove said:
A caring write .. nice words 🙂and so true !
June 1st, 2022 16:01
I love 💕 you
a thousand wishes said:
All I have to say is wow... this was freaking amazing
May 31st, 2022 17:58
a thousand wishes said:
All I have to say is wow... this was freaking amazing
May 31st, 2022 17:58
My 8year soberity poem 🍻
L. B. Mek said:
Congratulations! that\'s awesome
and I laud your message\'s, willingness
to empower, another\'s fight for survival..
(and, I\'ll congratulate you
on your tenth, in advance
because I choose to believe
in You!)
stay Strong, dear poet
May 16th, 2022 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
Congratulations! that\'s awesome
and I laud your message\'s, willingness
to empower, another\'s fight for survival..
(and, I\'ll congratulate you
on your tenth, in advance
because I choose to believe
in You!)
stay Strong, dear poet
May 16th, 2022 04:54
Homeless people and homeless pets.
Saxon Crow said:
A very good poem about a subject most people ignore.
May 14th, 2022 00:31
Saxon Crow said:
A very good poem about a subject most people ignore.
May 14th, 2022 00:31
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