Comments received on poems by Justa_Geezer
Sorry !
Raven333 said:
I loved this poem, I felt like you were talking to me. LOL
June 30th, 2022 20:24
Raven333 said:
I loved this poem, I felt like you were talking to me. LOL
June 30th, 2022 20:24
Still Looking for Love.
Justa_Geezer said:
Thank-you for your comment, This was written for a friend of mine who gave me the first line in a conversation with her. I said to her that it would make for the start of a poem, and we should both try to write one ! At the end of our chat I started writing it, using her comments as a basis for the poem, so I just adapted the comments she had made while writing it, apart from the last line which I added to make her smile ! She never wrote one herself, but she told me that it made her cry. Which then led to an apology poem to her ! (Which I have just posted )
June 30th, 2022 13:10
Justa_Geezer said:
Thank-you for your comment, This was written for a friend of mine who gave me the first line in a conversation with her. I said to her that it would make for the start of a poem, and we should both try to write one ! At the end of our chat I started writing it, using her comments as a basis for the poem, so I just adapted the comments she had made while writing it, apart from the last line which I added to make her smile ! She never wrote one herself, but she told me that it made her cry. Which then led to an apology poem to her ! (Which I have just posted )
June 30th, 2022 13:10
Still Looking for Love.
Raven333 said:
Really liked your poem, I think most people are looking for love but I do have to say made me laugh at that last line with the hair and teeth.. nice flow
June 29th, 2022 18:28
Raven333 said:
Really liked your poem, I think most people are looking for love but I do have to say made me laugh at that last line with the hair and teeth.. nice flow
June 29th, 2022 18:28
Heartbroken Poet\'s.
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll pay that one, Geez - even though I\'m past the pain caused by misery, and don\'t particularly wish to be inflicted with anyone else\'s.
Neat write, however.
June 29th, 2022 00:45
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll pay that one, Geez - even though I\'m past the pain caused by misery, and don\'t particularly wish to be inflicted with anyone else\'s.
Neat write, however.
June 29th, 2022 00:45
Like a Hardback Book !
Raven333 said:
nice read, this is true we are like reading material. life and what road we have traveled on
June 27th, 2022 21:24
Raven333 said:
nice read, this is true we are like reading material. life and what road we have traveled on
June 27th, 2022 21:24
Your value as a friend.
L. B. Mek said:
\'But collectively they\'re not *as* great as my friendship\'..
really enjoyed the strong voice in your poem
wonderfully expressive poetic confidence
thanks for sharing
June 27th, 2022 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
\'But collectively they\'re not *as* great as my friendship\'..
really enjoyed the strong voice in your poem
wonderfully expressive poetic confidence
thanks for sharing
June 27th, 2022 03:54
Your value as a friend.
Raven333 said:
I thought your poem any friend of yours would love to see, what a nice tribute. nicely penned and a very good flow
June 27th, 2022 01:25
Raven333 said:
I thought your poem any friend of yours would love to see, what a nice tribute. nicely penned and a very good flow
June 27th, 2022 01:25
ALL.
Raven333 said:
What a lovely poem you wrote, it made me smile as I was reading it. It talked true love and commitment. nicely penned
June 26th, 2022 00:02
Raven333 said:
What a lovely poem you wrote, it made me smile as I was reading it. It talked true love and commitment. nicely penned
June 26th, 2022 00:02
ALL.
arqios said:
A very effusive love that keeps giving. Such an inspiration! Thanks for sharing.
June 25th, 2022 04:59
arqios said:
A very effusive love that keeps giving. Such an inspiration! Thanks for sharing.
June 25th, 2022 04:59
Truth, Trust and Honesty.
Raven333 said:
what a nice read, and speaks the truth. so many people now I believe do not know what honesty is. wish more people did though
June 25th, 2022 00:13
Raven333 said:
what a nice read, and speaks the truth. so many people now I believe do not know what honesty is. wish more people did though
June 25th, 2022 00:13
Truth, Trust and Honesty.
tallisman said:
So true! Great rhythm and rhyming , very skilled
June 24th, 2022 14:53
tallisman said:
So true! Great rhythm and rhyming , very skilled
June 24th, 2022 14:53
MIGRAINE
L. B. Mek said:
its awful, both my sisters use to suffer from it
they still do, but have learnt to cope better
was so bad before, used to ruin whole days and weeks for them..
I\'m sorry for your suffering
thanks for sharing
June 24th, 2022 03:24
L. B. Mek said:
its awful, both my sisters use to suffer from it
they still do, but have learnt to cope better
was so bad before, used to ruin whole days and weeks for them..
I\'m sorry for your suffering
thanks for sharing
June 24th, 2022 03:24
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