Comments received on poems by Blueledge
Paint
arqios said:
Often it is not the object in itself; here it is the chart greenness of eye, but the connection that it elicits. Thanks for sharing.
July 9th, 2022 20:58
arqios said:
Often it is not the object in itself; here it is the chart greenness of eye, but the connection that it elicits. Thanks for sharing.
July 9th, 2022 20:58
War
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(a thousand ships, launched
and now, Helen
be that name Immortalised
by Homer\'s tale
and all, because of Pride
dictating
that a person\'s love, or
aesthetic
lusted-after, beauty
makes
them a property, to be
fought over;
that was, millenniums ago
a Greek, king
using a thread of a story, to conquer
even more land
to evangelise, some warped
notion of legacy..
tell me, what\'s changed?
If we, but swap \'Helen\'
for \'oil\' or whatever, resource
is sought after, most
and what do we have
a threadbare, excuse
to wage a war
in the name of legacy, power
and greed...
all trait\'s we men, depend on
to validate
our warped sense of worth)
July 8th, 2022 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(a thousand ships, launched
and now, Helen
be that name Immortalised
by Homer\'s tale
and all, because of Pride
dictating
that a person\'s love, or
aesthetic
lusted-after, beauty
makes
them a property, to be
fought over;
that was, millenniums ago
a Greek, king
using a thread of a story, to conquer
even more land
to evangelise, some warped
notion of legacy..
tell me, what\'s changed?
If we, but swap \'Helen\'
for \'oil\' or whatever, resource
is sought after, most
and what do we have
a threadbare, excuse
to wage a war
in the name of legacy, power
and greed...
all trait\'s we men, depend on
to validate
our warped sense of worth)
July 8th, 2022 04:34
War
evenwheniLie said:
Actually often times it’s the women who pick these men to run their houses/homes, to run our governments and father their children, because it is said they are strong, a trait that they themselves try to manipulate to work for them. Etc
July 8th, 2022 04:34
evenwheniLie said:
Actually often times it’s the women who pick these men to run their houses/homes, to run our governments and father their children, because it is said they are strong, a trait that they themselves try to manipulate to work for them. Etc
July 8th, 2022 04:34
Many worlds
Doggerel Dave said:
Can\'t cop this - too weird for me - I find the idea of infinite space filled with foam, each bubble element a separate universe much more logical and appealing.
Shouldn\'t really be provoked - you didn\'t ask for this in your neat little write, did you....or did you? Lol
July 7th, 2022 18:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Can\'t cop this - too weird for me - I find the idea of infinite space filled with foam, each bubble element a separate universe much more logical and appealing.
Shouldn\'t really be provoked - you didn\'t ask for this in your neat little write, did you....or did you? Lol
July 7th, 2022 18:40
Many worlds
orchidee said:
Well I dunno. E.T. has gone home, but dunno where he is now! lol. He would tell us about parallel universes or not.
July 7th, 2022 02:02
orchidee said:
Well I dunno. E.T. has gone home, but dunno where he is now! lol. He would tell us about parallel universes or not.
July 7th, 2022 02:02
Many worlds
Raven333 said:
To pledge love to someone in a Multiverse.. There is no other. loved it
July 7th, 2022 01:48
Raven333 said:
To pledge love to someone in a Multiverse.. There is no other. loved it
July 7th, 2022 01:48
Many worlds
Goldfinch60 said:
The idea of parallel universes have always intrigued me Blue.
Andy
July 7th, 2022 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
The idea of parallel universes have always intrigued me Blue.
Andy
July 7th, 2022 01:13
Love
Raven333 said:
Your wife or partner must be so pleased in how you feel, So Sweet.
July 6th, 2022 23:42
Raven333 said:
Your wife or partner must be so pleased in how you feel, So Sweet.
July 6th, 2022 23:42
Love
tallisman said:
Straight forward, short and to the point! Packed a punch that could have been lost in a longer poem. Loved it! T
July 6th, 2022 01:03
tallisman said:
Straight forward, short and to the point! Packed a punch that could have been lost in a longer poem. Loved it! T
July 6th, 2022 01:03
Marcus. My flat friend
Raven333 said:
LOL, Still making me smile.. good poem about your flat friend.
July 5th, 2022 23:48
Raven333 said:
LOL, Still making me smile.. good poem about your flat friend.
July 5th, 2022 23:48
Marcus. My flat friend
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write Blue.
Yes, I thought the planet was round, then I fell off the eeeddgggeee of it! Do ya hear me falling?! lol.
July 5th, 2022 06:30
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write Blue.
Yes, I thought the planet was round, then I fell off the eeeddgggeee of it! Do ya hear me falling?! lol.
July 5th, 2022 06:30
Marcus. My flat friend
arqios said:
Too funny! Got a flat friend as well. Everybody’s got one it may be, the friendly ones that is. Thanks for sharing.
July 5th, 2022 05:38
arqios said:
Too funny! Got a flat friend as well. Everybody’s got one it may be, the friendly ones that is. Thanks for sharing.
July 5th, 2022 05:38
On being dislexic
arqios said:
If I don’t watch myself the dyslexic aspect arises, have to keep it down and out of sight. Santa’s got the market cornered, even those who publicly deny it are privately silent partners in his gig. 😂
July 4th, 2022 07:39
arqios said:
If I don’t watch myself the dyslexic aspect arises, have to keep it down and out of sight. Santa’s got the market cornered, even those who publicly deny it are privately silent partners in his gig. 😂
July 4th, 2022 07:39
Sad days
Morwenna said:
This resonates and makes me smile. And lucky you and even luckier that you recognise it. I hope you have included many people in the \'you\': i.e. it\'s \'you\' in the plural.
July 3rd, 2022 16:06
Morwenna said:
This resonates and makes me smile. And lucky you and even luckier that you recognise it. I hope you have included many people in the \'you\': i.e. it\'s \'you\' in the plural.
July 3rd, 2022 16:06
Sad days
Raven333 said:
Yes always sadness mostly but nice when there is someone there. nice write.
July 3rd, 2022 13:34
Raven333 said:
Yes always sadness mostly but nice when there is someone there. nice write.
July 3rd, 2022 13:34
Sad days
orchidee said:
Yep, I\'ll be there, but it will cause ya despair, cos I will begin to sing! heehee. Sorry about that! lol.
July 3rd, 2022 01:49
orchidee said:
Yep, I\'ll be there, but it will cause ya despair, cos I will begin to sing! heehee. Sorry about that! lol.
July 3rd, 2022 01:49
Chemistry
arqios said:
Finally we can replace that timeworn poem that goes: Roses are red.... For some things science is not required! Top idea. Thanks for sharing.
July 2nd, 2022 19:43
arqios said:
Finally we can replace that timeworn poem that goes: Roses are red.... For some things science is not required! Top idea. Thanks for sharing.
July 2nd, 2022 19:43
Fruit
arqios said:
The gravity of it all! A weight too much to bear. The fruit of Man\'s observation. Thanks for sharing.
July 1st, 2022 02:33
arqios said:
The gravity of it all! A weight too much to bear. The fruit of Man\'s observation. Thanks for sharing.
July 1st, 2022 02:33
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