Comments received on poems by lovebrigita
22.06.01 ethereal
shaa said:
Sad and depressing makes me think of all the little things we are all uncomfortable about ourselves and how they lower our self esteem đŸ˜¢
September 21st, 2022 09:39
shaa said:
Sad and depressing makes me think of all the little things we are all uncomfortable about ourselves and how they lower our self esteem đŸ˜¢
September 21st, 2022 09:39
22.05.31 hope
L. B. Mek said:
well written, but
I\'m not sure
there\'s way too many
light skinned or mixed race kids
around
for anyone to assume, different ethnicities
can\'t be attracted to each other..
lol
plus, you never know
it\'s never too late, until
its late, late...
lol
just trying to put a positivise spin on things
sorry if I come across as insensitive..
(a great read, thanks for sharing)
August 1st, 2022 03:01
L. B. Mek said:
well written, but
I\'m not sure
there\'s way too many
light skinned or mixed race kids
around
for anyone to assume, different ethnicities
can\'t be attracted to each other..
lol
plus, you never know
it\'s never too late, until
its late, late...
lol
just trying to put a positivise spin on things
sorry if I come across as insensitive..
(a great read, thanks for sharing)
August 1st, 2022 03:01
22.05.31 hope
tallisman said:
Eloquent writing, kind of sad. Thank you for sharing….
August 1st, 2022 00:50
tallisman said:
Eloquent writing, kind of sad. Thank you for sharing….
August 1st, 2022 00:50
22.05.15 i don’t care
L. B. Mek said:
of hell yeah
I know we can\'t change family
but, really
why must they be entitled
to our loyalty..
\'eventually, we all get there
that place, where we simply
don\'t care!\'
(a great write! so relatable
thanks for sharing)
July 21st, 2022 01:40
L. B. Mek said:
of hell yeah
I know we can\'t change family
but, really
why must they be entitled
to our loyalty..
\'eventually, we all get there
that place, where we simply
don\'t care!\'
(a great write! so relatable
thanks for sharing)
July 21st, 2022 01:40
22.05.15 pause
tallisman said:
We all wish for a pause or rewind button! Just enjoy the moment…… I wish I had at that age,. In many ways we worry about the future to much, inevitably it takes car of itself!
July 9th, 2022 02:42
tallisman said:
We all wish for a pause or rewind button! Just enjoy the moment…… I wish I had at that age,. In many ways we worry about the future to much, inevitably it takes car of itself!
July 9th, 2022 02:42
22.01.24 i do
L. B. Mek said:
I am always drawn to words
that utilise, children\'s
unique, perspectives
to emphasise the distance between
who we used to be
who we thought we would become
and who we are..
(a little like
our ideal of love...
we see, Spring
till we see Winter
the in-between seasons
we\'re too stubborn: to heed..)
succinct poetry, with a lot of depth
so much to unravel
and consider
I really like your \'matter of fact\' style
while still, utilising poetry\'s expressive artistry..
thanks for sharing!
June 27th, 2022 04:06
L. B. Mek said:
I am always drawn to words
that utilise, children\'s
unique, perspectives
to emphasise the distance between
who we used to be
who we thought we would become
and who we are..
(a little like
our ideal of love...
we see, Spring
till we see Winter
the in-between seasons
we\'re too stubborn: to heed..)
succinct poetry, with a lot of depth
so much to unravel
and consider
I really like your \'matter of fact\' style
while still, utilising poetry\'s expressive artistry..
thanks for sharing!
June 27th, 2022 04:06
