Comments received on poems by Blueledge



Mermaid
orchidee said:

Good write Blue.

June 19th, 2022 02:06

Mermaid
Goldfinch60 said:

Maybe that wish has come true John and that woman is real.

Andy

June 19th, 2022 00:43

Brothers
Morwenna said:

Unfair to Frank.In the original he was the victim of his thoughtless, unkind maker.

June 18th, 2022 03:18

Brothers
orchidee said:

Good write Blue lol. You know Frank?!

June 18th, 2022 01:31

Brothers
Blueledge said:

Thanks Andy.

John

June 18th, 2022 01:10

Brothers
Goldfinch60 said:

Fun words Blue, thank you.

Andy

June 18th, 2022 01:07

Half way up
sadkw33n said:

What can i say? Distractions happen. A short but interesting poem. Always happy to check your work. Nicely done.

June 17th, 2022 10:52

Half way up
L. B. Mek said:

see, I\'m all for foreplay
till
you know, we actually
begin..
lol


June 17th, 2022 04:28

Half way up
orchidee said:

Good write Blue.

June 17th, 2022 02:01

Half way up
arqios said:

And most probably halfway down, again.

June 17th, 2022 00:24

Jane
sadkw33n said:

Short and meaningful. Nicely done!

June 16th, 2022 14:43

Jane
L. B. Mek said:

if made to choose
I prefer to look upon rain
through my window, perspectives
oft, it gifts a cadence of comfort..
thanks for sharing, dear poet

June 16th, 2022 04:53

Jane
Morwenna said:

Says so much in such a short sweet way.

June 16th, 2022 02:21

Jane
orchidee said:

A fine write Blue.

June 16th, 2022 01:40

Skin
sadkw33n said:

I wish, in the future, i can find someone who will be half the man you are. Great poem.

June 15th, 2022 11:02

Skin
arqios said:

More than just smitten, sounds to be the real deal!

June 15th, 2022 04:33

Skin
orchidee said:

Good write Blue.

June 15th, 2022 02:01

A rainy day in Scotland
arqios said:

Muddy feet she shall have, after her walk... away...

June 15th, 2022 00:10

A rainy day in Scotland
Blueledge said:

Thanks Morwenna.
I moved to Bute in 2008 but returned to Devon last year. Even with the rain, I miss it.

June 14th, 2022 20:20

A rainy day in Scotland
Morwenna said:

There is so much to relate to in this poem. The situation, the jaunty way it is told. The heart AND the umbrella. I love it.

June 14th, 2022 16:10

A rainy day in Scotland
dusk arising said:

So they took your umbrella.... now dance in the rain and dance well for tomorrow the sun will shine and a sunshiney day is the time for the heart to dance on and on...

June 14th, 2022 13:43

A rainy day in Scotland
L. B. Mek said:

love, Scotland
and always admire, poetry
with a gentle lull in its flow
so relatable and well written
thank you! dear poet

June 14th, 2022 05:02

Just a normal day
Morwenna said:

Short, memorable, sweet. Thanks!

June 13th, 2022 13:29

12th December 2019
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'ve been away too long, so some of your debate re Blair and Cameron goes over my head.
But I do know Iraq was wrong , and that mass protest made SFA difference.
As for Korea, Vietnam and so on, and on - right up to today\'s conflict..... Same cast, same story.
Thanks for putting it out there.

June 13th, 2022 08:30

12th December 2019
L. B. Mek said:

(ermmm, firstly
I\'m sorry I just read your words
as few as they are, and I got triggered, evidently
I think I still need time
to get over that whole Iraq, debacle
I\'m sorry, again
if you find my tone rude
or my
overopinionated words, just wrong..
please, forgive me
if you feel I overstepped
the privilege you afford me to read and comment
on your self-expressions, artistry
I genuinely, meant no disrespect)..
if labor was in power
we may have our children
dying on Ukraine\'s soil
while we protest, impotently
at downing street
(deja vu?)
for a war, we had no business
getting involved in
so fck Blair and his twisted legacy
as soon as he joined
the eu Remain, campaign
everyone voted for leaving the EU
cos we know, \'truth\'
whatever that is, exists at the opposite
end
of whatever BS, that spineless sell-out
is trying to \'tony blair\'
(as-in literally
that\'s his name\'s legacy)...
Tory (fckrs)
at least care about themselves
so we know they won\'t fck up
their interests
at least, we can hope they won\'t
(and fyi
I support neither..
so called
political party\'s, are becoming
the Munich walls
for modernity\'s atheists, who
need something to feel
impassioned about...!
\'in my humble opinion\')

June 13th, 2022 06:21

Just a normal day
orchidee said:

Good write Blue.
You rushing home to me? Nooooo!!!!! lol.

June 12th, 2022 02:18

Mr president on the yellow brick road
orchidee said:

Good write Blue.

June 11th, 2022 02:12

Mr president on the yellow brick road
arqios said:

Loving the allusions to Oz.Thanks for sharing.

June 11th, 2022 00:49

Organ donor card
orchidee said:

Good write Blue.

June 10th, 2022 11:33

Organ donor card
spilleronsheet said:

You set a beautiful norm, a wonderful pledge gleaming with lines of gold…

June 10th, 2022 07:49

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