Comments received on poems by Kinsley Lee
The Autumn Fields
Doggerel Dave said:
The painting simple and neat. Tribute is well made in your poem - Thanks.
March 29th, 2023 19:18
Doggerel Dave said:
The painting simple and neat. Tribute is well made in your poem - Thanks.
March 29th, 2023 19:18
The Cherry’s Blooming Day at The Kyung-Eui Line Park
orchidee said:
Good write K.
March 29th, 2023 01:49
orchidee said:
Good write K.
March 29th, 2023 01:49
The History
Doggerel Dave said:
I wish I knew enough of Chinese history to be able to comment intelligibly on your piece here......but I don\'t.
Seems you focus on real estate as the core motivator in China\'s conflict? Nothing else? No exploitation by Western powers? I would be pleased if you would correct my assumptions....
March 22nd, 2023 07:51
Doggerel Dave said:
I wish I knew enough of Chinese history to be able to comment intelligibly on your piece here......but I don\'t.
Seems you focus on real estate as the core motivator in China\'s conflict? Nothing else? No exploitation by Western powers? I would be pleased if you would correct my assumptions....
March 22nd, 2023 07:51
The History
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, the older the culture
the more insidious enmity
that lingers!
while the world, strives
to move on and curate
a united, humanity
the old powers refuse, to relinquish
their stranglehold on power
and in so doing, invest
evermore, in politics that will
inevitably
hurt their own people, far more
than they dare admit, to themselves
I pray that sage of humanity\'s, philosophical Spring
Kung fu Tzu
may, yet save that lost nation once again...
(biggest misunderstanding
in the west, is that China\'s current government
is a Secular, political identity
this is wrong
modern China, is a cultist religion
where
whoever is in charge, is portrayed
as a deity
a step beyond, German and Russia\'s
socialist nationalism
China is a nation
built upon that archaic \'Slav\' ignorance
where Chinese people
need work permits, to live and work
in
the major city\'s
and are treated as second class citizens...
let alone foreigners)
March 21st, 2023 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, the older the culture
the more insidious enmity
that lingers!
while the world, strives
to move on and curate
a united, humanity
the old powers refuse, to relinquish
their stranglehold on power
and in so doing, invest
evermore, in politics that will
inevitably
hurt their own people, far more
than they dare admit, to themselves
I pray that sage of humanity\'s, philosophical Spring
Kung fu Tzu
may, yet save that lost nation once again...
(biggest misunderstanding
in the west, is that China\'s current government
is a Secular, political identity
this is wrong
modern China, is a cultist religion
where
whoever is in charge, is portrayed
as a deity
a step beyond, German and Russia\'s
socialist nationalism
China is a nation
built upon that archaic \'Slav\' ignorance
where Chinese people
need work permits, to live and work
in
the major city\'s
and are treated as second class citizens...
let alone foreigners)
March 21st, 2023 04:12
The Painting for a Hen and a Rooster
orchidee said:
A fine write and picture K.
March 7th, 2023 03:20
orchidee said:
A fine write and picture K.
March 7th, 2023 03:20
At the National Cemetery
L. B. Mek said:
\'A short day, slowly the darkness is drawing.\'
beautiful Poetry, reading these words I can\'t help
but apply it as metaphor to those gone, but unforgotten
and their legacy:
\'whose short life\'s, linger as a lasting shadow\'
affording their proud nation an anchor
for their hope\'s
despite, the folly of those
who tarnish their memories and sacrifices
in the name of short-sighted
political machinations...
this a Truism
in Dongjak-dong
as it is
in Delville Wood
as it is
in Arlington;
\'War
is young men
dying
and old men
plotting\'
.
.
.
March 6th, 2023 05:23
L. B. Mek said:
\'A short day, slowly the darkness is drawing.\'
beautiful Poetry, reading these words I can\'t help
but apply it as metaphor to those gone, but unforgotten
and their legacy:
\'whose short life\'s, linger as a lasting shadow\'
affording their proud nation an anchor
for their hope\'s
despite, the folly of those
who tarnish their memories and sacrifices
in the name of short-sighted
political machinations...
this a Truism
in Dongjak-dong
as it is
in Delville Wood
as it is
in Arlington;
\'War
is young men
dying
and old men
plotting\'
.
.
.
March 6th, 2023 05:23
To Write a Painting for Magnolia and Small Bird
orchidee said:
Good write and pic K.
March 4th, 2023 04:00
orchidee said:
Good write and pic K.
March 4th, 2023 04:00
A White Tiger in the Midst of Snow
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful painting, thanks for sharing
but you should spell it \'Tyger\'
like Blake did
\'Tyger, Tyger burning Bright!\', lol
or, even:
\'Tyger, Tyger hidden White
in that snow, steps so light
eyes, glowing focused bright
a predator\'s patience
a hunter\'s prowling, excellence
igniting, posterity\'s poetic might\'
lol
not a bad effort for a wannabe poet
March 3rd, 2023 07:24
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful painting, thanks for sharing
but you should spell it \'Tyger\'
like Blake did
\'Tyger, Tyger burning Bright!\', lol
or, even:
\'Tyger, Tyger hidden White
in that snow, steps so light
eyes, glowing focused bright
a predator\'s patience
a hunter\'s prowling, excellence
igniting, posterity\'s poetic might\'
lol
not a bad effort for a wannabe poet
March 3rd, 2023 07:24
The Tiger
orchidee said:
A fine write K.
We in the UK have William Blake\'s \'Tyger, tyger, burning bright\'. I don\'t know why it\'s not \'tiger\'. He is eccentric in some of his poems. \'The Tyger\' is one of his better poems, I think.
March 2nd, 2023 02:34
orchidee said:
A fine write K.
We in the UK have William Blake\'s \'Tyger, tyger, burning bright\'. I don\'t know why it\'s not \'tiger\'. He is eccentric in some of his poems. \'The Tyger\' is one of his better poems, I think.
March 2nd, 2023 02:34
The Tiger
David Wakeling said:
This is okay.I like the rhyme and the use of adjectives.It seems unfinished however
March 1st, 2023 17:07
David Wakeling said:
This is okay.I like the rhyme and the use of adjectives.It seems unfinished however
March 1st, 2023 17:07
The Painting of the Envoi De Fleurs
orchidee said:
Good write K. We have daffodils in the UK - St David\'s Day, March 1st (Wales patron Saint).
March 1st, 2023 03:18
orchidee said:
Good write K. We have daffodils in the UK - St David\'s Day, March 1st (Wales patron Saint).
March 1st, 2023 03:18
The Apricot Flowers and the Sparrows Welcome New Spring
orchidee said:
A descriptive write K.
February 28th, 2023 03:30
orchidee said:
A descriptive write K.
February 28th, 2023 03:30
The Apricot Flowers and the Sparrows Welcome New Spring
charles69 said:
Very nice and elegant brief poem.I am about ready for Spring myself. Hope to see other works by you in near future.
February 27th, 2023 20:09
charles69 said:
Very nice and elegant brief poem.I am about ready for Spring myself. Hope to see other works by you in near future.
February 27th, 2023 20:09
The Apricot Flowers and the Sparrows Welcome New Spring
Jane Frye said:
I love your subject matter
February 27th, 2023 19:50
Jane Frye said:
I love your subject matter
February 27th, 2023 19:50
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