Comments received on poems by Blueledge
God and osteoarthritis
L. B. Mek said:
lol
hope your prayers get answered a little quicker, cos of your kneeling behaviour
June 24th, 2022 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
lol
hope your prayers get answered a little quicker, cos of your kneeling behaviour
June 24th, 2022 03:54
Quarks and love
Morwenna said:
So clever. I\'m smiling at the use of quark terminology and also at the sentiment. Brill.
June 23rd, 2022 16:36
Morwenna said:
So clever. I\'m smiling at the use of quark terminology and also at the sentiment. Brill.
June 23rd, 2022 16:36
Quarks and love
arqios said:
There being nothing to rearrange makes for an awesome beginning. Thanks for sharing.
June 23rd, 2022 06:30
arqios said:
There being nothing to rearrange makes for an awesome beginning. Thanks for sharing.
June 23rd, 2022 06:30
Quarks and love
L. B. Mek said:
these quarks, sound qwerky
dear poet
personally, I prefer
the old school, ways
that whole routine of
\'see, stumble
fall
head over eyes
stutter
a wave, n a hello
get
ignored, walk
away
mumbling n cursing
then
turn a corner
and do it all again..
till
we find that reciprocating
partner
then hold hands, dance
in circles, singing
of serendipitous fate...\'
(what?
don\'t knock it
we\'re alive
because of it?)
lmao
if it ain\'t broke, don\'t finesse it
😂😂😂
yeah, I know I\'m not funny
makes it more hilarious for me..
lol
June 23rd, 2022 06:02
L. B. Mek said:
these quarks, sound qwerky
dear poet
personally, I prefer
the old school, ways
that whole routine of
\'see, stumble
fall
head over eyes
stutter
a wave, n a hello
get
ignored, walk
away
mumbling n cursing
then
turn a corner
and do it all again..
till
we find that reciprocating
partner
then hold hands, dance
in circles, singing
of serendipitous fate...\'
(what?
don\'t knock it
we\'re alive
because of it?)
lmao
if it ain\'t broke, don\'t finesse it
😂😂😂
yeah, I know I\'m not funny
makes it more hilarious for me..
lol
June 23rd, 2022 06:02
Sugar
Morwenna said:
Yet another smile of recognition, thank you! Except that I don\'t eat sugar in its pure form but disguise it as honey, chocolate, even dried fruit. All rather good for stress I think.
June 22nd, 2022 16:18
Morwenna said:
Yet another smile of recognition, thank you! Except that I don\'t eat sugar in its pure form but disguise it as honey, chocolate, even dried fruit. All rather good for stress I think.
June 22nd, 2022 16:18
Sugar
Raven333 said:
OMG!!! what a clever write.. I absolutely loved your poem. Thank you for sharing.
June 22nd, 2022 16:12
Raven333 said:
OMG!!! what a clever write.. I absolutely loved your poem. Thank you for sharing.
June 22nd, 2022 16:12
Sugar
JudyStella said:
It started simple and ended with a mind blowing fact! Love this! You capture such a wide area with few lines! Splendid!
June 22nd, 2022 14:08
JudyStella said:
It started simple and ended with a mind blowing fact! Love this! You capture such a wide area with few lines! Splendid!
June 22nd, 2022 14:08
Sugar
arqios said:
That last line! Really. We have gone on a no sugar diet over a month now. Of course there are cheat days but none of the sugar spiking. Thanks for sharing.
June 22nd, 2022 02:04
arqios said:
That last line! Really. We have gone on a no sugar diet over a month now. Of course there are cheat days but none of the sugar spiking. Thanks for sharing.
June 22nd, 2022 02:04
Sugar
orchidee said:
\'You\'ll get your just desserts\', they said to me, as in \'What goes around, comes around\'.
Yep, I got those desserts - strawberries and ice cream and jelly! lol.
June 22nd, 2022 01:42
orchidee said:
\'You\'ll get your just desserts\', they said to me, as in \'What goes around, comes around\'.
Yep, I got those desserts - strawberries and ice cream and jelly! lol.
June 22nd, 2022 01:42
Sugar
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Blue, so many people eat badly when stressed, I just lsten to music.
Andy
June 22nd, 2022 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Blue, so many people eat badly when stressed, I just lsten to music.
Andy
June 22nd, 2022 00:39
Mindfulness
arqios said:
There is a tinge of sadness on the one end, from the image: \"in one ear and out the other\" and a closeness of such intimacy and finally a kinda gross image of dredging an uncleaned ear canal. LOL, sorry for the active imagination, Blue.
June 21st, 2022 08:26
arqios said:
There is a tinge of sadness on the one end, from the image: \"in one ear and out the other\" and a closeness of such intimacy and finally a kinda gross image of dredging an uncleaned ear canal. LOL, sorry for the active imagination, Blue.
June 21st, 2022 08:26
Mindfulness
sadkw33n said:
That was fun to read. Nicely done. Always a pleasure to check your poems.
June 21st, 2022 05:15
sadkw33n said:
That was fun to read. Nicely done. Always a pleasure to check your poems.
June 21st, 2022 05:15
Mindfulness
L. B. Mek said:
it all
began with \'a - hey\'
so, they all say...
lol
(a fun read, quirky and
open to interpretation)
thanks for sharing
June 21st, 2022 04:08
L. B. Mek said:
it all
began with \'a - hey\'
so, they all say...
lol
(a fun read, quirky and
open to interpretation)
thanks for sharing
June 21st, 2022 04:08
Memories
L. B. Mek said:
oh no..
I\'m so sorry for your loss, dear Poet
may she rest in peace
(I was just about to say how
overtly sweet and cute this write was
assuming it was just a random love confession poem..
thank you so much for the context
I would have been gutted
if I\'d misread your words that badly)
laud your bravery, stay Strong!
June 20th, 2022 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
oh no..
I\'m so sorry for your loss, dear Poet
may she rest in peace
(I was just about to say how
overtly sweet and cute this write was
assuming it was just a random love confession poem..
thank you so much for the context
I would have been gutted
if I\'d misread your words that badly)
laud your bravery, stay Strong!
June 20th, 2022 04:39
Memories
sadkw33n said:
So sweet! I hope you\'ll have lots of beautiful memories by that time! Great job at writing this. And I\'m sorry for your loss. Stay strong.
June 20th, 2022 04:19
sadkw33n said:
So sweet! I hope you\'ll have lots of beautiful memories by that time! Great job at writing this. And I\'m sorry for your loss. Stay strong.
June 20th, 2022 04:19
Memories
arqios said:
A plural you is very heart warming and a singular is like the whole world entire between two souls. Thanks for sharing.
June 20th, 2022 01:15
arqios said:
A plural you is very heart warming and a singular is like the whole world entire between two souls. Thanks for sharing.
June 20th, 2022 01:15
Mermaid
Morwenna said:
Unless she is the kind of shark that eats tuna. I enjoyed this surreal, unexpected ending to the idlyll.
June 19th, 2022 06:16
Morwenna said:
Unless she is the kind of shark that eats tuna. I enjoyed this surreal, unexpected ending to the idlyll.
June 19th, 2022 06:16
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